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Author interview no.80 with drama / theatre writer Gary Dooley

Welcome to the eightieth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, directors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. Today’s is with drama / theatre and short story author Gary Dooley. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate the author further. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here.

Morgen: Hello Gary. I know some of this already as we go to the same writing group but please tell us something about yourself and how you came to be a writer.

Gary: Falls at the first hurdle.

Morgen: Oh dear.

Gary: I always dread being asked this question because I find it difficult to put my background into a simple narrative.

Morgen: Sorry about that. :)

Gary: On my CV I try to sell the idea of having ‘diverse experience’ – actually this is a euphemism for ‘largely random employment’. In a nutshell, I was born and raised in Staffordshire. I trained as a psychologist then moved into biotechnology research. I spent most of my research career in Australia and the USA before moving back to the UK about ten years ago. My academic research paid most of the bills, but I always lead a bit of a double life moonlighting in the theatre as an actor, director and lately as a playwright. It’s only relatively recently that I decided to take the aspects of the ‘day job’ that I most enjoyed – the teaching and the writing – and marry them with my passion for the theatre. I still do some consulting and teaching but spend most of my time nowadays writing about, and for, theatre. I set up my own small publishing umbrella – iPSO FACTO publications – to produce all my work.

Morgen: And I’ve seen one; it’s very attractive. :) Why did you opt to go down the self-publishing route?

Gary: I’ve always loved books and I was fascinated with the whole process of book production, not just the writing. I wanted to get involved with the design, the typesetting, the marketing – all of it. My experience of having some of my academic work published was that, as an author, you rarely have any control or even input into these aspects.

Morgen: That’s why I’ve decided to go direct editor / eBook route. My brother will probably tell you that I’m a bit of a control freak. :)

Gary: Also, I didn’t want to put all my energies into courting publishers as many new authors seem to do.

Morgen: And usually… I was going to say “failing” but I don’t like that word so I’ll say “being unsuccessful”, although I’m not sure if that sounds much better. Sorry, you were saying…

Gary: So I started to look at self-publishing and discovered that it offered an interesting alternative to conventional publishing. Gone are the days when self-publishing was synonymous with vanity publishing, it is now a thriving industry. If you decide to go it alone like I did, it’s hard work and can be very frustrating but ultimately it can be rewarding as well. Things are definitely changing in the publishing world and now there are options for writers other than selling your soul to get a contract with one of the big publishers.

Morgen: Indeed – and they know it. :) Are you involved in all aspects of producing your books?

I do the typesetting, book design, marketing and all the graphic design work. The only part of the process that I outsource is proofreading, I don’t think you can ever proofread your own work.

Morgen: I agree, which is where my editor comes in very handy. We email most of the time and meet up every now and then although we tend to natter about other things then. :) I’d like to pick your brains about the graphic design side… anyway, back to the interview. :)

Gary: The printing is done by Lightning Source, a print-on-demand company. Unlike some other similar companies, they are not a publisher, they just produce the books to your specifications as a publisher. Sales have been handled mostly through online retailers like amazon. So far this model has worked well for me.

Morgen: And it’s what I plan to do, although probably just eBooks rather than print versions for now. What genre do you generally write and have you considered other genres?

Gary: Drama – plays and non-fiction works about theatre and theatre history. I’m trying to move more into creative writing – I hate that phrase because I consider all writing to be creative – certainly more plays and I’d love to have a go at short stories sometime.

Morgen: Yay, do. They’re great. I started with short stories then went on to novels (which I’m either trimming to be novellas or cherry picking for anthologies) but have come full circle… back to my first love. :) What have you had published to-date?

Gary: My first publications under iPSO FACTO have been a couple of books for drama students to encourage engagement with classical theatre texts – ‘Monologue 1M’ for boys and ‘Monologue 1F’ for girls – available through all good bookstores and online retailers. Shameless plug.

Morgen: That’s OK – you’re here so people can get to you know you but also your writing.

Gary: I’ve written a number of plays but haven’t published any of them yet. They range from very short works (I think my shortest had only eight words of dialogue) to full length dramas and comedies.

Morgen: Eight words? Two words over an Ernest Hemingway story (For sale: baby shoes, never worn). How much of the marketing do you do for your published works or indeed for yourself as a ‘brand’?

Gary: I have to say that this is the part of the whole process that I enjoy the least, it’s also the part at which I’m frankly lousy. I’m trying to get better at it, but promoting my own work always makes me feel very self conscious. I wish I was one of those people who can stand up and say ‘look, I’ve done this and it’s really good’…

Morgen: I’ve found that it’s the worst thing you can do. If you want to get de-followed on Twitter then spend most of your time touting. Those that do also get shouted down on the LinkedIn forums I belong to (and probably elsewhere).

Gary: …but when I talk about my work, I tend to start by apologising for its shortcomings rather than praising its virtues. However, it absolutely has to be done, so I’m making a positive effort at the moment to get out there, tell people about my work, get it covered in the media and advertised online etc. I’ll do it because I have to but I don’t think I’ll ever truly enjoy marketing.

Morgen: I’m no sales person either but have to be realistic that I will have to start letting people know that I have eBooks out there when they’re ready but I will endeavour to stick to the 90% chat / useful info etc. vs 10% ‘pick me’. Have you won or been shortlisted in any competitions and do you think they help with a writer’s success?

Gary: In the past I’ve tended to avoid competitions because I find it difficult to think of any artistic endeavour as a competitive activity. However, I think that the publicity and exposure that comes along with winning some of these competitions can be very valuable, often much more valuable to the writer than any monetary prizes on offer. In the drama field, many of the competitions now offer production or readings as the main prizes and this can be a fantastic opportunity for the aspiring playwright. Remember that most authors only want to see their work in print, the ultimate goal for the playwright is to see their work on stage. With that in mind, I have started to enter some of my plays into competitions for the first time this year – I’ll let you know if it leads to anything.

Morgen: Yay! Please do. Always love an opportunity to say “yay”. :) Competitions successes (wins or shortlists) do enhance a CV as it’s a confirmation by those in the industry that you’re doing something write. I was told off by an agent recently for having too much on my cover letter… but then I’m involved in so many things that I didn’t think it would do any harm but I guess I just need to summarise rather than divulge. I’d not considered that they’re more interested in the writing than me. :( Do you write under a pseudonym? If so why and do you think it makes a difference?

Gary: Nope – but some years ago I started to include my middle initial to distinguish myself from another ‘Gary Dooley’ in the theatre business. Nowadays I can never quite decide whether to include it or not.

Morgen: Many American actors go for middle initials so it could be seen as very cosmopolitan. :) As you’re both in the same business it may help. It’s funny as it’s not a particularly common name (not that I’ve heard anyway). Do you have an agent? Do you think they’re vital to an author’s success?

Gary: No, I can see the advantages for some people, but it wouldn’t fit with the way I work at the moment, it’s really horses for courses.

Morgen: There really is mixed feelings over them at the moment but I dare say that if an agent approached them they’d not say “no”. :) So, being self-published, are your books available as eBooks? If so what was your experience of that process? And do you read eBooks?

Gary: I made all my recent publications available as eBooks as well as conventional books. eBooks are relatively easy to set up and it wasn’t much more work to make them available in that format. Of course, the big advantage of eBooks from an author’s point of view is that production costs are pretty much zero once the book is set up, so there is a much higher profit margin on each sale.

Morgen: Another tick in the eBook’s favour. :)

Gary: To date, only a small percentage of my sales have been eBooks;

Morgen: That’s really interesting.

Gary: I’m sure that this is partially due to the way that I am (under) marketing them.

Morgen: Ah, OK. I may need to pull my sales head on firmer than I thought then. :)

Gary: Some people love eBooks and I think it makes sense to offer your work in whatever format the consumer prefers; personally … and here’s a confession … I’ve never read an eBook, I much prefer a real live book.

Morgen: Many people do. I’m still a paperback reader although I have an eReader so that comes with me when I go away (very rarely so I’ve only had to charge it twice!). What are you working on at the moment / next?

Gary: I’m working on a teacher’s volume to accompany the two monologue books and I’m exploring the possibilities of some books aimed at getting very young children to engage with Shakespeare. With my dramatist’s hat on, I’m in the middle of a play about the ‘Golden Age’ detective writers, a murder mystery featuring Agatha Christie, Dorothy L. Sayers, G.K. Chesterton etc. I’m enjoying the challenge of using ‘real people’ as characters and I’ve developed a whole new respect for authors who can plot a good murder mystery – it’s tough!

Morgen: Tell me about it. I’ve not really dabbled in crime but having been told (by an agent at Winchester) that I should I’m seriously considering it. I’m not unintelligent but I think you do have to be very clever to write crime… and accurate. Errors will always be picked up on. You do seem very focussed, do you manage to write every day?

Gary: I try to write something every day, even if it’s only a sentence or two.

Morgen: That makes me feel better as I don’t often write other than my fortnightly writing workshop group (and projects like http://nanowrimo.org and http://storyaday.org) but I’m constantly scribbling – every dog-walking jacket has a notepad in it). What is your opinion of writer’s block? Do you ever suffer from it? If so, how do you ‘cure’ it?

Gary: There are good days and bad days. A good day is a day when I write more than I delete. My advice would be that if you have one of those days when you just can’t seem to get a word down on paper, don’t be a martyr to it – go and do something else, something fun, live a little – who knows, you may just end up doing something that will inspire you to write about it.

Morgen: Absolutely. Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?

Gary: With my plays, I do like to start out with a plot and a basic set of characters in mind but when it really works they take on a life of their own and often take the piece in unexpected directions. I like a framework, but I think that there’s a danger that over-plotting can end up limiting the possibilities.

Morgen: I agree. I’d be surprised if any author’s work has stuck exactly to their plot outline. I plotted my first novel and it vaguely followed but went in so many directions that it didn’t get as far as I had planned and by the time I’d written the first draft (53,000 words for http://nanowrimo.org November 2008) that it was right not to as it would have changed the story, and the main character, too much. Do you do a lot of editing or do you find that as time goes on your writing is more fully-formed?

Gary: I’m always editing and tweaking, for me re-writing is probably as important as writing. The real art is in knowing when to let go and admit to yourself that a work is finished. I liken it to an artist painting a picture, when do you know that a certain brush stroke should be the last one?

Morgen: But they probably want to keep going too. :) I tend to do three or four edits and call it a day. I have a relatively low boredom threshold (can’t remember the last time I was bored actually, always too busy) which is probably why I tend to read anthologies rather than novels (unless it’s a gripping novel!). What is your creative process like? What happens before sitting down to write?

Gary: I’m not sure I have anything as formal as a creative process but I do find that ideas take a long time to gestate. Sometimes the seed of an idea will be around for months, or even years, before it blossoms into a writing project.

Morgen: Wow. See aforementioned reference to low boredom threshold. :) Do you write on paper or do you prefer a computer?

