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Guest post: ‘Technique Is Part of a Poet’s Voice’ by poet Phillip A Ellis

Tonight’s guest blog post, an extra to the normal three a week schedule, on the topic of poetry techniques is brought to you by poet and interviewee no.55 Phillip A Ellis.

Technique Is Part of a Poet’s Voice

When you hear that every writer must, at some point, develop their own voice, you may be wondering what that means, and what it entails. There are a fair few elements to a writer’s voice, and to a poet’s voice, and I am going to talk about one of them: technique.

A poet’s technique is, at its simplest, the poet’s command of their poetry’s technical aspects. That is, all the nuts and bolts that work to make a poem a poem. Rhythm is one. The ways a metaphor is structured, but not what the metaphor says, is another. As is the degree to which the metaphor integrates with others.

A poem’s sense of musicality is another element of technique. The degree to which it aspires to the condition of music, partly through rhythm, partly through patterns of sound, is part of the element of technique.

In a sense technique is the technical elements of a poem, what can be learnt and practised, and what can more easily be mastered than can diction, or tone, or narrative distance. But knowing what is covered by technique is one aspect of the matter.

The techniques of poetry can vary from poet to poet, and from poem to poem. The best poets tend to vary their technique. So that their best poems tend to be ones where technique works in concord with the other elements. So that there is, as it were, a sense of harmony even when the poem is not harmonious.

For example, the technique used by T. S. Eliot in The Waste Land is in harmony with the sense that the poem consists of a mélange of disconnected voices. That there is chaos in the world, and that the world has lost its meaning and unity. Compare this poem with his Four Quartets and you can see shifts in the technique employed, so that the latter poems are, on the whole, more unified, helping to convey their religious worldview.

As a result, particularly when it comes time to revise your poetry, you need to develop and exercise your technique. Some poets I know argue that what a poem is saying is paramount, so that they tend to focus on that, rather than technique, and it shows in the sparsity of their voice, and a tendency towards a less-developed technicality. Others, such as myself, see the need for both elements such as voice and images, and the technical aspects to work more harmoniously. As a result, in my best poems, there is the illusion of a transparency that reveals, on analysis, a greater sense of the poem’s sense of technique.

I would like to quote some of my work, to reveal this, but I invite you to look elsewhere online. Searching for “Phillip A. Ellis” is easiest, since it is my preferred name, but you will see that I write rhyming verse, free verse, and formal unrhymed verse among others. Having this variety is part of my emphasis on technique, after all, since I want to excel in as many poetic forms as is possible.

Yet, given that technique is part of a poet’s voice, and given that it can be learnt from practice and example, it should be easy to realise that there are aspects of being a poet that make poetry a craft, something that can be learnt, as well as an art, something requiring a degree of talent. And if you can master enough technique to write passable verse, you have the start of a gift, a gift that can bring joy to friends and family.

So, if you’re thinking of becoming a poet, or becoming a better poet, look towards practising your technique. You can do so by reading poetry, and writing poetry, and it means you’ll become a better writer in the long run.

Wow. Thank you Phillip!

Phillip A. Ellis is a freelance critic and scholar, and his poetry collection, ‘The Flayed Man’, has been published by Gothic Press. Gothic Press will also edit a collection of essays on Ramsey Campbell, that he is editing with Gary William Crawford. He is working on another collection, to appear through Diminuendo Press. Another collection has been accepted by Hippocampus Press, which has also published his concordance to the poetry of Donald Wandrei. He is the editor of Australian Reader, Melaleuca and Breaking Light Poetry Magazine.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please” (while quietly bouncing up and down in my seat with joy!).

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with Pete Morin – the two hundred and second of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at Smashwords.

 
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Blog interview no.201 with writer Ann Pietrangelo

Welcome to the two hundred and first of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, biographers, agents, publishers and more. Today’s is with memoir novelist and spotlight no.25 Ann Pietrangelo. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further.

Morgen: Hello (again) Ann. Please tell us something about yourself and how you came to be a writer.

Ann: I came to writing rather late in life, at the urging of my husband. What began as a dabble into the world of blogging quickly morphed into serious territory.

Morgen: I know that feeling. What genre do you generally write and have you considered other genres?

Ann: I freelance on a wide variety of subjects, but health has been my focus. I don’t mind research and am open to whatever topics my clients request.

Morgen: A client’s dream by the sound of it. What have you had published to-date? If applicable, can you remember where you saw your first books on the shelves?

Ann: My first book is a memoir, “No More Secs! Living, Laughing & Loving Despite Multiple Sclerosis”.

Morgen: I like the play on words. Is your book available as an eBook? If so what was your experience of that process? And do you read eBooks?

Ann: In addition to paperback, my book is available in eBook format for Kindle and for Nook. It can also be read via free apps on other mobile devices. And speaking of Kindle, I am crazy about mine! I received it as a gift a year ago, and I’m hooked. It’s easy, convenient, and practical. I still adore printed books, but I don’t believe it’s an either / or thing. If you love reading, having more options is a good thing, right?

Morgen: Absolutely. There are several discussions on this topic on LinkedIn and I always say they both serve a different purpose. I read a paperback around the house but eReader (actually on my laptop) when I go away (which is rarely so it’s paperbacks in the main). Do any of your books have dedications? If so, to whom and (if appropriate) why?

Ann: Yes, I have a rather long dedication for my book. I thanked each of my three children for their support and encouragement. I always believed I was supposed to inspire my kids, but it turns out that I am inspired by them. I acknowledged a writer friend, Steve Williams, who helped by keeping me on task and on schedule. I also gave a heartfelt thanks to my loving husband, who has seen me through so much and allowed me to write about our life together.

