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Guest post: Don’t Get it Right, Get It Written by Sue Welfare

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the art of writing is brought to you by murder mystery & commercial women’s novelist Sue Welfare.

Don’t Get it Right, Get It Written

This is the mantra I have tattooed on the inside my eyelids.

One of the things that I hear time and time again when I talk to would-be writers is,  ‘I’d really like to write, but I just don’t know where to start.’ The simple truth and the most useful advice I can give is you can start anywhere.  It doesn’t matter where you start just take that leap and get going on your story.  You can always and almost always will go back and edit that opening into something more interesting or compelling, or mysterious. So when you start just imagine those first few sentences as the bridge that will take you into your story.

Choose your favourite pen and a lovely notebook or open up a new page on your screen and just write. Don’t edit, don’t look at the red wiggly lines under the misspellings or cross out stuff – just write – anything and everything is just fine, because this is a for-your-eyes-only copy.

No one else will get the chance to judge your poor grammar, your weak sentence structure, your lousy spelling or the fact that your ideas have not come out in any thing like a logical order, nor that you have dropped doughnut jam on a good bit half way down the first page <writer pauses to lick off > And when it comes to making judgements about your writing, at this stage that means YOU too. On this first journey through the first version don’t get in your own way. Switch off that critical inner voice.  Tell the voice I told you it was okay, no, really – and just keep on writing.

Editing comes next – and for me is about delivering the clearest most readable version of that thought you had in your head.  But unless you have something down on the page you haven’t got anything to deliver – so write – And then when you’ve have enough -  be it ten minutes or two minutes or two hours, go back and start the process of shaping what you’ve written into what it is you really want to say. (Some people at this stage like to leave what they’re written to stew for a while, but the typing in my first drafts can sometimes be so bad that if I don’t go back there and then, while the idea is fresh, I can’t always decipher what it is I’ve written, but the time frame is you choice.)

From that great rich mass of thought and words you now have something to work with and cut into shape.  You can go back and construct a killer opening and line and delete the sentence that was the bridge onto your idea, take a few goes at it – see which one you like best. You may find cutting the first paragraph,  the one that let you get settled and get on track is the answer, just pruning it away, meaning you start with the second one. Maybe you need to reorder the way the paragraphs run or maybe on a second reading you decide you want to spend more time expanding the great idea in the fourth paragraph.

But you wouldn’t have known any of those things until it was down the on the page.

So, don’t get it right, get it written!

Thank you Sue!

Sue Welfare lives and works in West Norfolk in the town where she grew up. She began writing professionally in 1993, selling magazine and newspaper articles, before moving on to full length fiction.

Sue has four sons and shares her life with a very understanding husband and a large custard-coloured mongrel. When not writing Sue can be found making rag rags or handbags, gardening, cooking, reading, taking endless photographs or singing in her local community choir.

Sue’s website is www.Katelawson.co.uk and her latest novel, One Night Only, is available on 1st March 2012.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with novelist Bridget Straub – the two hundred and eighty-ninth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes Bookstore and Kobo (Amazon to follow)

 
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Posted by on February 23, 2012 in ebooks, novels, tips, writing

 

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Blog interview no.288 with editor Dennis DeRose

Welcome to the two hundred and eighty-eighth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, biographers, agents, publishers and more. Today’s is with editor Dennis DeRose. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further.

Morgen: Hello Dennis. Please tell us something about yourself, where you’re based, and how you came to be an editor.

Dennis:  My family and I live in Middletown New York. I’m a counselor in a New York state prison and I’m looking to retire this year. I became an editor just by being the type of person I am. I began by reviewing books for a wonderful lady in Kentucky. She liked my reviews so much that she asked me to edit every review submitted on her website; I agreed. While reading a book for review, I have a habit of recording events and errors that I find. I asked her to submit the errors I found to the writer. I did the same thing to his next book; he was so impressed that he asked me to edit his next manuscript. And I did and so it began and has continued for over two years, nonstop.

