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Guest post: Interview With a Reader by mystery author Warren Bull

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of reader feedback, is brought to you by mystery novelist, short story author and blogger Warren Bull.

Interview With a Reader

In New Zealand I was able to track down and speak to a member of a highly desirable and rarely interviewed class — a reader. I approached with caution so as to not frighten the woman sitting on the couch in my living room and asked what she was reading. From there I was able to skillfully deflect the conversation into what she does and does not like to read. In the interest of avoiding the paparazzi, my niece, the said reader, shall remain anonymous. No matter what you do to me I will not tell you it was Jenny I spoke with.

Speaking of mysteries she told me she does not like a book ending where there is no clear conclusion: the experience left her frustrated. She also said she does not like plot complications that seem tossed in for suspense and do not advance the story. Her example was a woman character who knew she is being stalked and who head a strange noise in a dark parking garage. The character went to investigate unarmed and without calling anyone for assistance. My reader added that she does not like plots where all the interesting characters get killed off before the end of the book. (I admitted that is a pet peeve of mine also.) She mentioned in some books the dialog seems stilted and the problems seem too trivial to warrant being in a book.

She said she did not like authors who essentially write the same book over and over again although she understood that some readers do.

On the positive side Jenny liked multiple viewpoints and books that shift back and forth from the past to the present. She said she enjoys interesting characters and did not mind if the characters sometimes do something, “stupid” and “human”, especially in a tense situation where it would be hard to think clearly.

She said she enjoys how seemingly unrelated events end up connecting elements of the plot. Along with humor, including dark humor. Jenny liked well-set-up surprises as long as there are not unbelievable cliffhangers and surprises every few pages.

She wants to like the characters and be entertained.

What do readers tell you?

That they love what I write (quite a few) or never want to read anything by me again (thankfully few). :) Thank you, Warren!

Warren Bull is a multiple award-winning author who has been nominated for a 2012 Derringer award. He has more than forty short stories published, the novels, ABRAHAM LINCOLN FOR THE DEFENSE, HEARTLAND and MURDER IN THE MOONLIGHT are available at http://www.warrenbull.com/kindle_editions.html and a short story collection, MURDER MANHATTAN STYLE available at http://www.warrenbull.com. He blogs at http://writerswhokill.blogspot.com on Fridays.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with non-fiction author Kim Dalferes – the four hundred and first of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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5PM Fiction 014: Our Joanie

Welcome to the fourteenth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s prompt was to write a dialogue between two old school friends talking about someone missing, so here is my 242-worder with Marjorie and Ethel. :)

Our Joanie

“Oh look, Ethel, Deirdre’s here.”
“Looks well too. Can’t have been anything serious.”
“Nick not with her?”
“Nick?”
“Clampett.”
“Not seen him. Why would he be?”
“They’re married.”
“They are?”
“Four… no, three years ago.”
“Didn’t know that, Marjorie.”
“You didn’t? They were here together the year before last. Their first anniversary.”
“Don’t remember that.”
“Ah no, you weren’t here. Your skiing accident, remember.”
“The room’s filling up nicely. Busier than last year?”
“Could be. So where’s Nick do you reckon?”
“Working?”
“He and Manny shared a birthday, didn’t they? And he’s long-retired.”
“True. Haven’t seen him yet either.”
“Oh, I have. Came in with Evelyn.”
“Evelyn Ward?”
“Thompson neé Ward, yes.”
“A Thompson we know?… Not Derek.”
“One and the same.”
“No! But she’s always been to these things on her own.”
“I don’t think it lasted long.”
“And now she’s cosying up to Manny?”
“I wouldn’t say ‘cosy’, not arm-in-arm or anything but…”
“Anyone else missing?”
“Erm… ”
“Who’s the speaker this year, do you know?”
“Didn’t you read the invitation?”
“I didn’t get mine, remember, you rang to remind me.”
“Oh yes. I’m surprised I didn’t tell you.”
“Who?”
“Candy Simpson.”
“Candy Simpson?”
“Yes!”
“Who’s Candy Simpson?”
“Oh, Ethel, don’t tell me you’ve never heard of her.”
“No.”
“She’s a porn star. You know, Dirty…”
“Marjorie, dear, why would I have heard of her? I don’t…”
“She’s Joan.”
“Joan? Our Joanie?”
“Shh… the lights are going down.”

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Photo courtesy of http://morguefile.com. You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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