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Guest post: Florence Freakout by Lev Raphael

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of public readings is brought to you by multi-genre author and interviewee Lev Raphael.

Florence Freakout

I’ve done hundreds of invited public readings from my books over the last twenty years, but the thrill hasn’t worn off.  Every reading feels new and I’m always a little keyed up.  It’s just like going on-stage, something I still remember from the plays I performed in as a college student.  The excitement is tinged with apprehension: what if it doesn’t go over well?  

But something different happened to me recently in Florence where I was reading from my Gilded Age novel Rosedale in Love. I had a panic attack, my first ever.

I had been invited to an international Edith Wharton conference because my novel retells the story of The House of Mirth from the perspective of its despised Jewish suitor.  Where Wharton makes him a stereotype of the vulgar, money-grubbing Jew, I made him three-dimensional, giving him a life, a family, a history, dreams and inspirations.

The day before my reading, I was in a small bright classroom of the college which was hosting the event, listening to an academic paper, when suddenly the walls seemed to close in on me and I felt dizzy.  It wasn’t the heat; I knew that in my bones.  This was something different.  When the paper ended and the applause started, I slipped out and hurriedly got a cab back to my hotel across the Arno.  In the cab, even though I was headed towards the quieter, less crowded part of the city (the Oltrarno), I started hyperventilating. I managed to keep my head enough to speak my travel Italian and get my receipt at the end of the short ride (Ho bisogno di una ricevuto).

Upstairs in my room, I took a bath to calm myself down, and a Valium, which I’d brought because I’d had to leave a very sick dog behind me at home in Michigan, a dog just diagnosed with cancer.  He wasn’t in danger of imminent death, but his life expectancy had just been shortened by years, and our family was in a state of shock.

 When I calmed down, I tried to figure out what was going on, and the answers came quickly.  Though I’d done readings in London, Glasgow, Paris, Vienna, and in twenty German cities and towns, I’ve never been alone abroad doing a reading.  On my tours, I’d either been with my spouse or had a host, sometimes more than one.  I’d also never read from my work at an academic conference, which is odd since I’d read at universities and colleges–not to mention book fairs, museums, libraries, synagogues and churches. 

Luckily the panic didn’t hit right before the reading.  It happened twenty-four hours beforehand.  I had plenty of time to calm down, sight-see, eat a splendid bistro dinner, sleep well, wake up to the Florentine sunshine the next day and have breakfast on the hotel terrace where one wall was covered in jasmine.  The beauty of the city worked on me like a massage, and as I spent the day preparing, I understood my panic even better: the stakes were higher than usual in some ways.  I was in effect a second keynote speaker, which definitely made the situation different from a typical reading for me.

More importantly, as a reader, I didn’t have the advantage I’d recently had on tour of reading a passage from a book I’d read many times before. Touring Germany, Canada and the U.S. from 2009 through 2012 to talk about my memoir / travelogue My Germany, I consistently read the Prologue.  It was short enough; had a clear beginning, middle and end; and people found it dramatic.  Sticking with the same text meant that I knew it very well in English, and could maintain lots of eye contact with my audience (and even improvise a little).  Readings are performances, and that one was different every time because I did so many of them and the energy was always different in each venue.

But in Florence I had a brand new play, in effect, and this was my opening night.  Even the setting was unique: the tiny Gothic Church of San Jacobo, the oldest venue I’d ever spoken in over the course of twenty years of readings.  It was a bit overwhelming to be surrounded by so much history everywhere I turned.  I was even trying something new for me: reading the text from my iPad.

So how did it go?  About half of the conferees came, which was surprising to me on a lovely evening in Florence.  And I’m happy to say that when it was done, one of the conference organizers came up to me and said, “That was perfect.”  You can’t ask for more than that, except perhaps a great meal afterward, which is what the conference had arranged a few blocks away at a gorgeous trendy restaurant.  I still had another full day in Florence before heading to Rome, and that next day I kept things quiet: visits to two beautiful but nearly-empty churches not far from my hotel, a siesta after lunch, and a dinner two blocks away.  I was my own host, making sure that I was comfortable. It was another new role for me abroad.  I liked it.

I’d like it too, although having only done local mic nights I can fully understand your trepidation. Thank you, Lev!

Lev Raphael is the author of twenty-two books that have been translated into nearly a dozen languages.

He’s been a radio talk show host, a newspaper columnist, and an academic. Widely anthologized in the U.S. and England, he’s done hundreds of talks and readings from his work on three continents.

His writing is taught at colleges and universities across North America, which means he’s become homework.  He grew up in New York, but got over it and has made Michigan his home for more than half his life.

You can watch the trailer for his latest novel ‘Rosedale in Love’ here.