Gary: Nowadays a computer most of the time, though I still use old fashioned notebooks for ideas. I’ve just re-discovered the joys of writing with an ink pen and I’m convinced that it improves my thinking as well as my writing – well, that’s my theory and I’m sticking to it.

Morgen: And I think you should. :) I can’t write with a pencil… well, obviously I can, but I don’t like to. For some writers it’s their weapon of choice but for me I think it’s the fear of it being rubbed out too easily. What sort of music do you listen to when you write?

Gary: None. I love music but find it impossible to have anything on in the background when I’m writing.

Morgen: I’m surprised by how many people have said that. I can’t have words while I’m creating words but I like classical, generally. What point of view do you find most to your liking: first person or third person? Have you ever tried second person?

Gary: This isn’t really an issue for a playwright, it’s first person all the way. A more pertinent issue for the playwright is exposition, whereas the prose author can tell you in the third person whatever they choose about a character or situation, the playwright must find a way of revealing everything through the way characters speak – it’s a real challenge.

Morgen: It is. I’ve dabbled (a one-act five-minute play and the first 100 pages of a script for NaNoWriMo’s sister organisation http://scriptfrenzy.org in April 2010). Do you use prologues / epilogues? What do you think of the use of them?

Gary: Coincidentally, I’ve just finished a play – a reworking of ‘Romeo and Juliet’ set in a care home – the first one for which I have ever written a prologue and epilogue.

Morgen: Oh wow. That sounds fun. Do you have pieces of work that you think will never see light of day?

Gary: A drawer full.

Morgen: Oh dear. Having said that, mine’s a file full. What’s your favourite / least favourite aspect of your writing life?

Gary: Favourite: the creative freedom – that sounds pompous, but it translates roughly as the opportunity to have a cup of tea whenever I feel like it. Least Favourite: the need to market myself – self promotion sends a shiver down my spine.

Morgen: Yep. Snap. :) If anything, what has been your biggest surprise about writing?

Gary: That I can actually do it and that some people actually seem to like reading it.

Morgen: :) What advice would you give aspiring writers?

Gary: I’m not sure I’d be presumptuous enough to offer advice, I’m still on a steep learning curve myself. If I’ve learned anything it’s that you have to keep moving forwards, take the knockbacks, learn what you can from them and move on.

Morgen: Absolutely. I’d say that five years down the line. What do you like to read?

Gary: Anything and everything.

Morgen: Short and simple. :) I know the answer to the first part but I’ll ask anyway… in which country are you based, Gary, and do you find this a help or hindrance with letting people know about your work?

Gary: I’m currently based in the UK but I don’t think that geographical location makes much difference these days. The majority of my book sales have come from the USA and Australia.

Morgen: A lot of my interviewees have said that (the ‘little difference’ bit). Are you on any forums or networking sites?

Gary: Forums and networking sites? You’re talking to someone who hasn’t even figured out how to use a mobile phone. You think I’m joking?

Morgen: You’re one step ahead of my mum, she doesn’t have one. And I don’t know mine all that well (but then I’ve only had it three weeks – it’s a BlackBerry by the way and I love it – so that’s a good excuse). Do take a look at LinkedIn. I joined it thinking it was very businessy but if you join one of the writing-related groups you can start and/or take part in any writing-related (and sometimes off at a tangent) discussion. Where can we find out about you and your work?

Gary: I don’t have a personal website or blog, though I probably should have.

Morgen: I’d go for the blog; they’re free but also I find them easier to update than my website (but then my website software is pretty rubbish).

Gary: I try to put information about forthcoming publications on http://www.ipsofactopublications.com. And the monologue books have their own website http://www.monologuebook.com.

Morgen: Cool. What do you think the future holds for a writer?

Gary: There are so many opportunities out there for writers – the future is limited only by your imagination – who said that? Seriously, I don’t think there’s ever been a better time to be a writer. I would suggest to any writer that they look at the possibilities – new media, self pubishing etc – there are a lot of ways of getting your work out there and finding an audience as well as the ‘traditional’ publishing route.

Morgen: My imagination is only limited by time. :( To get your own back, is there a question you’d like to ask me? :)

Gary: Never try to get your own back on an interviewer – it will always backfire. Always tell them they are the most insightful interviewer ever, it’s the best way of ensuring that your words don’t get mangled in the edit. You are the most insightful interviewer ever.

Morgen: Ah thanks, Gary (could you be ever so slightly biased?) – see you on Thursday. :)

Dr Gary Dooley has a PhD from Cambridge University and has achieved widespread recognition as an author, teacher and social scientist. He has lived and worked in the UK, Australia and the USA. In addition to his academic work, he has always maintained an active involvement in the theatre and has worked with many theatre companies around the world. As a director, his productions of classic plays, including King Lear, Othello, Measure for Measure and The Servant of Two Masters, have been widely acclaimed. He currently lives in Northampton (UK) and devotes much of his time to writing for and about theatre.

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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Author interview no.79 with novelist Gary William Murning

Welcome to the seventy-ninth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, directors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. Today’s is with novelist Gary Murning. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate the author further. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here.

Morgen: Hi Gary. Please tell us something about yourself and how you came to be a writer.

Gary: I live in the north-east of England and started writing seriously shortly after finishing sixth form college in 1985 due to ill-health. I was born with the condition called Type II spinal muscular atrophy—which basically means I have always used a wheelchair and have limited upper body strength. This together with the fact that I had been pushing myself rather hard meant that I reached a point where I just couldn’t continue with my formal education. I therefore left and, whilst recuperating, spent a lot of time reading. I’d always read, of course, but now I had much more time to explore all the various literary possibilities. I read everything from Stephen King to James Joyce, and many of these writers inspired me to write because they were so incredibly good. Some, however, inspired me to write simply because they were quite abysmal! As many of us do, I read those books and thought, “Hey, I can do better than this.” I couldn’t, of course. Not then. But once I started writing in a committed way, I gradually started to see improvement. There was no going back.

Morgen: Absolutely. It’s all about practice, and reading does make such a difference. What genre do you generally write and have you considered other genres?

Gary: I’ve tried just about everything at one time or another. I started off writing horror fiction but soon realised that that wasn’t really what I wanted to do. And, also, that it was a genre that didn’t really suit my literary ability. Horror fiction requires certain skills that I didn’t have at the time and which I wasn’t really all that inclined to develop.

Morgen: You’ve got to enjoy what you writer otherwise the reader won’t either. :)

Gary: These days, my work pretty much falls into the mainstream / literary genre, I suppose. I like to play with form, where possible, occasionally using genre motifs in a hopefully new way—but, generally, I like to write fiction that entertains and hopefully prompts the reader to stop and think occasionally.

Morgen: But not stop long enough to get distracted and move away. What have you had published to-date? If applicable, can you remember where you saw your first books on the shelves?

Gary: My first traditionally published novel, If I Never, was published in 2009 by Legend Press and my second, Children of the Resolution, was self-published earlier this year (it’s very different to my first novel and my publisher saw possible marketing problems, so I took the rather hair-raising but ultimately rewarding step of self-publishing).

Morgen: A lot of people are doing that now, including me… well, the eBook route. How much of the marketing do you do for your published works or indeed for yourself as a ‘brand’?

Gary: The first time I saw my book on the shelves was actually in a photograph. My parents had dropped by the local Borders store (the company went under not long afterwards, but I swear it was nothing to do with me!) and, expecting to find at best one or two copies of my novel buried at the back of the store somewhere, they instead were greeted with this: http://garymurning.wordpress.com/2009/09/28/borders-pulls-out-all-the-stops. You’ll note they spelt my name wrong in the display sign, but I reckoned I could forgive them that.

Morgen: Although it was pretty clear on the book jacket. :( I know the feeling (I often get ‘Morgan’) but thrilling nonetheless. Do you have an agent? Do you think they’re vital to an author’s success?

Gary: I don’t, no. I did have for a short while—for a couple of months about five or six years before I finally sold If I Never—but it wasn’t the best of experiences. He pretty much took me on because he saw something, as he would have it, “special”. I’d submitted a novel that I’d vaguely thought of as a crime novel. He then told me it was most definitely not a crime novel. What it was, he said, was a brilliant novel. I then did five redrafts in those couple of months at his request as he tried to turn it into a crime novel! Completely wrecking it (as he ultimately admitted) in the process. This isn’t to say, of course, that this one bad experience will stop me from considering working with an agent in the future. I strongly suspect within the next year or two I will probably need one. For the time being, however, I’m managing well enough. I don’t think they’re vital when it comes to an author getting published these days. There are many up-and-coming independent publishers happy to consider work submitted directly from the author. I do think, however, that as an author’s career builds, he/she can only benefit from the expertise of an agent.

Morgen: I think you’re probably right but I think the whole industry is changing because of eBooks so it’ll be an interesting time. Speaking of which, are your books available as eBooks? If so what was your experience of that process?

Gary: They are, yes. I actually had nothing to do with the whole process with regard my first novel. My publisher took care of all that. With my second novel, however, I pretty much did all that myself and it was extremely pain-free.

Morgen: Have you had any rejections? If so, how do you deal with them?

Gary: Over the years… we’re probably talking in the hundreds! I’m afraid it’s just part of the process—and I resigned myself to that very early on. The bottom line is, if you want to get published you’re going to have to suffer the rejections. It’s hard (bordering on soul destroying, at times!), but you really do have to learn to file it away and move on. (And, yes, I know there’ll be some saying “oh, yes, well, it’s easy for you to say, you’re published”—but I used to say it when I wasn’t published, for all those years when I was actually suffering the rejections.)

Morgen: It does get easier the more you get (she says at a paltry 29). What are you working on at the moment / next?

Gary: I’m currently approaching the end of a novel called The Legacy of Lorna Lovelost. I have another couple of novels to be published before this one, but I’m really looking forward to seeing what people make of Legacy. It’s a novel that’s been a joy to write. Really going to miss the characters.

Morgen: Maybe you could write a sequel or put them elsewhere? :) Readers love series.

Gary: Next on the cards is The Wisdom of Closed Worlds, a novel exploring the 1950s disability landscape in the UK. Residential care for disabled kids, that kind of thing, but in my own, inimitable style! I want to explore a teenage girl’s awakening sexuality under those conditions (some of which were frighteningly extreme and abusive). It’s quite possibly going to be my darkest work yet, in some respects, but ultimately a story of hope.

Morgen: Ooh, I love dark… and agents tell me it’s what they’re looking for. Well, three agents said “crime”. Do you manage to write every day? What’s the most you’ve written in a day?

Gary: I write every weekday, yes—but only for an hour or so. I could probably write four or five thousand words, but my daily target is a fairly reasonable one thousand words. It’s a target I am comfortable with. It suits the way I work. If I wrote more I would be concerned that the quality would suffer. I approach it like a marathon, I suppose, rather than a sprint. My projects tend to be pretty long. 120,000+ words. So I have learned to pace myself.

