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Post-weekend Poetry 017: ‘When the Great Strength Fails’ by Louis J Casson

Welcome to Post-weekend Poetry and the seventeenth poem in this series. This week’s piece is by Louis J Casson.

When the Great Strength Fails

When the great strength fails
Atlas stumbling to his knees
blue green white ball
shifted and tilted scary, folks uncertain
where these degrees of angle lead.

When the paradigms shift
the strong Ox falling
cartilage and collagenous fibres
separate to snap
neighbors calling lost and wary
say so alive or dead.

When the markets crash
governments hot steppin.
as tha ultimate risk manager.
May be pinstriped bureaucrats
but they sure ain’t got no answers,
there’s no fly dancer.

When the great day o ‘doom
come to meet tha sinner man.
Rescue all from modern Babylon like Eygpt
wit his everlovin arm. Come tha fire from heaven
I’s looking whichway to bail
keep in mind some comfort saying
is tha Lord’s arm too short to fail?

When all we have is upturned
and ended in some ball of confusion.
Simply honesty and love will guide to some light
beyond the slick and useless platitudes I’s now using.

When the great love fails
casting out lovers from warmth
to cold alone night.
Left only with some love counter ticket
on the back a question
How long a season till light?

When the great life fails
and love’s shared little moments cease.
The together dream now ended
the wheel freed now turns so.
Pleasant times and fortune
have run their lease.

I asked Louis what prompted this piece and he said…

“When the Great Strength Fails” is a poem in reaction to and addressing the hard times economically we are now in; but also on a personal level when disappointments come to us all.

Hence you’ll find references to markets and governments, but also “in the mix” as it were…

  • References to apocalyptic literature (biblical) day of doom, world tilted.
  • Metaphors and parallels to the strong failing (Ox) world tilted.
  • The language varies; in turns street speak (Harlem: “hot steppin”) to a more literary (academic ?) tone, reflecting the possible words and thoughts of those in various parts society and the world to events unfolding.
  • What, if anything will lead us to a better day? In the poem we get some hints: Love, hope, that faith in light coming later.
  • We start with the “great strength” failing, going on to the great “X“ failing in other verses.

The above sounds impressive, in reality the poem came and this analysis that I’m writing now later.

Poetry writing is not an entirely logical brain process folks! In part I make the poem, in part some is “given” by the muse. All sorts of what you may have experienced, read, seen, heard; as well as your own opinions and views, will emerge in the process of composing. Part of poetry’s mystery and delight is that the unspoken ambiguity in the lines leave room for each readers own unique meanings to emerge.

Thank you, Louis.

Currently living in Northamptonshire, England, Louis visits the Lake District frequently where he was born. His arts activities include writing; publishing poetry and lyrics. Also music: main instruments, bass guitar and guitar.

Honorable mention in the 17th Billboard World Song Contest (2009). Category: Blues and R & B. Lyrics writer for Blues, Country, Jazz and other musical styles. Album “Love and Blues” by Casson / Sheinman on iTunes. Poetry and lyrics collections published on Amazon Kindle; “See You in the Big Time” being his latest book (2011). You can find out more about Louis from his blog http://louisjcasson.blogspot.com, Behance portfolio site (book extracts and MP3 audio files) and Louis J. Casson on Amazon Kindle.

‘When the Great Strength Fails’ and associated text © Louis J. Casson 2012 all rights reserved.

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Tuesday Tales 19 part 2: ‘Where’s the fun in that?’

It turns out I hadn’t been paying attention in class (and I used to be so good)… or rather, with the Tuesday Tales prompt for this week. I thought it was ‘chase’ (the story for which, The photo that no-one else can get, I posted on this blog yesterday) but that had been postponed in place of a picture… the handsome one below. So with less than 24 hours to spare I got cracking… actually I didn’t straight away, I started this afternoon… 3pm, two hours ago, but shorts are my forte (or so I’ve been told) so 300 words in two hours. No problem. :)

Online writing group Tuesday Tales provides a new prompt each week, the members write a story inspired by it and post it on our blogs / websites. Then we email the link and first two or three sentences to Jean Joachim. She then posts them on the Tuesday Tales blog (on a Tuesday :) ), gives us the link then we go out and shout about it. So, without further ado, here is my 300-worder (finished with 10 minutes to spare :) ).

Where’s the fun in that?

This wasn’t Nadine’s idea of fun.

Knowing she wanted to be an actress, her flatmate Tim had sold it to her as an opportunity to get in front of the camera, but neglected to tell her the camera wouldn’t be shooting at the time.

“Come on, it’ll be a laugh,” he’d said. “Get you away from those infernal study books. You’ll meet people. You know, real people who earn money for a living and you’ll earn a bit in the process.”

But this wasn’t what she classed as a ‘living’, strutting around semi-nude – the men of course, not her – and it was their silly too-big-for-their-heads cowboys hats that made her laugh, which didn’t impress them or the photographer… although Tim thought it was hilarious. Then there were the rips in their jeans her mother would have insisted on sewing up.

The models reminded her of the Chippendales except this was more tasteful… a campaign for a top jeans designer. She couldn’t remember which one, Tim had told her when they’d booked his dad’s farm, and had seemed suitably excited, but it had meant nothing to her, still didn’t. Actors and actresses, that was a different matter but fashion… modelling… had never appealed to her.

And the models could tell.

She knew they weren’t renowned for their brains – deciding that was probably why their hats were too big – or stimulating conversations, which was just as well as they were too busy preening for the camera.

“Now!” the photographer shouted, and although he was looking at the models, Nadine knew he meant her.

She sighed, picked up the bottle, shook it and headed towards the men. She wanted to be helping the photographer, adjusting lighting, whatever needed doing. Not this…

…squirting baby oil all over them

…where was the fun in that?

The links to the earlier prompts can be found on the Tuesday Tales page here on this blog. Do go and check out the Tuesday Tales site.

So, not only can you read these stories but you could also write your own using the prompts given each week. There’s no word count limit. Single-word prompts are something I regularly give my Monday night workshop and it’s amazing how different our stories can be.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called Short Story Saturdays where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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