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Post-weekend Poetry 018: ‘Waiting Game’ by Jackie Atkins

Welcome to Post-weekend Poetry and the eighteenth poem in this series. This week’s piece is by Jackie Atkins.

Waiting Game

Pintsized dabs of cotton balls nodding in the sea
Cloudy sprays of sea tingling sour braveries
Like towers leaning on a rocking horse dais

Layered sky of braced curtains shutting off the gilt
As sea gulls huddle on the beach for radiance
Promised to them if they endured the night-time blue

Like constant retainers, profiteers of the beach
Amass their time to press their revered covenant
Grasping rhythms of the day by never flinching

Waiting for their guarantee without a movement
Silent in this nakedness and faceless current
Unhesitating in their patient steadfast gaze

How I wish I could be them and stand so faithful
Never fretting, never flinching as a handmaid
Sustaining profounder horizons on the brink

I asked Jackie what prompted this piece and she said…

Though the wintertime on a summer beach is cold and windy the sea gulls are content to sit and wait in a huddle of fifty or more at a time with not a feather ruffled.

I love that. Thank you, Jackie.

Jackie Atkins is a television script writer who has recently sold an idea to Family Television Network. The planning is in the works for a 26 series to be developed by EWTN in Irondale, Alabama. For now, she is contented with writing theater reviews and commentary for www.broadstreetreview.com, walking on the beaches of Cape May, New Jersey and contemplating another short story. She has existed financially with jobs as a horse jockey, paralegal and bartender. Now she is at rest.

If you’d like to submit your poem (40 lines max) for consideration for Post-weekend Poetry take a look here.

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Tuesday Tales 020: Appearances can be deceptive

The twentieth prompt from online writing group Tuesday Tales (my fourteenth story for them) was ‘car’ and below is the result.

Tuesday Tales provides a new prompt each week, the members write a story inspired by it and post it on our blogs / websites. Then we email the link and first two or three sentences to Jean Joachim. She then posts them on the Tuesday Tales blog (on a Tuesday :) ), gives us the link then we go out and shout about it. So, without further ado, here is my 473-worder (second person, as I so often do).

Appearances can be deceptive

Sitting outside the bank isn’t your idea of fun. They said they wouldn’t be long but whenever Ernie’s involved you know his clock works differently to everyone else’s. You should have brought a book but he wants you to be on your guard, be bored while he’s chatting up some ‘skirt’ as he calls them. You’re more of a ‘know what you want, go in and get it’ person, although this isn’t exactly shopping.

“It’s not life or death,” Jack says, which you find funny as you know it could be. Not funny ha-ha, of course, it’s never ha-ha.

“Got to keep your mind on the job, professional at all times,” Jack says every now and then, within earshot of Ernie, despite knowing it won’t even go in one ear let alone out the other.

You expect violence and sometimes you get it, or Ernie or Jack do, but it’s part of the risks you take, doing what you do. Your heart’s thumping – you want to know what’s happening on the inside, be part of the ‘action’.

Each time you see them go in you wish you weren’t the driver, the “getaway” as Ernie calls you, only without the ‘t’.

Your trousers are too tight and wish you’d not had an extra slice of toast at breakfast but the adrenalin will burn it off soon enough, it’s only the first job of the day.

The clock on the dashboard is fast, Jack’s idea to try and keep Ernie in check, but you both know that’s pointless.

A brand new Mercedes pulls up on the double-yellow lines in front of you and you tense. The door opens slowly and you reach for a gun you know isn’t there. White hair is the first thing you see and when the man turns round to shut the door, you realise he must be at least 90. He hobbles between your van and his car and reaches inside his jacket. You lean forward to get a better look and see him pull out a wallet and continue his slow journey to the cashpoint. A simple transaction and he returns, carefully putting what looks like a single note into his wallet and placing that with equal reverence into his pocket. He smiles at you as he passes, lowers himself stiffly into his car and drives away.

Relaxing a little, you look at the bank as your colleagues come out laughing, Ernie patting Jack on the back, Ernie wiping his mouth. They’re both holding cases you know are stuffed with money and you start the engine.

With the cases stowed, Jack gets in beside you, Ernie in the back and you speed away.

This is only your first month but you know you’ll fit in – three being the magic number, one for each red dot on your Securitas logo.

The link to the other stories for this prompt is here.

The links to the earlier prompts can be found on the Tuesday Tales page here on this blog. Do go and check out the Tuesday Tales site.

So, not only can you read these stories but you could also write your own using the prompts given each week. There’s no word count limit. Single-word prompts are something I regularly give my Monday night workshop and it’s amazing how different our stories can be.

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Posted by on April 23, 2012 in ebooks, short stories, writing

 

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