Morgen: Ouch. The first draft of my chick lit was 117,540 (a figure burned in my brain) which I completed for http://nanowrimo.org in November 2009. I’m not sure I could do that quantity again (especially in a month) as short appeals now but I guess if I have a strong enough storyline. What is your opinion of writer’s block? Do you ever suffer from it? If so, how do you ‘cure’ it?

Gary: I always get in trouble when I talk about writer’s block! I have very little patience with this American import, I’m afraid.

Morgen: Oh, I didn’t know it was American. :)

Gary: There have been times when writing has been difficult for me, but I would never attribute this to such a strange condition! Life sometimes gets in the way, crowds the creative process, but to speak in such terms, for me, empowers the concept, and I flat refuse to do that. It can all too easily become a way of avoiding writing, of sounding writerly without writing—and I enjoy writing too much to risk making myself susceptible to such an indistinct yet oddly infectious “disease”.

Morgen: It can, that’s very true. Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?

Gary: I used to write by the seat of my pants, so to speak! Started with the basic idea, as you say, and just let it take me wherever it wished. I found this a pretty hit and miss approach, however, and, so, these days I outline thoroughly beforehand. (Roughly, to give you an idea of just how thoroughly, my outlines usually turn out to be one tenth of the length of the completed project.)

Morgen: This seems to be the general consensus of my interviewees; a bit of both. Do you have a method for creating your characters, their names and what do you think makes them believable?

Gary: No. Or, at least, not in any organised, formulaic way. Characters tend to occur to me and I carry them about in my head for months before even thinking of putting anything on paper. This is my getting-to-know-them period.

Morgen: Who is your first reader – who do you first show your work to?

Gary: My father, usually, though not always.

Morgen: Oh great. Handy. :) Do you do a lot of editing or do you find that as time goes on your writing is more fully-formed?

Gary: I’ve been told that my first drafts often have the feel of third or fourth drafts. If I haven’t got, in my estimation, the novel 90% of the way towards being the novel I want it to be at first draft, something’s gone radically wrong. I tend to do minor edits as I go along. More proofreading, than anything else, I suppose. I write a thousand words, check it through, move onto the next thousand. Over the weekend I’ll work through the five thousand words from the week before, making only minor changes (the structural issues have usually been resolved in outline stage—so I suppose that could be thought of as the true first draft), and continue like this until I reach the end. I then take a few weeks away from it before working through it editing and correcting.

Morgen: Sounds like a good plan though. Besides when you say your projects tend to be 120,000 words it sounds like you’ve had plenty of practice. What is your creative process like? What happens before sitting down to write?

Gary: A lot. The actual writing, I suppose, makes up less than 5% of the creative process for me. I carry my stories around with me, in my head, exploring possibilities when they occur. I find this pretty vital. When I actually come to write about these characters and their lives, I want it to have the feel of something remembered rather than created. This process helps me achieve that, I think.

Morgen: It’s surprising easy it is not to know your characters inside and out. I’ve often given my writing workshop group ‘picture’ exercises alongside small blank character tables (with name, nickname, nationality, age, job, hair colour, height, favourite music / food, regular saying, relationship, children, siblings, religion, aspirations and quirks) to complete and it really helps. Even if they don’t use it all it gets them inside the character’s head. Although Lee Child doesn’t describe Jack Reacher, he must have an image of him in his head at the very least. Do you write on paper or do you prefer a computer?

Gary: Computer. It’s difficult for me to use a pen—or even the keyboard—so I use voice recognition software. An incredibly powerful, useful tool. I’d be well and truly scuppered without it.

Morgen: I used to use it (Dragon) but had the TV on which it picked up too so I switched the TV off but then found I kept on having to repeat so much that I was quicker (and I type at c. 80wpm so I was anyway) – it’s gathering dust in my loft I think now. £100 not well spent. Ouch. What sort of music do you listen to when you write?

Gary: I don’t. Apart from the fact that it can interfere with my voice recognition software, I don’t like any kind of distraction whilst writing.

Morgen: Ah yes, same problem as me with the TV.

Gary: Silence is the ideal. (I do, however, like to listen to classical music whilst editing. Liszt’s Harmonies du Soir and 6 Consolations are currently on the playlist, along with Philip Glass’s Metamorphosis.)

Morgen: Oh, I don’t know those. By name yes but… I have a lot of classical but just checked good old iTunes and have neither. What point of view do you find most to your liking: first person or third person? Have you ever tried second person?

Gary: I do have a love of the first person—primarily because, I think, I like the idea of being in the story, of actually playing a character myself. The frustrated actor in me, I suppose!

Morgen: Is there something stopping you? Maybe a local am dram to start with. :)

Gary: I do occasionally write in the third person, though. Some stories simply require it. As for the second person… yes, I have tried it! And I would advise extreme caution where the second person is concerned! At best, it can look little more than a conceit. Rarely works, in my humble opinion.

Morgen: A lot of people say that. I love doing it but yes, you’re right. It only fits a certain style of piece. Do you use prologues / epilogues? What do you think of the use of them?

Gary: Oh, yes. When the novel requires it. I’m deeply suspicious of those who say such things are “unfashionable” or find some other excuse to prohibit their use. The simple fact is, I will do whatever I think right for the novel. My latest, Children of the Resolution, would not be the novel it is without its prologue and epilogue. It’s a retrospective piece so these tools were perfect for my needs.

Morgen: That’s really interesting because a lot of people have only bad things to say about them. I used to not read them but used a prologue in one novel so I’m open to them now. Do you have pieces of work that you think will never see light of day?

Gary: Oh, let me see, about ten or twenty, yes! (I wouldn’t let them see the light of day!)

Morgen: :) They may not be as bad as you think but it sounds like you have your hands full anyway. What’s your favourite / least favourite aspect of your writing life?

Gary: My least favourite would be stopping, I think. Hand on heart, I thoroughly enjoy every aspect of what I do. Yes, there are days when fatigue kicks in and some things can be a bit of a chore, but by and large I feel blessed. I get to make up weird characters and hang out with them! How could that not be fun?

Morgen: Absolutely. I can’t understand why it wouldn’t be either but I know one of my writers finds the whole process tortuous but then she’s a poet so say no more. :) (I don’t do poetry unless I’m pressed to) What advice would you give aspiring writers?

Gary: Write. Read. Write some more. Read even more. Submit. Be prepared for rejection. And persist. Publication can happen overnight, with first novels, but this is the exception that proves the rule—and if you don’t enjoy writing for the sake of writing, it might be wise to consider trying something else.

Morgen: Here! Here! What do you like to read?

Gary: Anything that’s good, basically. Ian McEwan, some John Irving, the occasional Martin Amis, Joseph Heller, Ken Kesey, Michael Ondaatje—the list is pretty endless.

Morgen: Like the books dotted around my house. The good thing about dogs is that they don’t bring belongings with them. :) I read Ian McEwan’s ‘Comfort of Strangers’ and couldn’t get on with it; I think it would have made a better short story (although it’s a novella so not epic) but his ‘Atonement’… now there’s a great book. Are there any writing-related websites and/or books that you find useful and would recommend?

Gary: I’m on Twitter (http://twitter.com/garymurning), which I use extensively. I can also be found on Facebook. I do find them extremely important, Twitter especially. Were it not for Twitter, I think it’s fair to say I would not have built anywhere near the readership I have.

Morgen: That’s really interesting. You are prolific (I do spot you in amongst the crowd :) ) but it’s great to know that putting a lot of work in gets some rewards. :) Where can we find out about you and your work?

Gary: You can find out more about me and my work at http://www.garymurning.com.

Morgen: Brilliant, thanks Gary.

Gary is a novelist living in the northeast of England. His work, largely mainstream fiction, focuses on themes that touch us all — love, death, loss and aspiration — but always with an eye to finding an unusual angle or viewpoint. Quirky and highly readable, his writing aims to entertain first and foremost. If he can also offer a previously unfamiliar perspective or insight, all the better.

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum and you can follow me on Twitter, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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Forthcoming / ongoing writing competitions and submission opportunities

Below are details of a few more forthcoming / ongoing competitions and submission opportunities…

Coast to Coast runs poetry (50 lines max) and short story (2000 words max) monthly competition with deadline of 25th– the top four stories and eight poems are published in an anthology (presumably yearly). Post to Flat 1, 9 Wellington Street, Liverpool L22 8QL (Contact Maurice James 07780 642086).

Dark Tales Short Story runs quarterly competitions (31st January, 30th April, 31st July and 31st October). See www.darktales.co.uk or e-mail queries to competition@darktales.co.uk.

www.fanstory.com/index1contest.jsp lists ongoing competitions of which there are 50 each month! You can submit poetry and/or short stories free of charge for cash prizes! It’s an American site which sounds like fantasy but also have categories of sci-fi, humour, mystery, war, horror, non-fiction, children and ‘others’. They make their money by advertisers and membership (from $2.80 per month). Work listed is reviewed and you can review other people’s work…sounds like fun.

The Writing magazine runs a monthly competition –  see their website www.writers-online.co.uk for full details.

www.wordsmag.com/compcal11.htm lists Words Magazine short story competitions for 2011 and their guidelines.

Bi-monthly magazine ‘Kudos’ is a great source for competition and submission information. More details from www.kudoswritingcompetitions.com.

Write Link also lists forthcoming competitions – click on the following link for more details http://writelink.co.uk/res_dbmain.php?cat=competitions.

www.jbwb.co.uk/writingcomps.htm has a list of a variety of forthcoming competitions.

Should you be a gardener ‘Home Farmer’ magazine is looking for submissions, especially those of a traditional nature. Contact: Home Farmer, The Good Life Press Ltd, PO Box 536, Preston PR2 9ZY (or e-mail editor@homefarmer.co.uk). Their website is www.homefarmer.co.uk.

‘Still Crazy’ has opportunities for writers aged 50+ – see www.crazylitmag.com for more details.

For more useful stuff – take a look at this blogs ‘Useful info.‘ page.

 
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Posted by on July 30, 2011 in competitions, submissions

 

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UK-based writing events and courses

There are many festivals held in Cheltenham and http://cheltenhamfestivals.com/ lists them all.

Liars’ League run a series of short fiction readings held at ‘The Lamb’ pub in Lambs Conduit Street, London on the second Tuesday of every month. Authors write, but the stories are read by actors. It costs two pounds to get in, and everyone is welcome. Contributions (each evening has a theme) are also welcome. The downside is that contributors have to live in London but it may still be worth a visit should you be in the area. See their ‘myspace’ website page for more details (www.myspace.com/liarsleague).

The South Bank Centre has ongoing events and their ‘Literature and spoken word’ website page is http://ticketing.southbankcentre.co.uk/find/literature-spoken-word.

www.culture-england.com is the English Tourist Board’s site – do take a look at their forthcoming events.