Morgen: They say it’s not what you know, it’s who you know but certainly having both helps. :) What do you generally edit?

Dennis: I prefer to edit fiction because that’s what I like to read. I have edited a few nonfiction to date, but it’s not my preference.

Morgen: It wouldn’t be mine either. Are there common mistakes an author can make?

Dennis: I don’t think authors communicate enough with their editors; that could be fatal. I’m thinking that often writers might not know how to accept changes in Word and they blame their editor for errors they make when doing so. I have no evidence to back that up, only suspicion based on comments from a few of my writers.

Another mistake is that I often feel they are in a rush to have their books edited, hence they may have a problem with the bill when they get it. They may feel it’s too much money. This has happened to me once before.

Morgen: I have a great editor who comes up with some wonderful suggestions as well as finding errors (fortunately not many) but it makes sense for me to be as thorough as I can before it goes to her because my time doesn’t cost me anything. Do editors generally charge by the word or the hour?

Dennis: That’s up to the editor but I feel that hourly rates are fairer to good writers.

Morgen: That’s interesting. Rachel and I agreed on a £x per 1,000 words so we both knew the cost from the outset. How much notice do you get for editing a project?

Dennis: Sometimes I only have two or three weeks; that’s not enough time. Knowing that, I inform writers not to hold me responsible for a few mistakes they may find later. Rushing never gets the job done right. I let them know that up front.

Morgen: Very wise. If a job’s worth doing… Do you have much dealing with publishers?

Dennis: The only time I deal with publishers is when they want me to edit a book they are publishing for a writer.

Morgen: I’ve heard numerous authors say they can self-publish without an editor – what would you say to that?

Dennis: It’s often a question of money; they may not have it. Or they may feel that they have gone over their writing so many times that there couldn’t possibly be any mistakes.

Morgen: But be too close to it, so there probably are. How do you edit – on screen or on paper?

Dennis: Electronically only, it would take much longer to edit longhand. I use voice recognition software to save my writers money.

Morgen: That’s a good idea. Do you write?

Dennis: I am not a writer but I have written one poem about a college friend and that will be published this year. I have also edited one book of poetry.

Morgen: Have you had any rejections? If so, how do you deal with them?

Dennis: I have had two writers back out of editing agreements; things happen. Dealing with it, that’s life. I know I did my best.

Morgen: :) Have you been involved in any competitions?

Dennis: So far three writers that I have edited for have won golden awards for excellent writing in the fiction category.

Morgen: Oh wow, that must feel so rewarding (pardon the pun). These days an editor and agent are the key people in a writer’s life, do you think agents are vital to an author’s success?

Dennis: An agent may be vital to a writer’s success unless he or she is willing to do all the work themselves and they have some connections where it counts. I make it a habit to email all my writers and writing friends important information that I feel might help them promote their books. I think it’s important; after all, one hand does wash the other.

Morgen: :) What do you think of eBooks? Do you read them or is it paper all the way?

Dennis: I encourage all my writers to publish an e-book first because I know how popular they are becoming. Presently, I prefer to read paper over e-book. That may change in the future.

Morgen: I bought a Kindle recently but I still prefer paperbacks, certainly for home. Having dozens of books in my handbag though is much lighter than it used to be. :) How much marketing do you do?

Dennis: I do try to help writers market their books wherever possible. Why not? We should help each other. I feel that we, myself and the writer, are part of a team.

Morgen: Do you have a favourite of all the books or characters you’ve edited?

Dennis: I have edited over 20 books but I really can’t say that I have a favorite one. I think all of my writers have done a super job and I hope that I have helped them, in some small way, to make their books better than they were before.

Morgen: How important do you think title / covers are?

Dennis: When given the opportunity, I am more than happy to express my opinion over one cover or another. I appreciate that my writers value my opinion.

Morgen: :) What are you working on at the moment / next?