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with novelist and short story author Guy Mankowski – the four hundred and forty-eighth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 31, 2012 in ebooks, events, novels, writing

 

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5PM Fiction 061: Human maybe

Welcome to the sixty-first in this daily series that is ‘5pm Fiction’.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story containing the following keywords: skylight, dress, over, fool, spike – here is my 126-worder.

Human maybe

As Ben looked up at the kitchen skylight he was sure he’d spotted something move. Not as big as a plane or small like a pigeon, but a dark shadow… human maybe.

“Don’t be foolish,” his mum would have said, wetting her fingers and teasing his hair into spikes.

He’d asked her over and over to leave him alone but now he wished she was here, not in town buying a new dress for his sister’s wedding.

He dragged a chair to underneath the skylight but looked up, knowing he was still too short, so went to his bedroom, pulled his dressing gown belt out of its loops then returned to the kitchen.

Standing on the chair, he swung one end of the belt upwards, looping it through the skylight latch. As he pulled it open, stale, mossy water poured down. As he shook his head, he heard a growl above him.

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 31, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, writing

 

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Post-weekend Poetry 032: Olympic 4-liners

Welcome to Post-weekend Poetry and the thirty-second poem in this series. Actually this week sees a selection of four-line Olympic-themed poems by four guest authors, starting with the first to reach me and the one who gave me the idea (thanks, Keith)…

Keith Blowes:

To come first would be best
To take part would mean a lot
To finish at all is an achievement
To be a member of the team (GB) means everything.

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Sharon E Cathcart

I’ve seen the big diving montage,
The opening ceremony, one giant collage.
There’s only one sport not before my visage:
Where the hell is the dressage?

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Sharon told me that her favorite equestrian sport, dressage, is never covered in the US. She has been writing for as long as she can remember and always has at least one work in progress.  She lives in the Silicon Valley, California, with her husband and an assortment of pets.

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Olympic by Dr. Arijit Bag

It’s not about the wining, but
It’s about the glory of taking part.
It’s not only the five colored rings
It’s for friendship and war-less springs.

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Antique Dealer’s Olympic Lament by Barbara Barth

Gymnastics, swimming, tennis and more –
To visit London for the Olympics, oh such a bore!
Antiques, Portobello Road, is where you’ll find me
My pockets full of cash on a huge shopping spree!

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Thank you everyone, that was fun… and poignant. :)

If you’d like to submit your poem (40 lines max) for consideration for Post-weekend Poetry take a look here.

The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with thriller and children’s fantasy author Philip Caveney – the four hundred and forty-seventh of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays.

 
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Posted by on July 30, 2012 in events, poetry, writing

 

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5PM Fiction 060: A good deal really

Welcome to the sixtieth in this daily series that is ‘5pm Fiction’.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story starting with ‘the scream woke up the household…’, so here is my 221-worder.

A good deal really

The scream woke up the household as it reverberated around the kitchen.

Matt was first to reach the bottom of the stairs, armed with the fire extinguisher kept by the bed. “Rachel!”

“In here!”

“Where?”

“Kitchen!”

“You’re in the dark.”

“I switched off the light.”

“Why?”

“So I can’t see it.”

“What?”

“It!”

Matt turned on the kitchen light.

“Turn it off!”

He turned it off.

A bleary-eyed seven-year-old Jake padded through the hall. “Mum? Dad?”

“It’s OK,” Matt said, not knowing whether it actually was or not. “Go back to bed, we’ll be up in a minute.”

Jake padded back through the hall as seventeen-year-old Chloë stomped past, exchanging evil stares as they crossed. Jake stuck out his tongue, Chloë did likewise, wiggling a silver stud in the process.

She watched Jake head back upstairs, half-asleep, and smiled. Then smile gone, she stomped through to the kitchen. “Mum? Dad?”

“We’re both here,” Matt whispered.

“Why are you in the dark?” Chloë replied, not whispering.

“Don’t know.”

“Something black and horrible’s just gone under the washing machine.” Rachel whined.

Chloë switched on the light. “How black and horrible?”

“Lots of legs and hairy,” Rachel quivered.

“Oh, that’ll be Ernie.”

“Ernie?” Matt asked.

“My tarantula.”

“Your…”

“Yeah, Freddie swapped me it for my old mobile. Think I got a good deal really.”

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 30, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, writing

 

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5PM Fiction 059: Stuffed (44-word story)

Welcome to the fifty-ninth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story featuring a centenarian, robin, sloth, cellar, flood and calm under pressure, so here is my 44-worder!