Women’s magazine writer Joanna Barnden hosts a variety of courses around the UK – see www.joannabarnden.co.uk.

The Writers’ News magazine runs home-study courses. For a free prospectus phone 0113 200 2917, homestudy@writersnews.co.uk, or see www.writers-online.co.uk.

www.learnwriting.co.uk do weekend and 5-day courses on the Isle of Wight. Courses include screenwriting, poetry, novels and story analysis. Prices from £120 to £290 residential or cheaper for non-residents! Contact 01983 407772 (e-mail info@learnwriting.co.uk).

www.liberato.co.ukwriting courses / weekend retreats. Weekend courses run from Friday afternoon to Sunday afternoon and cost just under £200 inc. accommodation. Polstead Lodge is a small, comfortable guest house in a quiet, historic part of Suffolk (just 15 minutes from Colchester).  Polstead, in Constable country, was the location of the infamous Red Barn murder of Maria Marten, made into a Victorian melodrama.  Maria’s house and that of her murderer, William Corder, can still be seen in the village.  Groups are limited to 4 maximum, so each writer gets individual attention as well as group tutorials and discussions.  All Liberato courses include a written manuscript critique as well as one-to-one sessions really get to grips with the nitty-gritty of each participant’s writing.

Please note: No responsibility can be taken for the content of any linked sites or the accuracy or views expressed therein, and competitions that do not run etc. This post is for information only.

For more useful stuff like this – see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page.

 
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Posted by on July 30, 2011 in events, recommendations

 

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Author interview no.78 with multi-genre writer James Dorr

Welcome to the seventy-eighth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, directors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. Today’s is with multi-genre writer James Dorr. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate the author further. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here.

Morgen: Hello James. Please tell us how you came to be a writer.

James: I had originally thought of my talents as lying more in the visual arts and, in college, became art editor of the humor magazine as well as doing occasional illustration for the literary and science / engineering magazines.  However I also branched out into writing occasional articles, and, once in graduate school, I ended up doing a weekly science / humor column which led to an editorial post for an alternative newspaper, and then an arts weekly.  That led to a paying gig as a technical writer and editor, and later freelancing real estate, business, and consumer articles.  The freedom of that last phase was great, but the hand-to-mouth aspects were less so, so I traded it in for a relatively low-level non-writing job at an optometry clinic, and used my free time to get back to the more creative — and fun — side of writing.

Morgen: My goodness, what a mixture (so lots to write about :) ). What genre do you generally write and have you considered other genres?

James: I’m a little bit of a switch hitter already, but I work mainly in short dark fantasy / horror fiction and poetry with some science fiction and mystery thrown in.  Some of my best magazine sales have been to Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, for instance, and I was even a finalist for an Anthony award one year for a story I had in New Mystery.  As for science fiction, I started off as a science fiction fan so that was a natural, but I’d also discovered Edgar Allan Poe and the shadier sides of Ray Bradbury and, as time went on, my own artistic view became darker.  As for other genres, I might add that I do sometimes play with romantic elements (which isn’t so far from horror sometimes, by one way of thinking).

Morgen: Romantic horror, I like that idea. :) What have you had published to-date? How much of the marketing do you do?

James: I’ve published between three and four hundred individual pieces, short stories or poems, at this point, I think.  Possibly more if I count reprints, but after a point, I stopped really counting.  These are to all sorts of markets, of course, from the fully professional to the truly dreadful, although these do not count non-fiction work outside of my “creative” genres or earlier fan fiction / poetry done “4 the luv” only.  In addition I have one out-of-print poetry chapbook, Towers of Darkness, published as part of Nocturnal Publications’ “Night Visions” series in the early 1990s plus two current collections from Dark Regions Press, Strange Mistresses: Tales of Wonder and Romance and Darker Loves: Tales of Mystery and Regret, which are still very much available.  Also, perhaps even as you are reading this, I have a full size book of poetry, Vamps (A Retrospective), coming from Sam’s Dot Publications, of which I will have more to say in a bit.  As for the self-marketing aspect of it, it varies according to the level of publication but does appear to be more and more the coming thing, so I’m trying to learn.

Morgen: Have you won or been shortlisted in any competitions and do you think they help with a writer’s success?

James: Shortlisted plenty.  I mentioned being an Anthony finalist above, the mystery equivalent of science fiction’s Hugo, for a story called “Paperboxing Art” which is also in my Darker Loves collection.  I’ve also been a Darrell finalist (stories set in the U.S. Mid-South), a Pushcart Prize nominee, and a multi-time Rhysling poetry finalist / 2nd place / 3rd place / honorable mention, as well as having a number of  honorable mentions in The Year’s Best Fantasy and Horror, and one in Circlet Press’s Best Fantastic Erotica. :-D   And there are three that went all the way: a story, “Flying,” won the Best of the Web 1998 competition, “La Méduse” (also reprinted in Strange Mistresses) came in first in the World Horror Convention 2002 Poetry Competition, and “The Edge of the World” won the Balticon 40 Poetry Contest.  As for helping with a writer’s success, you may have noticed you haven’t heard of many of these.  Still some carry prestige among the groups they represent and, with some circumspection, any could make good resume items, not to mention that any award is a boost to morale.  Also the prize for the Balticon contest included money.

Morgen: My goodness… that puts my submission history to shame. Are your books available as eBooks? If so what was your experience of that process? And do you read eBooks?

James: The two Dark Regions collections are in trade paperback only (well, also a deluxe hardbound edition of Darker Loves), but I do have one stand-alone long story, The Garden, out in both paper chapbook and electronic form from Damnation Books.  I have, of course, had many stories and poems published in electronic magazines and anthologies, and, as I write this, I’m in process of publishing another long story, Vanitas (originally published in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine), in a stand-alone electronic edition by Untreed Reads, with possibly more coming in the future.  This too, I think, is a coming thing and, especially in terms of stories that have been published before in print but a number of years back, it’s something I may be pursuing more.

Morgen: With so much under your belt, can you remember what your first acceptance was and is being accepted still a thrill?

James: In a sense it’s almost impossible to say what my first acceptance was, but I do count a sword and sorcery story, “The Fourth Attempt,” that appeared in the long-defunct Fright Depot as my first sf / fantasy / horror / mystery genre sale that actually paid me real live money.  I received an acceptance by mail accompanied with a one dollar bill which I made a frame for and put on the wall.  (It’s still there, I think, but buried under untold other bulletin board items.)  What I count as my first professional genre sale, “The Wellmaster’s Daughter” (also in Strange Mistresses), was to Alfred Hitchcock’s and was paid by check which I Xeroxed and framed and put on the wall, while I cashed the original.  Any acceptance is still a thrill, though, and I make a point of rewarding myself with a cappuccino whenever one comes, although I’ll confess, especially in these recession-bound days of fading opportunities and lowering paychecks, that I’ve been pushing reprints harder and, since I don’t really want a strong coffee all that often, by now I owe myself several reward drinks.

Morgen: Another author I’ve interviewed said they’d framed their dollar bill payment. Mine was £10 cheque and was pretty so that’s gone in a display book. The second was an equally attractive book token but I colour copied it and put it towards the (then) latest copy of the Writers & Artists Yearbook. Have you had any rejections? If so, how do you deal with them?

James: The other side of the writing game coin.  Of course I’ve had — and still have — many, many rejections.  They don’t feel nice, but it passes.  With some pieces I’ll have already decided on second-choice markets, so those go right out again.  Others I may think about for a while, being especially alert to any new anthologies they might seem fitted for, at the same time seeing what other stories I might send to the markets that just rejected me.  (To be sure, I’ll cross some off my list when I’ve been turned down enough that it doesn’t seem worth while chasing them further — sometimes a given editor’s tastes and mine will just differ — but I’m also constantly on the lookout for new, untried markets to send to.)

Morgen: I think what you say is the best thing to do with rejections. Don’t dwell and just resubmit. I learned of http://duotrope.com recently and it’s great for finding markets (I’d also recommend http://jbwb.co.uk and then http://womagwriter.blogspot.com for women’s magazine submission info). Do you manage to write every day? What’s the most you’ve written in a day?

James: My “dirty little secret” is that I’m really quite undisciplined so, no, I don’t really write every day. That doesn’t mean I’m not plotting things in my head, or taking notes, or writing snippets of stories or poems on the backs of envelopes — shopping lists too.  I even have a pad and pen on my night table for jotting down things that I might think of just before going to sleep.  For actual writing though, rear on the chair and hands on the keyboard, I like to have a space of at least several hours ahead of me so I’ll have time to procrastinate, make false starts, etc.  As for the most I’ve written in a day, I’ve often completed two and three-thousand word short stories in a sitting, but the record is probably about 7000 words.  I should mention also that not everything a writer does is actual writing so, on days when I might not be working on writing itself, I might be reading proof sheets, or dealing with editors, or submitting or planning places to submit work to, or even doing my taxes.

Morgen: Wow, if you’re not disciplined I wonder what your output would be if you were. :) What is your opinion of writer’s block? Do you ever suffer from it? If so, how do you ‘cure’ it?

James: Is that a fancy name for procrastination?  I do that, certainly.  But I don’t know really because I’m not that sure what writer’s block is — that is, I do get tired at times, for instance,  even feel temporarily burned out, but that could apply to any profession.  I do have trouble getting ideas too, at any time, which is why some of my work may seem a little quirky now and then, usually a symptom of not having a good idea at the time, so I had to make do with one a better writer than I might have chosen not to touch.  But even then I find picking up something else to do for a while can help, in my case often playing music (I lead and play tenor in a Renaissance recorder consort) or going for a walk.

Morgen: Renaissance… mmm… I’ve heard agents saying they want historical fiction. :) Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?

James: Both.  I think as time has gone on, I’ve moved more and more toward getting an idea and running with it, but that’s because I’ve been developing skills for doing more of the work in my head and not having to think as consciously about what will come next.  Also, though, I’ve been tending more toward short shorts and flash fiction, which aren’t going to take as much formal plotting.

Morgen: They aren’t, isn’t that great? :) If anything, what has been your biggest surprise about writing?

James: That people are willing to read and even pay me for what I write?  But then I did a lot of grunt writing in my editing and freelancing days where it was easy to see that that kind of output served a purpose.  Someone has to explain the new computer program or how the latest mortgage works.  Or even whether the latest movie is any good.  So is it so strange then that someone might want to read my latest fiction (although, unfortunately, not usually be willing to pay nearly as much to do so)?

Morgen: I like that; ‘grunt writing’. What advice would you give aspiring writers?