Morgen: :) I really like your cover, who designed it?

Ann: My husband, Jim, is a web professional and handled the cover design. We came up with the concept of a pair of legs with high heels and a cane because it would illustrate so well what the book has to say about the on again / off again nature of relapsing / remitting MS.

Morgen: What are you working on at the moment / next?

Ann: I’m working on my first work of fiction, something I’ve long dreamed of doing, and I’m beyond excited with my idea and with the process.

Morgen: I love fiction. Actually the only non-fiction I write are articles about writing, maybe that’s all I know. :) Do you manage to write every day? What’s the most you’ve written in a day?

Ann: I do write every day because it’s how I earn a living. It’s not all exciting, but it’s certainly interesting. Now that I’ve begun the novel, I need to work on scheduling time for it each day without burning myself out.

Morgen: It doesn’t need to take much; 300 words is a 100,000 book in a year. Have you ever received feedback from your readers?

Ann: Yes, I’ve been blown away by the response to the book. Apparently, I touched a nerve and people seem to understand and appreciate my efforts. I can’t begin to tell you how gratifying that is.

Morgen: I can imagine. My books have only been up three weeks and every purchase / review notification I get from Smashwords is a thrill – I sit and clap. :) Do you write on paper or do you prefer a computer?

Ann: If I had to use paper, I’d never get anything done. I don’t know how authors ever managed without computers!

Morgen: I learned on an electronic typewriter with carbon paper, I wouldn’t want to go back to that now. Some writers like quiet, others the noise of a coffee shop etc. Do you listen to music or have noise around you when you write or do you need silence?

Ann: I cannot listen to music while I work because I end up singing and unable to concentrate. I prefer silence or low background noise. I love when the weather permits open windows and I can listen to the birds outside.

Morgen: If anything, what has been your biggest surprise about writing?

Ann: That I’m doing it at all, and that I’ve managed to turn it into a full-time gig in my 50s. Will wonders never cease!

Morgen: Well I’m hoping to do the same in my mid-40s (next year) so I may come to you for some tips. :) What advice would you give aspiring writers?

Ann: First, call yourself a writer. Say it. Believe it. Be it. Then be stubborn about it. You are a writer – not because someone pays for your work, but because it is a part of you that won’t be stifled. This isn’t a job for those who aren’t fully committed to the idea. When the powers that be say “no,” you’ve got to figure out how to get around them.

Morgen: Find the right person for the right thing. Are there any writing-related websites and / or books that you find useful and would recommend?

Ann: I’m a member of the American Society of Journalists and Authors (http://www.asja.org), and I get a lot of practical information there.

Morgen: Ah yes I’ve heard of them. We have a couple of equivalents (at least, I’m sure) http://www.swwj.co.uk and http://www.bajunion.org.uk. Are you on any forums or networking sites? If so, how invaluable do you find them?

Ann: I’m active on Facebook, LinkedIn, Twitter, and Google+. It’s interesting. I’d probably enjoy a little Facebook time no matter what my career, but if not for writing, I most likely would not be much of a social networker. I’ve found this to be the best way to reach my audience – online and eBook readers.

Morgen: I feel the same but yes, boy do they eat time. Where can we find out about you and your work?

Ann: My main website is AnnPietrangelo.com. If you don’t find what you’re looking for there, there’s a handy contact form. My husband designed the site and I’m proud to show it off.

Morgen: :) It’s very simple and ‘clean’, I like that. Some sites try too hard (she says hoping she doesn’t mean her own). What do you think the future holds for a writer?

Ann: These are confusing and interesting times for the writer. Traditional publishing is shrinking and it’s more difficult than ever to break in, but self-publishing, particularly for eBooks, is booming. The writer shoulders increasing responsibilities for publishing and marketing, but also has more control and can possibly earn more in royalties. I imagine there will be many more changes in the next few years and I, for one, am excited about the possibilities.

Morgen: Oh me too, I can’t wait. :) If you could have your life over again, is there anything you’d have done differently (writing-related or otherwise)?

Ann: Most definitely. I’d have allowed myself to pursue the writing dream earlier.

Morgen: Yep ditto. Had I realised (earlier than my late 30s that it’s what I wanted…want to do). Is there a question you’d like to ask me? :)

Ann: Not ask you – tell you. You are doing quite a service by promoting authors the way you do. I believe in thanking people who do good things, so thank you, Morgen.

Morgen: Oh you’re so welcome. I really enjoy doing what I do (or I wouldn’t do it, I guess) and of course it gives me blog content and I’m hoping an audience for my books too… so a win-win. :)

Ann Pietrangelo is the author of “No More Secs! Living, Laughing & Loving Despite Multiple Sclerosis“. Making peace with multiple sclerosis, surviving triple-negative breast cancer, and continuing to pursue a career as a freelance writer … well, let’s just say she’s fairly stubborn and doesn’t lack a sense of humor. A member of the American Society of Journalists and Authors, her writing covers a wide range of topics for sites all around the web. Ann and her husband, Jim, are partners in WebCamp One LLC, a full-service website development company. Not every couple can manage to live and work together, but these two seem to thrive on it. “No More Secs!” Is a poignant and often humorous memoir chronicling their experiences with midlife, marriage, and multiple sclerosis. Ann is currently working on a novel.

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know. :) You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks at Smashwords.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :) on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays.

 

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