Stuffed

Robin’s mother turned 100 the day their cellar flooded but he wasn’t bothered, even the stuffed sloth floating to the surface hadn’t made him angry. Of all the hobbies she’d tried, taxidermy was the one he’d encouraged until she’d ordered a life-sized glass case.

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 29, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, writing

 

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Author Spotlight no.106 – Barbara Barth

Complementing my daily blog interviews, today’s Author Spotlight, the one hundred and sixth, is of Barbara Barth.

Barbara Barth is an author, antique dealer, and dog whisperer. She lives with six rescue dogs from her local animal shelters.

Her business card reads “Writer With Dogs”. It is a title she wears proudly.  She launched a one-issue online dog magazine dedicated to animal rescue and vintage dog art Dec 2010. Her book launch was a fundraiser for Animal Action Rescue with all proceeds donated to the group.

Barbara credits dogs as part of her healing process after her husband died four years ago. Her memoir “The Unfaithful Widow” follows her first year as a widow in a series of essays that include a vintage Corvette, bad dates leading to good things, the best group of girlfriends, and a bevy of dogs. Her memoir placed as a finalist in the 2011 USA Best Book Awards.

Barth recently closed her small antique shop but still sells collectibles from an antique mall in a small southern town close to her home. She promotes other writers with a writing guild, critique group, and an online Book Talk site.

A member of the Dog Writers Association of America, and an online blogger for Lifetime Television’s The Balancing Act, you will find Barbara writing most days at her computer surrounded by a group of lazy pups napping nearby.

And now from the author herself:

I’ve always been a storyteller. In fact, many of my friends thought I should be a stand up comic. The problem is, while I am funny in small groups, I lack the confidence to stand in front of a crowd and talk. Writing takes care of that problem for me!

After my husband died, I found myself sending horrible e-mails to friends at god-awful hours late at night. Then I’d turn on music and relax. Within an hour, I’d send a follow-up e-mail saying, “never mind”.

I decided to channel that sadness and energy into writing. What started out as a way to clear my mind became a way of life. I found I loved writing.

After the initial outpouring of emotion, I had to pull my story together to make it readable. I had much to learn.

“Does the period go inside or outside the quotation marks?” I didn’t have a clue. As a reader I never paid attention to structure. I was not an English major. I did my research and soon became armed and dangerous to continue.

A New York Times Best Seller Author critiqued the beginning of my book at a writer’s conference.

“Barbara, you’ve killed your husband off three times in twenty pages. No one will care. They want to know what you are doing now. Why did you start to date so soon?”

I was crushed and embarrassed. When I read her notes later, I realized she liked my writing. It clicked in my head what she meant. I knew how to pull my story together.

My memoir “The Unfaithful Widow” turned out to be a funny book full of all the things I never thought I’d do again. No subject is taboo. It is a series of essays pulled together under the single theme of finding joy again.

I am currently working on my widow sequel, but widow won’t be in the title. I do want to share all the goodness that has followed my first year and how I have found a creative niche for myself.

If I can do it, you can do it. That is my message. Except, do it your way. We each are different in how we deal with life.

I still buy and sell antiques. It is hard to find a white space on my wall for all the vintage art. I rarely go on second dates. I need to loose weight. I am a dog hoarder. I write about these simple things on many women’s sites.

“My life is an open book.” That quote applies to me.

At a recent book club meeting I was asked, “Aren’t you afraid someone will talk about you?” I do write under my own name.

I laughed. “No. I’ve already said it all myself!”

There is a great freedom in sharing your heart with others if you are true to what you believe. I write from the heart and am grateful my audience enjoys my tall tales on life.

You can find more about Barbara and her writing via…

Author web: http://www.barbarabarth.netDog MagazineAmazon on paperback, also available on KindleHelen Ross Writes review from AustraliaBook Talk Blog for authors and interesting writing sitesLifetime Television The Balancing Act blog site. Readers can contact me directly: bb-bjd@comcast.net and on Facebook.

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The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with erotica author Elizabeth Cage – the four hundred and forty-fifth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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5PM Fiction 058: Once living and pink

Welcome to the fifty-eighth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story from the keyword of ‘lead’, so here is my 182-worder.

Once living and pink

Sophie grabbed the dog lead and whistled… then whistled again. She went to the old chair in the lounge – Bertie’s favourite – but it was empty.

Going to the bottom of the stairs she shouted his name but there was no scamper of feet, no clink of his collar tag.

“Bertie!” she called again, clicking the end of his lead hoping the noise would entice him, but there was still no sign.

Remembering she’d left the back door open, she headed out to the garden.

Looking around there was no sign of him until she noticed a small shower of earth in the far corner by her vegetable patch.

“Bertie!” she yelled as a mud-caked dog muzzle appeared from behind a tree. “What are you doing?”