James: Persevere.  Persevere.  Persevere.  Also stretch yourself and, even if what you come up with sucks (can I use that word?), think of it as a learning process.  The more you write, the better it should get.  Also read, and not just in your genre, or just current writers.  I count as my influences Aeschylus, Sophocles, and Euripides  (that is, the Ancient Greek tragedies –  which are great for stealing from for horror writers!) along with Edgar Allan Poe, Allen Ginsberg and Bertolt Brecht along with Ray Bradbury, and I won’t even talk about Chaucer and  Shakespeare.  Also read nonfiction, biographies, travel books, books for research both for current projects and simply to file in your mind for future projects (speaking of that first Alfred Hitchcock’s sale, which came out of leftover research about deserts that I’d had to do for a different story), or just serendipity (also learn big words — no, I really mean it, words are your tools and you should learn to love them).

Morgen: Absolutely. A successful writer is one who didn’t give up. What do you think the future holds for a writer?

James: Who can say?  Remember that films are written, ultimately, by writers; computer game scenarios are created by writers; even song lyrics are written by writers, whether they themselves realize it or not.  So I think there always will be writers, and a need for them in one form or another — in nonfiction, printed newspapers may give way to informed blogs, but that’s still writing, as are the instruction books would-be bloggers need to read to get themselves started.  The only thing is — and this is a universal too — except for a few very good, very lucky stars, it doesn’t pay much.  Even Shakespeare got his real paychecks as an actor-producer.

Morgen: Another stable profession. :) Are there any new projects or anything else you’d like to mention?

James: While we’ve been discussing primarily fiction, one aspect we haven’t said too much about yet is poetry, so let me first mention that my newest book, Vamps (A Retrospective), has just been listed for July by Sam’s Dot Publishing.  This is an 84-page collection of poems about vampires and vampire-associated lore, approximately a third of which consists of previously unpublished material, with illustrations by artist and fellow poet Marge Simon.  Then, for a bit farther in the future, I’ve been having discussions with a publisher about a possible novel made up of individual stand-alone segments — somewhat like Bradbury’s The Martian Chronicles or Christopher Barzak’s The Love We Share Without Knowing — that add up to a larger story set in the “Tombs,” a huge necropolis and its environs on a far-future, dying Earth (several Tombs stories have been published alone as short fiction already, as a sort of preview, including some in my Strange Mistresses and Darker Loves collections, though not all of these would necessarily  be in the novel too).  And then for the even farther future, I’ve been kicking around some thoughts about combining elements from both these projects — vampirism entered into an exhausted, dying Tombs-like world, perhaps — along with my Towers of Darkness chapbook that I mentioned before, but whether this would be poetry or prose, or possibly some combination of both, I don’t know yet. Other than that, as I’ve said before I’ve been making an effort to get more of my older work, ten or twenty or more years back, republished as well as continuing to write new stuff — so perhaps another poetry book, say, in the next few years?  Or maybe another prose collection, as well of course as continued outings in magazines and books (a new short short, “The Glass Shoe,” just published this month in Pink Narcissus Press’s Rapunzel’s Daughters and Other Tales was mentioned by title in Publishers Weekly), so for information on my latest doings, plus occasional free sample poems or stories and even a movie review or two, please check out my site at http://jamesdorrwriter.wordpress.com and, if the spirit moves, feel free to linger, explore a bit, and comment and / or recommend it to others.

Morgen: Yes, please do. Thank you James. :)

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum and you can follow me on Twitter, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 29, 2011 in ebooks, interview, novels, poetry, Twitter, writing

 

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Useful writing info. (competitions & submissions etc.): Short stories

Every fortnight I provide my writing group with handouts of useful stuff like competitions to enter, websites to visit etc. and I thought I’d share them with you. Here are the short story-related ones (see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page for more)…

Competitions

  • A free entry monthly short story competition: winners are published in one of our collections of short stories – details see http://www.openingeditions.co.uk/#/fiction-authors/4550912811.
  • http://www.brightoncow.co.uk has two new competitions: “The first is free to enter and is titled ‘Summer Loving’. This is for fiction 500 to 1000 words, with three £10 prizes and the deadline is 31st July. The other is an open themed fiction competition. 3000 word limit and the prizes are £100, £50 and £25 as well as the shortlisted stories to be published on our site. This one costs £4 to enter (deadline is 31st August).”
  • http://unboundpress.com/competitions/2011-unbound-press-competitions/2011-unbound-press-flash-fiction-award has a deadline of 1st August. 500 words maximum. £5 fee.
  • The Manchester Fiction Prize 2011 will award a cash prize of £10,000 to the writer of the best short story of up to 3,000 words, open internationally to both new and established writers aged 16 or over. The story can be on any subject, and written in any style, but must be fiction and new work, not previously published, or submitted for consideration elsewhere during this competition. See http://www.manchesterwritingcompetition.co.uk/fiction/he for details. The deadline for entries is 5pm (UK time) on Friday 12th August 2011.
  • For Books’ Sake and Pulp Press:
competition to find the best pulp fiction written by women.
Deadline 15th August. http://forbookssake.net/for-books-sake-pulp-press-want-you
  • New Eastbourne Writers 2nd National Short Story Competition.
Theme: Lucky Break. Maximum Length: 1500 words
Prizes: £100, £50 and £25; website publication of winning entries
Fee: £5 per entry/£7 for two.
Closing date 27th August. Judge: Vanessa Gebbie (who I met recently at Winchester) http://www.neweastbournewriters.co.uk
  • http://www.aestheticamagazine.com/submission_guide.htm provides details of the Aesthetica Magazine’s artwork/photography, fiction and poetry comp; deadline 31st August.
  • The Write Place Open Short Story Competition
also has a closing date of 31st August. Submit: Short story, open themed, 1,500 words max.  Fee £4.50 per entry, (optional one page critique £4.50) Prizes: 1st £100, 2nd £75, 3rd, £50.  Entries to Francesca Burgess, 34 Capelands, New Ash Green, Longfield, Kent, DA3 8LG. Make cheques payable to ‘The Write Place’. 
More information at http://www.thewriteplace.org.uk or email f.capaldi.burgess@btinternet.com.
  • Once every quarter, CheerReader has a short story competition. The maximum story length is 2500 words, and you can write about any subject genre you like, but it has to be amusing, witty, funny, or whatever other word you may care to choose. See http://cheerreader.co.uk/Competitions.aspx for full details. The next deadline is 31st August.
  • The Wellington Town Council Short Story Competition 2011 is open to all. Max 4,500 words. Closing date 31st August. Entry fee £3, prizes £150, £100, £75. http://www.wellington-shropshire.gov.uk – go to the home page and scroll down for rules and entry form.
  • http://www.brightoncow.co.uk – see above (31st August).
  • The Short Story website is designed to showcase the best short stories from around the world. The idea is simple. Submit your story and you will automatically enter The Short Story competition. First prize: £300, second prize: £150, third prize: £50. The winners will be published on the website (http://www.theshortstory.net). Deadline for submissions 15th September.
  • Short story competition: First Prize £500 (approx. 812 US$; 573€) Second Prize £150 (approx. 244 US$; 172€) Third Prize £50 (approx. 81 US$; 57€) Winners and shortlisted stories will be published in an anthology. Our short Story judge is Paul McDonald. Closing date: 30th September and costs £7.50 (12.50 US$; 9€) to enter. Details www.ruberybookaward.com.
  • 1st October is the deadline for http://spillinginkreview.com/competitions/2011-spilling-ink-fiction-prize. Prizes are £500, £250 and £125. Entry fee £5. Max 3,000 words.
  • 28th October is the deadline for www.avogel.co.uk/story/enter.html although you can submit any time. Entry is free and prizes vary from £100 to £500. Thanks Denny for the info.

Submissions

  • Bound Off is a great free podcast that pays $20 per short story accepted which you can either record yourself or they would have an actor/actress to do it (I think it would be great to hear someone else read my story). I’ve submitted (and been rejected) a couple of times but they only take 2-3 stories a month so think it’s just a case of keeping going. They used to take submissions by email but now have to be sent via the http://www.submishmash.com website and not until after the summer (1st September). Bound Off’s website is http://boundoff.com.
  • I had an email from Patrick Hollander of the Hollander Literary Agency to say they are looking for short stories of any genre to pass on to publishers. Submission by email only please to phollander6@gmail.com. 1. Use Word.doc format only. 2. Maximum 25 pages. 3. Name & Address, email address, Title, Genre should appear on the front page. 4. The story should finish with the words – End of story. 5. Please allow 12 weeks for us to read submissions. 6. No communication will be entered in to unless we feel there is potential in the story but we will offer advice where we feel it is needed. 7. Communication will be to the email shown on Page 1 of the submission. Thank you for your attention to this matter.” It sounds genuine but you may wish to tread carefully nonetheless.
  • Iota welcomes submissions of short fiction in any genre, including life writing and memoir. “Please send short stories of between 2000 and 6000 words. All stories must be the original work of the author. We accept translations as long as they are identified as such. All work must be typed and double spaced. Please also send proposals (150 words) for features or essays. We also accept new fiction, biography and life writing for review, and copies should be sent to the Fiction Reviews Editor at the address below. Please email submissions and proposals to fiction@iotamagazine.co.uk.” Closing date for submissions to the third fiction & non-fiction issue is 31st July (and I assume every four months thereafter). See www.iotamagazine.co.uk/Submissions.html.
  • Paraxis is a new online publisher of short stories. We relish fiction with elements of the strange, uncanny or fantastic. We will be featuring new stories, reprints, artwork and essays. http://www.paraxis.org.
  • Shortbread is an online community of short story readers and writers, free to join. See http://www.shortbreadstories.co.uk.
  • Short Story Submission Guidelines for The Fiction Desk can be found at www.thefictiondesk.com/submissions/short-story-submission-guidelines.php.

Websites

  • Me and My Short Stories – Harper Collins Digital Director Scott Pack (who I pitched to in February 2011 and was lovely) :) reviews short story collections at: http://meandmybigmouth.typepad.com/shorts.
  • The Short Review – each monthly issue of the short review brings you original reviews of new, not-quite-so-new and classic collections and anthologies, written by reviewers many of whom are also short story writers themselves and who love short fiction. http://theshortreview.com/index.html.
  • On 25th March 2011, short story writer Sally Quilford created Anti-Conning Writers Day, in which she highlighted the pitfalls and scams that part new (and not so new) writers from their hard-earned cash. You can read Sally’s views on dodgy agents, publishers, competitions and writing services by visiting http://www.sallyquilfordblog.co.uk (which is well worth a visit anyway) and clicking on the Anti-Conning Writers Day link at the top of the page.
  • The New Writer’s Prose & Poetry Prizes 2009 judge Vanessa Gebbie (who I met recently at Winchester) appears in the latest list of 12 of the best British short story writers – see www.booktrust.org.uk/show/feature/Home/British-short-stories-booklist.
  • http://www.flashfictiononline.com is a 500-1000 word site that is free to subscribe / read, free to submit to (http://www.flashfictiononline.com/submit.html, although they’re currently closed while wading through their slushpile). Payment is via donations with 60% going to the author and 40% going to the site so there’s no way of knowing how much (if anything) you’d earn but another opportunity perhaps.