Dennis: Right now I am editing a book for a local writer. I have writers lined up waiting for me to finish this one.

Morgen: That’s great, having that security. Do you work every day? If there is such a thing, do you ever suffer from editor’s block?

Dennis: I try to edit every day. Sometimes things get in the way.

Morgen: How about characters, what do you think makes them believable?

Dennis: When I edit a book, I try very hard to think like the reader. So that when I edit I often will offer suggestions to the writer to make their characters more real and bring more life to them.

Morgen: At least, like a reader, you’re coming to it with fresh eyes. What are your latest projects?

Dennis: To date, I have edited two nonfiction, one book of poetry, 17 novels and a few short stories. As stated, I am currently editing a romance for a local writer,along with an anthology of poetry and short stories. I have another short story to edit for a young writer (he`s 12). Will edit that no charge.

Morgen: A nice mixture so you don’t get bored. :) Do you have to do much research for your job?

Dennis: I research when necessary, if I feel that something is out of place or incorrect. I try to be as accurate as possible.

Morgen: What’s your favourite / least favourite aspect of your editing life? Has anything surprised you?

Dennis: My least favorite is when I know a writer could have done a better job but, for some reason, just hasn’t done so and I have to try to pick up the pieces. That becomes difficult and costly to the writer.

Morgen: Ouch. Yes, I would imagine so. What advice would you give aspiring writers?

Dennis: Take your time; do not rush sending your manuscript to the editor. It’s your book so make it the best you can before you submit it for editing.

Morgen: Absolutely, because it will only cost more money (and time going backwards and forwards). If you could invite three people from any era to dinner, who would you choose and what would you cook (or hide the takeaway containers)?

Dennis: Jesus, Capt. Kangaroo, and Red Skelton. I would just like to thank them for the joy that they brought to my life. While I’m at it, I’d like to invite my relatives that have passed on so that I could hug them one last time. I miss them all very much. Dinner? That`s not important to me.

Morgen: I’m with you on the hugging. I’d like to have got to know my father better – on reflection, 34 years wasn’t enough. Is there a word, phrase or quote you like?

Dennis: Do the right thing. I like to think that I made that up.

Morgen: :) Are you involved in anything else writing-related?

Dennis: I do blog about things that are important to me.

Morgen: What do you do when you’re not working?

Dennis: We like to go camping; I like to read and I go hunting and fishing when I have time.

Morgen: Are there any writing-related websites and/or books that you find useful?

Dennis: “Poets and Writers” magazine.

Morgen: Ah yes. That’s been recommended here before. Sadly I don’t think we have it in the UK although we could probably order it (note to self: have a look on the internet :) ). Are you on any forums or networking sites? If so, how valuable do you find them?

Dennis: Authorsden, it’s free to join. I’m also able to do reviews about my writers’ books there. That’s where I do my blogging also. You can also sell your books there as long as you autograph them for buyers.

Morgen: That sounds great. :) What do you think the future holds for editors?

Dennis: I would like to think that there will always be editors as long as there are writers who want to write well and will accept nothing less.

Morgen: Let’s hope so. Where can we find out about you and your work?

Dennis: I’m in LinkedIn under Moneysaver Editing and Dennis De Rose. Also look in Readersfavorite.com. Readers favorite will review books for FREE. My primary website is located in Authorsden under… http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?id=150139

Morgen: Thank you, Dennis. It’s been great chatting with you.

If you are reading this and you write, in whatever genre, and are thinking “ooh, I’d like to do this” then you can… just email me and I’ll send you the questions. You complete them, I tweak them where appropriate (if necessary to reflect the blog ‘clean and light’ rating) and then they get posted. When that’s done, I email you with the link so you can share it with your corner of the literary world. And if you have a writing-related blog / podcast and would like to interview me… let me know. :) You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at Smashwords.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :) on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on February 23, 2012 in interview, non-fiction, novels, podcast, writing

 

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