He plodded towards her, holding something in his mouth, then stopped a couple of feet away.  Dropping his prize on the ground he wagged his tail madly and barked, waiting for gratitude.

Sophie looked down at the ground then screamed as she realised that the object had once been a living, and probably very pink, human hand.

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 28, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, writing

 

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5a.m. Flash 280712 – How to write tenses in fiction

Every now and then at 5a.m. (probably posted by my clone) I will be bringing you a newsflash, update on what I’m doing, invited guest piece, or whatever takes my fancy. I wrote a second-person future tense story which featured some past tense so I thought I’d talk briefly (this is a ‘flash’ after all) on tenses.

Robert Sloan’s article on Hubpages* How to use Past Tense Present Tense and Future Tense in Novel Writing may be two years old but it’s a great article. It starts…

“One of the easy ways to tell beginner writing is that the story bounces from past tense through present tense and future tense at random. Unskilled writers who don’t keep a consistent tense can confuse readers about what happened when. More than that, it’s easy to drift into the passive voice and bore them in the middle of the most exciting scenes.”

He may be a little harsh on beginners’ writing, we all make tense mistakes especially when writing in the past. It’s easy enough to write about something that happened recently (I went, he shouted) but get trickier when you want to go further back… to the ‘had had / had been’s. It can get pretty tiring to read a long section in pluperfect (Wikipedia has a great explanation of this) so once you set up the section in pluperfect you can then revert back to past tense, the reader will know it’s in the past and stay with you… hopefully.

Most stories are written in the simple past tense, some in the present tense, but few in the future tense. If you’ve never written future tense before, do have a go, it can be fun. :)

* I’ll be talking more about Hubpages in tomorrow’s 5a.m. flash.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 28, 2012 in articles, novels, tips, writing

 

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Flash Fiction Friday 045: Modestina by Marlene Caroselli

Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday and the forty-fifth piece of flash fiction in this series. This week’s is a 825-worder by non-fiction author Marlene Caroselli.

Modestina

In that room of shadows and half-lights, the crucifix on the wall stood silhouetted by the sun. I remember that–the memory is carved, a wooden memory. I moved to give that infant a regular if abrupt passage from his world in the womb to the light outside his mother’s stomach. I saw her weep then and I wondered: Were her tears for the belly that would soon be emptied? Were they for the pain that left her quivering still? Was she looking ahead to the other savage lacerations that inevitably were to come? She was still a young woman; more pregnancies were in store.

But I did not have much time to think about this. The child had come. There was no wail, though, and I soon saw he had somehow tied a knot in the thread that bound him to his mother’s inner life. I had to work quickly then. I had to untie that knot before it strangled this tiny creature, had to try instead to weave that thread into the fabric that makes up a life. I sliced the cord but already, I could tell it was too late. The baby was nothing more than a limp, gray lump. One look at his charcoal skin and I knew: the cord that lay tangled around his neck had strangled him after all.

Erminia became my only concern then. I plucked that shriveled lump away–laying him aside, on the floor, to be disposed of later. I went to her. This was her first child and she had been laboring for many hours now. With my hand, I wiped from her forehead the glistening sweat that smelled of acid. Gently, I placed my other hand upon her stomach and rubbed. I, too, have known the pain of birthing.

Hoping the tone of my voice would be like sawdust on the fire of her unspoken question, I told her she would be fine. But Erminia would not be fooled. “My baby, my baby,” she cried. “What have you done with my baby?”

“Stop!” I scolded. “He came out dead. Forget him!” I hurled the words at her, hoping to startle her into concern for herself. But grief clambered from her heart, too awkward, too grotesque to be stopped with mere syllables. She raised her white arms in that room of terra cotta shadows. “Give him to me,” she demanded, her voice rasping against the soft stillness of the afternoon.

I refused. I am not proud of the thoughts that came to me next but they came, unbidden. I thought that her husband Pasquale would be very disappointed. Probably, he would not reward me as he would have if the baby boy had lived. Would I receive one chicken when I had been expecting two? The thoughts evaporated almost at the same moment they slithered into my head.

Again, I told her the child was dead and she wrapped her arms around herself as if she were sheltering a ghost. She pulled that sadness into her being and sank back upon the pillow, her mourning already begun. She was not speaking words, only sounds that came from deep within her. I stood there helpless. Finally, I began to clean up the room, my thoughts punctuated by her half-sighs and stifled moans.

And then we heard a mewling. I looked at her and found the same perplexing question in her reddened eyes that I had bouncing in my head. From that placenta-shrouded bundle we heard it again. It was fainter this time, almost like the whispered good-bye of a lover reluctant to leave, an utterance more felt than heard.