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Useful writing info. (competitions & submissions etc.): Poetry

Every fortnight I provide my writing group with handouts of useful stuff like competitions to enter, websites to visit etc. and I thought I’d share them with you. Here are the poetry-related ones (see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page for more)…

News

  • The Poetry Book Society is one of the casualties of the Arts Council cuts, losing the £111,000 it received this year. The Poet Laureate Carol Ann Duffy is clearly angry: “This news goes beyond shocking and touches the realms of the disgusting. The PBS was established by T S Eliot in 1953 and is one of poetry’s most sacred churches with an influence and reach far beyond its membership. This fatal cut is a national shame and a scandal and I urge everyone who cares about poetry to join the PBS as a matter of urgency.” You can sign a petition to Save the PBS here: www.petitiononline.co.uk/petition/save-the-poetry-book-society/2631.

Competitions

  • Free to enter, Alfred C. Carey Prize in Spoken Word Poetry, top prize: $300 http://bit.ly/peEdPI. The deadline is 15th August.
  • Lorca Translation Competition – Writers are invited to submit an original translation of a Lorca poem of their own choice. The winner will receive £500 and the runner-up £200; a pamphlet will be published of short-listed entries. Entries must be of unpublished verse translations of poems by Lorca into English. The maximum length is 80 lines. You may enter as many poems as you wish, accompanied by the appropriate entry fee. The entry fee is £5.00 for the first poem; £3.00 each for second or additional entries. Writers under 21 years old can enter free of charge. Closing date 19th August 2011 (a very good date – my birthday :) ), the 75th anniversary of Lorca’s death (oh, maybe not). Details from http://lorcainengland.org/index.html.
  • Delhi London Poetry Foundation: 
free to enter international competition in English and themed.
Closing date 21st August.
Top prize £1000 + publication.
 http://www.siddhivinayaksavesmumbai.com.
  • The Aesthetica Creative Works Competition has three sections: Art & Photography, Poetry and Fiction. Winners and finalists are published in the Aesthetica Creative Works Annual. Winners of each category receive £500 prize money plus other prizes. Entry to the Creative Works Competition is £10. The entry fee allows the submission of 2 images, 2 poems or 2 short stories. The deadline for submissions is 31st August. The guidelines for submission can be found online at http://www.aestheticamagazine.com/submission_guide.htm.
  • Check out all the current UK poetry competitions at http://www.poetrylibrary.org.uk/competitions.

Events

Submissions

Websites

  • MyOwnVerse is a network to share and discover poetry:
http://myownverse.com
  • Active indie publisher Indigo Dreams Publishing have recently released several poetry collections including Fixing Things by Roger Elkin, A Slither of Air by Alison Lock and Whale Language: Songs of Iona by Angela Locke. They have also published Roselle Angwin’s novel Imago after the previous publisher went into receivership. Imago’s outline: It starts out innocently enough: a late summer party on a Devon riverbank, a full moon. But two things happen as a result of that night: Annie’s husband is killed, and the ‘accident’ jolts her into a 700-year-old ‘memory’ that will take her to the Pyrenees and the inferno at the heart of the Cathar inquisition, into a turbulent love affair, and towards another encounter with death. Details of all of these and more at www.indigodreamsbookshop.com. They also have an exciting future list which includes collections from Char March and Ann Pilling.

For more information like this (not just this genre) – see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page.

 
 

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Useful writing info. (competitions & submissions etc.): Novels

Every fortnight I provide my writing group with handouts of useful stuff like competitions to enter, websites to visit etc. and I thought I’d share them with you. Here are the novel-related ones (see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page for more)…

Competitions

  • Earlyworks Press Memoir & Journalism Competition:
a story from your or your family’s experience or a journalistic piece on a current event or issue in the news. Max 2000 words.
Closing date 30th August.
Fee: £5 per entry. 
Prize: 1st £100, 2nd £50 runners up £10
Email entry and PayPal payment via the website or entry fees as cheques (made out to Kay Green) with paper copy to Earlyworks Press, Creative Media Centre, 45 Robertson Street, Hastings Sussex TN34 1HL.
Don’t forget to include contact details, inc. email if possible. Their website is http://earlyworkspress.co.uk.
  • Nemesis Publishing 
Free to enter debut novel competition
Closing date 14th August – see http://nemesispublishing.com.
  • http://unboundpress.com/competitions/2011-unbound-press-competitions/2011-unbound-press-best-novel-award has a 1st September. First 10,000 words of novel. £20 fee.

Submissions

  • Independent publisher Indigo Dreams are always on the lookout for quality work and are particularly seeking novels and non-fiction with a USP (unique selling point). Full details of how to submit at http://www.indigodreams.co.uk.
  • Rickshaw Publishing is “on the hunt for quality submissions to entertain and enthral our in-house team. So all you unpublished wordsmiths out there: fire up you Interweb machines, read our submissions policy and get sending. We’re looking for authors that show bags of potential – without necessarily having a finished book – but please think how to give your projects the best chance of getting picked up.” http://www.rickshawpublishing.co.uk/?q=node/57.
  • Creative Print’s Unpublished Fiction Authors Print Ready Competition ends on the last day of the month in which that genre appears: AUGUST 2011 Women’s Fiction, SEPTEMBER 2011 Crime, OCTOBER 2011 Humorous and Comical, NOVEMBER 2011 Novellas (any genre), DECEMBER 2011 Young Adult & Teen Fiction, JANUARY 2012 Science Fiction, FEBRUARY 2012 Historical and Mythological, MARCH 2012 Westerns, APRIL 2012 Horror and the Supernatural. This is a genuine, no fee competition that stretches over 12 months. Each month a different genre; each month a winner. Winners are offered a contract, paid royalties, and receive full promotion and marketing strategies. This is not a competition with prizes. There is no entry fee. Only Print Ready novels of genuine merit will be chosen. Your book could be a winner. Full details of rules, genres and how to submit, on our website http://www.creativeprintpublishing.com/publishing/competitions.php. In my opinion this sounds like a calendar-led slushpile but I may be wrong.

For more information like this (not just this genre) – see this blog’s ‘Useful Info.‘ page.

 
 

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Author interview no.77 with suspense & fantasy writer Darren Kirby

Welcome to the seventy-seventh of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, directors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. Today’s is with suspense / fantasy author Darren Kirby. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate the author further. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here.

Morgen: Hi Darren. Please tell us something about yourself and how you came to be a writer.

Darren: I always like to give people a laugh and tell them that I’m weird and proud of it!

Morgen: Weird is great, I love weird. :)

Darren: I think normal is good sometimes, but being abnormal from time to time is good.  And it works really well if you want to be a writer!  I’ve dreamt about being a writer for years, since I was just a boy.  Unfortunately, I was too afraid to do anything about it – too afraid that I couldn’t do it, or that no-one would like what I wrote.  Eventually, the dream got the best of me, and here I am working feverishly on my first novel, “Coordinates For Murder”.

Morgen: I was going to say that you’re lucky, knowing what you wanted to do from an early age but that may be more frustrating than, like me, only realising a few years ago what I wanted to do with my life, and now live and breathe it. What genre do you generally write and have you considered other genres?

Darren: I don’t think that I have a specific genre yet that I prefer to write in.  Right now, my first novel will be in the Suspense category, but I’ve also got an idea for a Fantasy series as well as a series based on a popular television series.  I would love to explore other genres, even if I’m the only one who read what I wrote.  Probably would avoid romance, but one should never say never!

Morgen: Romance is popular but really an author should only write what he or she wants to (otherwise it’s bound to come across in their writing). I’d toyed with the idea of doing Mills & Boons (as many authors probably have, it being seen as ‘easy’, which it really isn’t) but I’m not that kind of writer. I was recently told by an agent that I’m “a crime writer and should write crime”. With a definitive dark side, I didn’t need to be told twice. :) How much of the marketing do you do for your published works or indeed for yourself as a ‘brand’?

Darren: Presently, I’m just marketing myself and my forthcoming novel.  I’ve got the usual suspects for online marketing: Facebook, Twitter, blog, Goodreads, etc.  Additionally, I’ll be doing some “real world” marketing, at least locally.

Morgen: Ooh great. I hope that goes well. A tip I heard a while back from an author was if you spot one doing a book signing go up and chat to them even if you don’t want to buy their book. They’d rather be talked to than left alone, although think twice if all you want to do is ask the way to the toilet as I know one has been asked at a conference! I mentioned agents a moment ago, do you have an agent? Do you think they’re vital to an author’s success?

Darren: Agents are one of those things that are in major flux right now in the publishing industry.  The traditional agent model is going to be a dwindling set, in my opinion.  Instead, the new agent model will be one that addresses the author more than ever, seeking to maximize the author’s potential in a variety of formats, not just books.  I think the vitality question is answered on a case-by-case basis, as what works for me may not work for the next person.  And that’s as it should be – nobody wants cookie-cutter books, right?

Morgen: Unless you’re a chef. :) Will your books be available as eBooks? If so what was your experience of that process? And do you read eBooks?

Darren: I am planning to offer my books as ebooks first, with print books next in line, followed by audiobook versions as well.  Wearing my marketing hat, it only makes sense to hit the largest potential audience that I can.  I know people that read ebooks and love them, others that still love the print book, and still others who listen to audiobooks the vast majority of the time.  Why would I choose to alienate a segment of my readership, especially since it’s so easy to hit all of these relatively easily?  I highly recommend that an author go through the process of getting their ebook/pbook/abook together at least once, just so they understand the process.  Once you know that, you’ll know what is possible and what isn’t, and at that point you can effectively partner with someone else who can handle those aspects, if you want to go that route.

Morgen: I love audiobooks. They’re great for when I walk the dog / to work and have waded through the writing-related podcasts I subscribe to. I have one book ready to go as an eBook but have often heard that you shouldn’t just put one up (although this is a writing workbook rather than fiction) because if someone likes it and there’s nothing else for them to buy, they’ll move on. What are you working on at the moment / next?

Darren: I’m presently working on my first novel, “Coordinates For Murder”.  I’ve already got the sequel in the works, as well as book #3 in the series.  Also, I’m slowly putting together a unique world for my Fantasy series.  Did I mention that I have ZERO problems coming up with story ideas?  Pages and pages of them!  I love my brain!

Morgen: Me too. I love my brain, that is… and have more ideas than time (helped by over a dozen display books filled with newspaper cuttings). Do you manage to write every day? What’s the most you’ve written in a day?

Darren: No, and I’m such a slouch!  I need to be writing nearly every day, but lately I haven’t been – life has been getting in the way.  I’ve managed to crank out pages of material in hours, but I don’t like the quality.  I need things to stew a bit in my brain before they live on paper, and this is before I put on my editors cap.

