Armed with the picture prompt below, my first for online writing group ’Tuesday Tales’, and a 300-word limit, I got writing and below is the result.
Tuesday Tales usually provides a new one-word prompt each week, but this was an extra and fun.
It follows the same format whereby the members write a story inspired by it and post it on our blogs / websites. Then we email the link and first two or three sentences to Jean Joachim.
She then posts them on the Tuesday Tales blog (on a Tuesday
), gives us the link **** WHICH IS HERE **** then we go out and shout about it. So, without further ado, here is my 259-worder ‘Badge of Honour’ (no surprises that it’s a second-person viewpoint)…
Badge of Honour
You know it could be anything, but you’re pretty certain it’s a body. You want to say something to Neville, but you know he’ll laugh at you, as he does. Never with you. So you leave him topping up his suntan lotion, escape before he asks you to rub factor 30 into his gorilla-like back. Again.
You head back to the long, narrow orange and white boat, to the cobalt-blue sacking, the human-shaped canvas that made your heart race when you walked past it yesterday, solo, during Neville’s siesta.
As you pull at the sacking, you scream and jolt backwards into a tall islander.
“Hello ma’am,” he says in his strong Jamaican accent.
All you can do is laugh nervously. You’re sure he’s the boat owner… sure he’ll overpower you if you try to make a run for it, that’s if you could get past.
He looks at the face. The woman’s. You think she’s a woman, you can’t really be sure, and he laughs. An indistiguishable laugh, but it makes you uneasy. You’re too far from Neville, from anyone, to make screaming again worth it, so you decide you’ll reason with the man, but before you can say anything, he speaks.
“You thought…?” and he laughs again, this time his green eyes sparkling, then he pulls away the sacking, revealing her body. Limp. Lifeless. Hollow eyes. Then you see her name badge, ‘Anne’, and you realise what she is. Beside her is a first aid kit and the man’s uniform featuring his badge, ‘Montego Bay Rescue Service – Trainer’.
The details of Tuesday Tales can be found on my Tuesday Tales page here on this blog. Do go and check out the Tuesday Tales site – it’s a wonderful idea supported by talented writers. My story ‘Badge of Honour’ appears within these stories.
So, not only can you read these stories but you could also write your own using the prompts given each week. There’s no word count limit. Single-word prompts are something I regularly give my Monday night workshop and it’s amazing how different our stories can be. You can read some of mine (free and otherwise) at Smashwords, Sony Reader Store, Barnes & Noble, iTunes Bookstore and Kobo. And I have a new forum at http://morgenbailey.freeforums.org.








Yvonne Hertzberger
February 28, 2012 at 11:47 pm
I love surprise endings. This is cool!
morgenbailey
February 29, 2012 at 12:09 am
Thank you, Yvonne. Roald Dahl’s Tales of the Unexpected are my favourites – I should write more.
omicronon
February 29, 2012 at 2:57 am
Wow, great ending
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morgenbailey
February 29, 2012 at 7:22 am
:*) thank you…
dakotatrace
February 29, 2012 at 10:52 pm
Surprise, surprise. LOL I think the lady’s imagination ran away with her. Great little piece of flash
morgenbailey
February 29, 2012 at 10:58 pm
Not really surprising when she has a husband like Neville.
Thank you, Dakota. x
Lindsay
March 1, 2012 at 1:42 am
Love the interesting twist at the end
Kharisma
March 1, 2012 at 3:22 am
What a great ending
Jean
March 1, 2012 at 12:48 pm
You had me here! Well done. Loved the build up and the surprise.
morgenbailey
March 1, 2012 at 1:15 pm
Thank you, ladies.
I’m so glad so many people got it. I was worried (being a former English lifeguard!) that, Resussie Annie (Wikipedia kindly told me her name was actually just Anne) wasn’t well-known enough but clearly not. Phew.
M xx
Christina Cole
March 1, 2012 at 4:04 pm
Fun little story and a fun little ending. I’m glad it wasn’t a real body.
morgenbailey
March 1, 2012 at 5:50 pm
So is she.
Thank you Christina. x
SherryGloag
March 1, 2012 at 10:06 pm
Loved this.
morgenbailey
March 1, 2012 at 10:56 pm
Thank you, Sherry. As per usually I’m trying to chase my tail and failing miserably (169 emails all jumping up and down saying “pick me”) but I do plan once the day job goes (was supposed to be tomorrow but my replacement quit!) I’ll be reading and commenting on them all.
Stefan Ellery
March 2, 2012 at 5:03 am
Had to smile with the ending
morgenbailey
March 2, 2012 at 6:49 am
You didn’t have to, but I’m so glad you did.
Thank you, Stefan.