“Lui e renato,” she shouted, raising herself on her elbows, her eyes straining to see movement in that heap on the floor. “Renato! Renato,” she cried, her words curving around the inert form, as if willing his rebirth.

Could it be? Was God so good that he would restore life to this bundle of flesh and provide another chicken or two for me? I ran to him and saw his tiny fists raised in triumph. I turned him over and slapped his back to clear whatever residue of his previous life lay in his throat. And then I took water from my birthing pail. It was still warm, still good for making little blood-flecked rivers run across his puny chest. My hands had done this hundreds of times; they moved with little direction from me. Even as I cleansed him, I was reaching for the blanket that would offer an early protection from life’s sorrows.

She held out her arms, beseeching me to give her what she had carried inside for nine long months. The baby’s color was restored by now. The danger had passed. I helped her cradle the tiny form in her arms.

She cooed the whole time, “Renato. Renato.”

This is how he came by his name. He came to life a second time.

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Wow, thank you, Marlene.

Dr. Marlene Caroselli (www.saatchionline.com/LainaCelano), is an author, keynoter, and corporate trainer.

She has published over 60 books, including Jesus, Jonas, and Janus: The Leadership Triumvirate, and Principled Persuasion, named a Director’s Choice by Doubleday Book Club.

 

If you’d like to submit your 1,000-word max. stories for consideration for Flash Fiction Friday take a look here.

The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with octogenarian memoirist, non-fiction and fiction author Johnnie Johnson – the four hundred and forty-fourth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 27, 2012 in ebooks, non-fiction, short stories, writing

 

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5PM Fiction 057: Whatever Aunt Agatha has in store for you (second-person future tense story)

Welcome to the fifty-seventh in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a second person viewpoint story in future tense where the character is waiting for an important delivery, so here is my 318-worder.

Whatever Aunt Agatha has in store for you

It’ll come and you’ll either be happy about it or how you are now. It can’t get any worse, can it.

Before it arrives though you’ll have to find a space for it. Of course not knowing what you’re going to get doesn’t help but you’ll deal with it. You’re used to dealing with crises and this, you’ve convinced yourself, will not be as bad as losing Brian, or the day the dog… no, you’ll be positive, thank the van driver and wish him a nice day, shut the door, take the parcel into the dining room, unwrap it and deal with it.

Of course you may not want to keep it. You know what strange taste Aunt Agatha had, but to leave you anything had been a shock, but you know her sense of humour too and that it’s not going to be something ordinary… something that’ll just blend into a corner with the rest of the ornaments.

You’ve convinced yourself it’ll be huge. You have visions of the delivery driver having to take the door off its hinges… a life-size wooden elephant, you know Agatha lived overseas for a while but as long as it’s dead you’ll cope.

So you go to the window, pull open the curtains a little to watch the traffic, but not to appear nosy, and you’ll wait… wait for the brown van, the man in the brown uniform to carry, push or wheel whatever’s in store for you and you’ll accept it over the threshold with a smile and thank him for his trouble whether there’s been any or not.

You could do with a new fridge freezer, no more newspaper on the floor to mop up the leaks because the freezer door doesn’t shut. A piece of jewellery would be a treat.

And then you see him, not in a brown van but in a lorry and your heart sinks.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 27, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, viewpoints, writing

 

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Guest post: The investment banking thriller – a new genre? by Marietta Miemietz

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of the investment banking thriller as a genre is brought to you by mystery / thriller author Marietta Miemietz.

The investment banking thriller – a new genre?

When I published my first book, the humorous investment-banking thriller Off-site, I was curious to see how it compared to other investment banking thrillers. I naturally assumed that investment-banking thrillers constituted a genre. I typed “investment banking thriller” into the search box on amazon.com/books – and was startled to realize that I got a mere thirteen results, compared with 1,647 medical thrillers and a staggering 2,875 legal thrillers.  Why the big difference? Possibly, some of the authors and publishers of legal and medical thrillers possess superior tagging skills, thus increasing the likelihood that their books show up in such relatively narrow searches. However, this is not a satisfactory explanation for the extremely wide gaps.  A more sobering alternative view is that the genre of investment-banking thrillers has yet to be developed.