Morgen: Ah but you’re getting it down/out. As the saying goes, you can’t edit a blank page and you never know if you come back to it later it may not be as bad as you think (or it might be but by then you’ll have forgotten the meaning behind it and it’ll be easier to pull apart). What is your opinion of writer’s block? Do you ever suffer from it? If so, how do you ‘cure’ it?

Darren: Some days I think it’s a myth, other days I think it’s managed to wrestle me to the floor and handcuff me!

Morgen: I like that image. :)

Darren: The thing that seems to work for me is just to get writing the first sentence, then the next one, and then the words start to flow a little more freely.  I guess that’s the “push through” method!  LOL

Morgen: One of the exercises I often set for our Monday night writing workshop are sentence beginnings (I’ve posted loads at http://twitter.com/sentencestarts – sorry, quick plug :) ) and whilst they work for me, one of my writers, Denny, said they’re her least favourite task and that struggles with them, although she usually comes out with a great end result! Do you plot your stories or do you just get an idea and run with it?

Darren: Up until tackling my first novel, I never plotted out my stories, which were all short stories.  Then I tried doing my novel for a first-go-round like this, and things quickly got bogged down.  I’ve since tried using the Snowflake Method for handling a novel, and I think I’ve fallen in love with it!

Morgen: I interviewed poet Chris Ringrose recently (for my podcast – details at http://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/bwt-podcast) and he mentioned the Snowflake Method which I’d not heard of before and I’ve been hearing it a lot since then. :) I’ve gone the route you’ve gone, short stories then novels and whilst I’ve enjoyed doing them (three for http://nanowrimo.org and one and a half in between) and plan to do NaNoWriMo every November I can, I’ve gone back to my first love and plan to put anthologies out as eBooks before / instead of the novels. We’ll see how that goes. Anyway, I’m rambling. You were talking about the Snowflake Method.

Darren: It has helped me tremendously with developing better characters, making sure that my story line doesn’t get too off topic, etc.  In fact, I’m blogging about each of the steps on my blog, http://darrenkirby.blogspot.com.  I really think that there is some great information with the method, even if you only use part of the ideas Randy offers.

Morgen: You mentioned characters, how do you create your characters, their names and what do you think makes them believable?

Darren: What makes a really believable character is understanding as much about them as possible.  If you, as the writer, know everything there is to know about them, then you can write them as authentic, real, believable, three dimensional people.

Morgen: I totally agree.

Darren: For example, in my first novel, I know my characters’ parents, what they do, where they went to school, if they have any significant others (or not), what they like, love, dislike, loath, what their current job is, what aspirations they have, and so on.  This is what makes great characters, the nuances.  It’s what makes people different from each other – the nuances!

Morgen: Very thorough. :) Who is your first reader – who do you first show your work to?

Darren: Well, I think it will probably be my wife.  She’s waiting until I finish the whole novel before she reads it, but the little bit that she’s read so far she really likes.  After that, I’ve got a few people that will read it for errors, continuity, etc., so those would be next.  After that, it’s out to the world!

Morgen: Continuity; the joy of the novel. And the joining of threads by the end. That’s what I love about the short form… less of it! :) Do you do a lot of editing or do you find that as time goes on your writing is more fully-formed?

Darren: I do some editing along the way as I write, but I definitely need at least a second run-through to clean up more things.  I don’t anticipate that this will change, although it would be nice if the editing portion took less and less time, as that would mean that I’m getting better and better at working things out in my head first.

Morgen: I think two edits is pretty good going. I do about four on average but a recent interviewee put his in the twenties! What is your creative process like? What happens before sitting down to write?

Darren: Lots and lots of mental energy expended!  Plus, a lot of pre-writing: plotting, character development, different story lines/threads.  After putting in hours on these things, then it’s time to make things live on paper.

Morgen: And the fun starts. :) Do you write on paper or do you prefer a computer?

Darren: Absolutely the computer.  I think I would quit being a writer after a day if I had to use paper.  Too many mistakes!

Morgen: Do you have pieces of work that you think will never see light of day?

Darren: Probably.  However, you can never know.  I guess it depends on how dark/weird/bad the piece is.  Again, never say never.

Morgen: That sounds then like you have nothing so far that you’ve not done something with, that’s promising. :) What’s your favourite / least favourite aspect of your writing life?

Darren: I absolutely love coming up with ideas to explore!  I mentioned earlier that I have pages of ideas, and that keeps growing each week.  I will have no shortage of story ideas to keep me busy for more than my one lifetime.  This is definitely the most enjoyable part.  I’m least happy with my lack of time spent in the chair – actually sitting and writing the dang thing.  At least I’ve got control over that one, which is nice.

Morgen: You have but as you said, I think we all know how ‘life’ takes over. If anything, what has been your biggest surprise about writing?

Darren: The biggest surprise has been that others actually like what I’m writing about.  It’s really a neat kick to know that someone else could identify and enjoy what I wrote.  It’s a special connection that is really cool.

Morgen: Isn’t it just. My writing group have said that my writing’s the best it’s ever been and I do feel that I’m at a stage know where I know what I’m doing which is great, but I just need to get “writing the dang things” and sending them out again. :) What advice would you give aspiring writers?

Darren: Write, write, and then write some more.  And definitely read, especially genres and authors that are outside your comfort zone.  Also, find more local authors – these are gems just waiting to be found.  Some of the best books I’ve ever read were done by authors that live within 2 hours of me!  Who would have thought that possible?

Morgen: That’s great! I know a few local authors and have enjoyed what they’ve written and it does make it special to be able to discuss it with them face-to-face. What do you like to read?

Darren: Plenty of different things: suspense, thrillers, techno/sci-fi, mystery, some non-fiction as well.  I’ve even read a chick-lit book!  And I’m not ashamed to say that I liked it.  Okay, maybe a little embarrased, but it was a fun read!

Morgen: Chick lit’s fun. And I think it’s important to have a mix of light and dark (I read crime too) to keep yourself balanced. In which country are you based and do you find this a help or hindrance with letting people know about your work?

Darren: I live in the United States, in the state of Wisconsin.  Living here I think is a double-edged sword – we’ve got technology up the whazoo…

Morgen: I like that. :)

Darren: …but that just makes it harder to connect with my target audience.  Marketing is a thankless, never-ending job.

Morgen: It can be, yes, but necessary and rewarding when it goes somewhere. Where can we find out about you and your work?

Darren: You can read about me and my upcoming novel at my blog site:  http://darrenkirby.blogspot.com.

Morgen: What do you think the future holds for a writer?

Darren: Writers today have so many options available to them that weren’t possible just 10 years ago.  Now is the time to take advantage of things!  We will see more and more people making a successful career out of writing, no matter where in the world they are.  It used to be that one would be concerned with just their home country, but now I can have sales of my novel in the U.S., Europe, Japan, Australia, and a host of other countries.  Authors can truly be international bestsellers, and they can do it easier and faster than ever.  It’s an exciting time to be an author!

Morgen: I totally agree and it’s got agents and publishers on the hop, which makes a change for the authors to have more control (which definitely suits me). Is there anything else you’d like to mention?

Darren: I can’t wait to publish my first novel, and I hope that I can do this full-time very soon.  It’s just so much fun!

Morgen: Isn’t it great! I don’t think there’s anything quite like it, for me anyway, and yes, I’d love to write full-time but bank manager wouldn’t approve just at this moment. :) Thanks Darren for taking part and do let me know how it all goes.

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Transcription of Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast episode 016 (Dec 2010) – historical

The sixteenth episode of the Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast was released on 6th December 2010 and the content has never been released other than website links (on my website http://www.morgenbailey.com) so I hope you find this information useful. In the first fifteenth episodes (see http://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/bwt-podcast for earlier blog posts), I covered ‘show not tell’, the five senses, repetition, points of view, tenses, dialogue, characters, crime, poetry, short stories, novels, writing for children, scriptwriting, comedy, romance and chick lit, erotica and ‘writing rules’. This episode had a focus on historical fiction and the classics.

Overview

Wikipedia’s section on historical novels (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Historical_novel) explains that the historical novel “a novel that has as its setting a period of history and that attempts to convey the spirit, manners, and social conditions of a past age with realistic detail and fidelity (which is in some cases only apparent fidelity) to historical fact. The work may deal with actual historical personages…or it may contain a mixture of fictional and historical characters”. Historical fiction may centre on historical or on fictional characters, but usually represents an honest attempt based on considerable research (or at least serious reading) to tell a story set in the historical past as understood by the author’s contemporaries. Those historical settings may not stand up to the enhanced knowledge of later historians.

Wikipedia also has sections on historical whodunnit (Ellis Peters’ Cadfael and Umberto Eco’s ‘The Name of the Rose’ are prime examples), historical romance (Georgette Heyer’s regency-set books are usually in this category…Mills & Boon also have a ‘regency’ series), alternative history (‘alternate history literature asks the question, “What if history had developed differently?” Most works in this genre are based in real historical events, yet feature social, geopolitical, or industrial circumstances that developed differently than our own. While to some extent all fiction can be described as “alternate history,” the subgenre proper comprises fiction in which a change or point of divergence occurs in the past that causes human society to develop in a way that is distinct from our own’) and historical fantasy (many of which are set overseas, Guy Gavriel’s books are set in Renaissance Italy, Byzantine Greece, Moorish Spain, Medieval Occitania and Viking England).

Examples of historical novels are Kate Mosse’s ‘Labyrinth’ which was written in 2005 but set in both the middle ages and present-day France. Likewise, Philippa Gregory’s 2002 novel ‘The Other Boleyn Girl’ (made into a film in 2008) was about 16th Century Henry VIII’s complicated love life. Kazuo Ishiguro’s 1989 novel ‘The Remains of the Day’ was set in 1956 with 1930s flashbacks and many of crime writer Sally Spedding’s books are set in present day and in historically darker times. Closer to home, Judith Allnatt’s first novel ‘A mile of river’ was set in 1970s England. So, the bottom line is that a historical novel doesn’t have to be set centuries ago but just not in the present day. Be careful though…things change so quickly (especially products) that you have to be careful about getting your facts right.

Classics are historical to us but they were written about the, then, present times. These include works by Jane Austen, who in just four years wrote Sense and Sensibility (1811), Pride and Prejudice (1813), Mansfield Park (1814) and Emma (1815). Northanger Abbey and Persuasion were both published after her death in 1817, and she died before completing her last, eventually titled Sanditon.