Skeptics might argue that this is never going to happen, as investment-banking thrillers would invariably be completely predictable and thus utterly boring. The plot would always have to be a variation of the Ruthless-jillionaire-gets-ultra-greedy-and-nearly-brings-down-bank-while-murdering-everyone-who-suspects theme – hardly intriguing enough to compensate the reader for wading through hundreds of pages of financial jargon from delta-hedges to bail-in bonds and spread-betting.  But an investment-banking thriller doesn’t have to be about extremely sophisticated financial crime as a senior executive cunningly bypasses a plethora of rules that are not properly policed by the bank’s control rooms. Having spent fifteen years working in the financial services industry and thus having interacted with myriad characters in an often dysfunctional environment it is my firm opinion that investment banks make great background for all sorts of mysteries and crime. High-powered, ruthless executives with a relentless drive to make as much money as possible for the banks that employ them represent only a small minority of a modern investment-bank’s staff. Instead, trading floors are home to a great many box-tickers, cost-cutters, opportunists and do-gooders, all of whom have their own, not immediately obvious, agendas, internal networks and frequently, ugly secrets.  Why not draw on them for inspiration when creating characters and plotting stories?

Off-site is a thriller set in a crumbling investment-bank. The protagonist, Aline, has to attend an off-site meeting on her boss’ spooky residence on the coast of Cornwall and soon has reason to suspect that one of her colleagues is a psychopath and that she may not get out alive. I could have chosen any other setting for that particular story – nearly any other industry or even a big family with a dark past would have done just as well. I chose investment-banking for authenticity, because it is the industry I know best. I appear to have succeeded in my quest for authenticity: despite all my efforts to put a humorous spin on the bank’s problems and my frequent exaggerations, most of my reviewers have declared that investment-banking is just like that!

In this context, it is worth noting, however, that I took a few creative liberties when writing Off-site. MY favorite invention is the secluded residence Moorland Manor, where the off-site meeting takes place. I have heard that some investment-bankers were inspired to pursue a banking career by Gordon Gecko, the villain in the original Wall Street movie, who was brilliantly portrayed by Michael Douglas.  I sincerely hope that nobody ever embarks on an investment-banking career because they are lured by the prospect of an invitation to their boss’ fancy residence somewhere on the coast. They would be bound to be disappointed. In reality, cash-strapped investment-banks are much more likely to hold their “off-site” meetings on-site, in shabby internal meeting rooms. I invented Moorland Manor because I didn’t want to put my readers through a thriller that was completely devoid of atmosphere – not even for the sake of authenticity. These tweaks notwithstanding, much of the book’s sinister atmosphere is actually derived from its investment banking setting.

I believe that there is scope for many more investment-banking thrillers. I hope that many authors will give it a whirl and eventually create a new genre. I personally will take a short break from writing investment-banking thrillers, as I am currently working on an idea for a medical thriller.

Interviewees Harry Bingham and Martin Bodenham writes financial thrillers. :) That was great, thank you, Marietta.

Marietta Miemietz was born in Germany. She has spent 15 years working in the financial services industry, mainly as a pharmaceutical equity research analyst, in the US, Germany and most recently, the UK. She has wanted to be a writer since she learned to read and write and always carries a notebook to capture funny or bizarre anecdotes. She likes to write books that are entertaining, upbeat, humorous, packed with suspense and unexpected developments and that have a happy ending. Portraying interesting and endearing characters is her first priority.

During her many years in investment banking, she has met many talented and entrepreneurial people, as well as some annoying and crazy specimens. One day, she took a walk and thought about how much more exciting it would be if one of the latter was a dangerous psychopath; the idea for her first thriller “Off-site” was born. The protagonist, Aline, has some auto-biographical features; all of the other characters, events and places are purely fictitious, but never far-fetched. Marietta speaks several languages and is working on the German and French translations for “Off-site”, as well as a new thriller.

You can find more about Marietta and her writing via…her website, author page on Amazon.com, and her book is also available on Amazon.co.uk.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with novelist and non-fiction author, and radio host Jim Strait – the four hundred and forty-third of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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5PM Fiction 056: It brought him luck last time

Welcome to the fifty-sixth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a dialogue where a character has lost something, so here is my 188-worder.

It brought him luck last time

“Mum, where’s my tie?”

“Which one?”

“The blue one.”

“You’ve got dozens of blue ties.”

“The one with the white dots.”

“Oh, that one.”

“And?”

“Washing basket.”

“Washed washing basket or to be washed washing basket?”

“To be washed. Your dad borrowed it and got curry sauce down it.”

“Mum!”

“Wear another one!”

“But it’s my lucky one.”

“Sorry, Sam.”

“Any chance…?”

“Sorry, got to take Mrs Talbot to…”

“Oh mum! Why did Dad borrow it anyway?”

“To take a client out for dinner.”

“But he’s got loads of ties.”

“He said it brought him luck last time…”

“Last time! He knew I had a job interview today… in an hour! What am I supposed to do now?”

“You’re going to have to pick something else… what about the black one with the grey…”

“But I’m wearing a black suit. It’ll look like I’m going to a funeral.”

“The job is at an undertakers, Sam.”

“I know but they’ll think I’m taking the pi…”

“Sam!”

“Well, it’ll be like me putting on a Welsh accent when I’m speaking to someone from…”

“Wales, yes. Sam. Interview… an hour… tie?”

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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5a.m. Flash 260712 – Writing competitions for August

Every now and then at 5a.m. (probably posted by my clone) I will be bringing you a newsflash, update on what I’m doing, invited guest piece, or whatever takes my fancy, and today I’m talking about writing competitions with August deadlines…

August is nearly upon us and this means a fresh month on my blog’s competitions calendar. Below is a list of competitions with August deadlines, some closing on the 1st so you don’t have long!

AUGUST

It’s not an August competition but it’s just opened… one of my writing groups runs the annual H.E. Bates Short Story Competition (deadline end October – details here. This year we have a theme (and new judge: Stephen Booth): ‘A walk at midnight’. :)

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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Author Spotlight no.105 – Gale Martin

Complementing my daily blog interviews, today’s Author Spotlight, the one hundred and fifth, is of novelist Gale Martin. Click here for a list of the other spotlights.

Gale Martin is an award-winning writer of contemporary fiction who plied her childhood penchant for telling tall tales into a legitimate literary pursuit during midlife. She began writing her first novel at age eleven, finishing one three decades later.

Her first novel, Don Juan in Hankey, PA, is a humorous homage to Don Giovanni, Mozart’s famous tragicomic opera about the last two days of Don Juan’s life. It was named a Finalist in the 2012 National Indie Excellence Awards for New Fiction.

She blogs about opera–the art form, not the platform—at Operatoonity.com, and is an opera reviewer for Bachtrack.com, an online site featuring classical performance worldwide. She can name any aria in three notes. Okay, five notes, perfectly sung, with full orchestration.

Her second novel Grace Unexpected was just released this month, and is wryly witty women’s fiction. It features a protagonist who can hear her ovaries ticking, with a heart of pure gold, wrapped in lead. But a string of crummy boyfriends would do that to any lovable woman who’s waiting and waiting and waiting for Mr. Right.

Martin would commit a misdemeanor to score some Babybel cheese and goes weak-kneed for hummingbirds. She is a wife and mother of one and a communications director by profession who owes her signature joie de vivre to regular Curves workouts.

She has a master of arts in creative writing from Wilkes University. She lives in Eastern Pennsylvania, which serves as a rich source of inspiration for her writing.

And now from the author herself:

Serving the reader

I enjoy reading across many genres—mainstream contemporary, historic fiction, cozy mystery, thriller, literary. Not surprisingly, my reading is reflected in my writing. I have written full-length fiction in a number of genres as well and enjoy the freedom to do so.

Also not surprisingly, faithful readers expect a certain style and standard from the authors they like, myself included. I’ve just published my first two novels which are contemporary humorous fiction, which most people have considered to be funny books. But I’m nearly finished with another that is contemporary suspense with only the gentlest of humor used here and there, to lighten the tension. I have one editing pass to complete, and then I’m shopping it.

So, I understand why authors use pseudonyms. One of my favorite writers of Victorian-era mystery suddenly went fantasy with a new release. And I hated it. I couldn’t finish it. I was disappointed in the writer and in myself for a long time. Then I asked myself why I’d felt betrayed by her latest literary effort.

It wasn’t until I began writing creatively myself that I understood why this writer wanted to try something different. Perhaps she’d always wanted to write fantasy but knew that historic crime fiction was more marketable. So, she made her reputation on a certain kind of writing and then had earned enough clout and success to write what she wanted.

As much as the writer in me would like to holler, “Don’t fence me in, readers,” I realize that a publisher might want me to adopt a pseudonym as a condition of picking up the suspenseful novel. I wouldn’t object either because the person who matters most in this triangular relationship is the reader.

I’ve read books, sometimes famously authored, in which the author has forgotten about the reader. The worst offender in this category was Colleen McCullough’s Antony and Cleopatra, a book so dense with the rotted fruit of torturous research that I gagged on it. I wanted a book with wonderful, sweeping storytelling like The Thorn Birds. I got Encyclopedia Cleopatra. Did I do my homework, you may be thinking, preparing myself for the newer release? No, I didn’t. I listed her as a favorite author in my local library’s nifty new release distribution program, and when I got the phone call, I picked up the book.  She’s not the only offender, but readers do know when the writer is writing to serve the story or to serve themselves. I’d previously thought Colleen McCullough brilliant. Now, she seems arrogant.

Perhaps you find the tone of this Author Spotlight confusing, even brassy. The bio is cheeky, but this essay is rather straightforward. The fact is that I have two funny books on the market. If and when another book is published, I intend to address the style and tone of the overarching author bio that serves all my work.