  • http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jane_Eyre is packed with adaptations, list of characters, plot etc. Many classic novels are made into television series or films and often many times over – Jane Eyre was made into 8 silent movies, 6 musicals and nearly 20 TV/movie versions!
  • And who can forget (if they’ve seen the film) Colin Firth’s Mr Darcy (which, coincidentally, the Daily Mail gave away on DVD recently…as part of a series of 12 classic films)?
  • Charles Dickens’ 1843 novella ‘Christmas Carol’ has been made into over 70 stage, radio and tv adaptations (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_A_Christmas_Carol_adaptations).
  • Going back a bit is Shakespeare (1564-1616). Regarded as the greatest writer in the English language and he was certainly prolific…38 plays and many poems including 154 sonnets.
  • Going back even further are classic classics! Typing in ‘classical fiction’ in Wikipedia’s search and you get http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Classics…Greek fiction! There’s a link on this page which takes you to ancient literature (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_literature) which goes back to 24thc B.C.!

Modern day classics…. how recent can a classic be? I know I harp on about Wikipedia but it’s a fantastic site. Their ‘modernist literature’ page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Modernist_literature) lists Virginia Woolf, T. S. Eliot, Gertrude Stein, H.D., Ezra Pound, Mina Loy, James Joyce, William Faulkner, Ernest Hemingway, Franz Kafka, Robert Musil, Joseph Conrad, Andrei Bely, W. B. Yeats, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Luigi Pirandello, D. H. Lawrence, Katherine Mansfield, Jaroslav Hašek, Samuel Beckett, Menno ter Braak, Marcel Proust, Mikhail Bulgakov, Robert Frost and Boris Pasternak as modern classic authors. Postmodern literature is used to describe certain tendencies in post-World War II literature and details are found on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Postmodern_literature.

Hints & tips

The book ‘Writing historical fiction’ by Rhona Martin explains that “there are many different kinds of historical novel – the family saga, the romance, the nostalgia novel, the adventure story, the ‘straight’ historical and many different ways of approaching them. But however you may choose to handle your theme it is essential that the novel is well-constructed and believable, with a strong sense of period and a storyline which keeps the reader turning the pages.” Rhona’s book includes the:

  • process of researching…my copy of Rhona’s book is dated 1988 so there is no mention of the internet. However there are other tips. Rhona said that research is like an iceberg…only the tip must show but the rest of it lurks invisibly under water has to be there to support it. If it isn’t, the whole thing sinks and your effort will be wasted. Don’t worry about over researching. If you don’t use a piece of research in one book or story, it could be used in another piece. How do you decide what is or isn’t relevant? Ask yourself if it carries the story further; if it doesn’t it is better left out. Research can include anything for instance clothing – what colours were available to the man in the street? Historically, dyes were extremely expensive to make and were the traditional colours of royalty. Pre-internet, Rhona suggests going to the library or museums or buying books on the era that you writing about. She also mentions that many universities and other educational bodies offer weekend seminars on history. You can also, of course, watch films of the period which comes in handy with…
  • effective use of dialogue and language…no-one in ‘Pride and Prejudice’ is going to say “yeah, innit” and in the 16th/17th centuries, land-owners were likely to use a language different to their farmhands and men to women. Whilst only men could legally own money, the girl of independent spirit could only let off steam behind the scenes and had get her own way by underhand methods.
  • the ‘structuring and crafting of your work’ section includes ‘the opening’, ‘keeping the pages turning’, ‘structure and working methods’, ‘bringing it to life’ and ‘getting it right’.

There are hints and tips in Rhona’s book from leading historical novelists including Rosemary Sutcliff (Wikipedia’s page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosemary_Sutcliff is a very interesting article/biography about this English author), Winston Graham OBE (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Winston_Graham) most famous for his Poldark series and Jean Plaidy (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean_Plaidy – born Eleanor Alice Burford) who had sold 14 million books by the time of her death (1993 – at sea, somewhere between Greece and Egypt!). Eleanor chose to use various names because of the differences in subject matter between her book – under the pen name ‘Victoria Holt’, she sold 56 million books(!) and 3 million as ‘Philippa Carr’. Rhona also touches on the categories within the genre, namely: romance, hot historical/bodice ripper, blockbuster (250,000 words), big adventure, family saga, straight historical and the nostalgia novel. She also goes through the whole getting published route. Thereafter is what to do if you get rejected but more positively, follows the subjects of sequels and writing full time.

Publications

  • ‘Writing historical fiction’ by Rhona Martin (mentioned above) by A&C Black is part of a series. Other titles include ‘Writing Crime Fiction’ by HRF Keating, ‘Writing a Thriller’ by Andre Jute, ‘Writing Science Fiction’ by Christopher Evans, ‘Writing for radio’ by Rosemary Horstmann, ‘Research for Writers’ by Ann Hoffman and ‘Word power – a guide to creative writing’ by Julian Birkett.
  • ‘Bernard Cornwell’ (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bernard_Cornwell) has written nearly 50 novels, most of them about his character Richard Sharpe (played by on TV by British actor Sean Bean). He says, and Rhona agrees, when writing historical fiction, one main thing to be careful of is to write in the manner of the time, especially with dialogue. This is where research comes in. Unless you read a lot of historical fiction, you need to ensure that everything you write fits into the era. I remember one of my school play competitions, Oscar Wilde’s ‘The Importance of Being Ernest’ (which is set in the late 1800s), where we came second because the judge said that one of our actors was wearing a digital watch! I know it’s not the same as writing but you still need to check and double-check for inaccuracies. Again, this is where an Editor or Agent would come into play but you still want to get it as accurate as you can before getting to the submission stage.
  • Needless to say there are hundreds of history reference books on the market, these include ‘The strange laws of Old England’ by Nigel Cawthorne, Hutchinson’s Pocket ‘Chronology of World Events’, Faber’s ‘Book of London’ and Philip’s and Brockhampton’s books of ‘World History’ and then there’s ‘The English Family 1450-1700’ by Ralph A Houlbrooke (published by Longman).

Websites

  • http://www.historydirect.co.uk sells books, audiobooks and DVDs from many eras including topics of general history, pre & ancient history, AD-1100AD, Medieval, 16thc, 17thc, 18thc, 19thc, 20thc, World War 1, WW2, military history, genealogy, natural history and even crime & investigation!
  • http://www.historical-fiction.org.uk also sells historical books by author and title.
  • The Historical Novel Society (http://www.historicalnovelsociety.org) claims to be ‘the best place to find out about new historical fiction’. The Society, formed in 1997, promotes all aspects of historical fiction and provides support and opportunities for new writers, information for students, booksellers and librarians and is a community for authors*, readers, agents and publishers. *Clicking on the website’s ‘authors’ link takes you to a list of over 150 authors registered with the site – including the Jacqui Bennett Writers Bureau (mentioned in handout 7) and ‘Historical Romance UK’ which is a blog (http://historicalromanceuk.blogspot.com) for lovers of historical romance and written by HR authors. In case you’re wondering what a ‘blog’ is exactly (and that included me at the time!) Wikipedia explains…” A blog (an abridgment of the term web log) is a website, usually maintained by an individual, with regular entries of commentary, descriptions of events, or other material such as graphics or video. Entries are commonly displayed in reverse chronological order. “Blog” can also be used as a verb, meaning to maintain or add content to a blog. Many blogs provide commentary or news on a particular subject; others function as more personal online diaries. A typical blog combines text, images, and links to other blogs, web pages, and other media related to its topic. The ability for readers to leave comments in an interactive format is an important part of many blogs. Most blogs are primarily textual, although some focus on art (artlog), photographs (photoblog), sketchblog, videos (vlog), music (MP3 blog), audio (podcasting) are part of a wider network of social media. Micro-blogging is another type of blogging which consists of blogs with very short posts. As of December 2007, blog search engine Technorati was tracking more than 112 million blogs. With the advent of video blogging, the word ‘blog’ has taken on an even looser meaning of media where the subject expresses opinions or simply about something.”
  • http://www.histfiction.net contains a comprehensive list of historical fiction authors including Colleen McCulloch (of the Thorn Birds fame), Bernard Cornwell, Philippa Gregory, Patrick O’Brien and more. The home page is rather messy but probably only because it’s packed with so much information!
  • http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/1359 details a guide to the best historical novels and tales and many are downloadable from this site free of charge. Project Gutenberg is a collection of spoken books which have been compiled by voluntary narrators. Their site is http://www.gutenberg.org/wiki/Main_Page.
  • BBC’s history section (http://www.bbc.co.uk/history) which “is dedicated to bringing history to life, for the casual browser and the total enthusiast. Experience history through animations, games, movies and virtual tours, or delve into more than 450 feature articles by leading writers.” It includes topics on ancient history (Anglo Saxons, Egyptians, Romans, Greeks, Ancient India, British Prehistory etc.), British History (Normans, Tudors, Abolition, Victorians etc), World Wars (one and two) and Recent History (Sept 11, Falklands, Northern Ireland and Iraq). It also has an ‘on this day’ section where you revisit historical events on the current day or select particular days/months. Their ‘Resources’ section includes listings on history TV and radio programmes, interactive content, British timeline (chronological summaries of key events) as well as an A-Z on historic figures (selected short biographies) and history for kids pages. Finally, their ‘Practical History’ area has details on archaeology, family history and history trails. That should keep you going for a while!
  • http://www.bartleby.com is another book selling site and claims to be “the preeminent internet publisher of literature, reference and verse providing students, researchers and intellectually curious with unlimited access to books and information on the web, free of charge”.

IDEAS

Here I give you a couple of story ideas or ways to get new ideas then list seven sentence starts picked from my http://twitter.com/sentencestarts Twitter page; each one, if you’d like to use them, for a daily writing project.

  • Take a modern story, one you’ve written or know well, but set the characters in a certain time in history – how would they cope? Would they know about the era? How would the people around them react to them?
  • Do the same for a classical or historical story and set the characters in present day – how would they react; to modern technology, for instance?

And today’s sentence starts…

1. The stretch limo pulled into the gravel drive…

2. “Safety is our number one priority, Mr Houdini.”

3. George had been waiting for an opportunity like this for years…

4. Clark’s hand quivered as he touched her skin…

5. “Please don’t leave,” Rhoda begged her…

6. “Could you be any colder?” Ryan growled…

7. Andy pulled at his ear lobe…

The podcast concluded with News & Feedback, On This Day in History and two Fibonacci poems.  I first heard about Fibonacci in one of Judith Allnatt’s (http://judithallnatt.co.uk) tutorials and, whilst I don’’t write much poetry, it’s one that even I don’t find too taxing. As good old Wikipedia’s page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fibonacci_number) explains it’s based on a mathematical sequence where the first two Fibonacci numbers are 0 and 1, and each subsequent number is the sum of the previous two, i.e. the sequence starts 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13 and so on. The poems are based on the numbers as syllables, but obviously you can’t have a word with zero syllables so it would start at 1. Here are two examples…

  • Slug / snail / spider / inch by inch / they crawl over me / until I scream “please let me out!”
  • Pete / the / dragon / had a cold / As he sneezed the flames / faltered at the back of his throat

That’s it. Thanks for getting this far – a list of the other transcripts and summaries can be found at http://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/bwt-podcast

 

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