Sometimes the best pieces of advice are simply said and easily internalized. I remember hearing a story about a famous navy admiral universally held in highest regard. When people would ask him how he became so high-functioning, this was his response. “Every day, I go to my safe, unlock it and pull out a piece of paper. On it is written, ‘Port—left. Starboard—right.’”

My port and starboard happen to be “serve the reader” and “serve the story” (but “serve the story” is the stuff of another post, though they are related topics).

How about you? What simple precepts guide your writing day in and day out?

Morgen: Knowing I have to get my story online every day for 5pm. :) Thank you, Gale.

And for more about Gale and her writing via…

Both of Gale Martin’s novels are currently available on Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble.com and some independent bookstores in print and ebook. Her blog “Scrivengale” can be found on her website at http://galemartin.me, where she features author Q&As. You can also find her on:

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The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with historical and non-fiction R L Tecklenburg – the four hundred and forty-second of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
 

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5PM Fiction 055: Nita readings

Welcome to the fifty-fifth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a monologue from the prompt ‘cold snap’, so here is my 286-worder.

Nita readings

It was a cold snap the day that Matthew was born. Fifteen hours I was in labour. Bleedin’ freezin’ I was too, but was he grateful? Never was, never has been, never comes to visit neither. Miserable old… no, Nita, the man doesn’t want to know about that. Come to tell me, haven’t you?

1929. Between the wars, ‘the golden years’, my dad used to say. Said we never had it so good before… now, who was it? Wilson? MacMillan? Churchill? One of those.

I was one of twins. Florrie’s in an old people’s home – not as compos mentis as me, poor thing.

Cold snap back then too… October 1929, one of the coldest on record, of course only up to then, got colder after that, global cooling as they say now. Mum couldn’t have had it as bad as when I had Matthew though… starch and bare; everything about that hospital was starch and bare… grey walls, grey linen, grey matron. I reckon they named a battleship after her… like Hattie Jacques in Carry on Matron, only there weren’t no laughing that day. I was happy of course, despite the cold. Ted wasn’t best pleased; he’d wanted a girl… unusual that for a man, thought they all wanted a football team, but he grew to love him when we were told we weren’t going to have any more. Closer to him than I was in the end… thick as thieves, which is why they ended up inside. Didn’t need to, we weren’t as bad off as some.

So where do you want me? In the lounge? Do you use a crystal ball or is it those tarot cards?

Sorry, what?

Meter readings?

Oh… yes… just through here.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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5AM FLASH 250712: two flash fiction pieces accepted in CAKE

Every now and then at 5am (probably posted by my clone) I will be bringing you a newsflash, update on what I’m doing, invited guest piece, or whatever takes my fancy, and today I have a little woo-hoo for yours truly.

I’ve had two flash fiction pieces accepted for issue 3 (July 2012) of ‘CAKE short and sweet’, a magazine that is distributed free around eating establishments in Manchester, England and available online. My two pieces (out of the ten stories in the magazine) are…

The last two digits

Tucking herself away in the darkest corner of the town’s only library, Rosie opened the book where the corner was creased and started reading.

Click here to read more…

For the first time in a long time

As you turn the key you wait for movement, anything, but nothing happens. It’s old so you don’t wind it again, but you’d love to see the ballerina in action.

Click here to read more…

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Thank you, Sarah. :)

I love flash fiction and write mostly shorter pieces for my daily 5pm Fiction slot. This blog lists various submissions and competitions for this format. If you know of other opportunities that aren’t listed, please do email me.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Guest post: My road to (very moderate) success by Sofia Essen

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of becoming a published author, is brought to you by chick lit novelist Sofia Essen.

My road to (very moderate) success

Taming wild horses is much less difficult than attempting to become a “published author”. Of course, I only speak from my own experience in both. Horses are easy to communicate with once you learn their language. I understand them. The feral beast that is publishing remains an indecipherable enigma to me in many ways.

I started writing when I moved to a small village in Crete three years ago. I spent my first year on the island writing my novel at a leisurely pace and thoroughly enjoying myself. Then I devoted the following 18 months to querying literary agents. They were 18 rather painful months in which I received a rejection letter almost every week. After the first dozen or so letters, one would think one would become immune to the sting of rejection. But each negative response was a blow to my ego, more agonizing than the kick of any horse’s hoof. Yes, again I speak from experience in both.

The majority of the rebuffs came in standard form rejection letters, impersonal and coolly professional. A handful of agents offered advice along with their refusal to represent me. “Try a Swedish agent,” one suggested. While I’m still a Swedish citizen, I left the country more than twenty years ago. My book is written in English, and I speak better Thai than Swedish. But I queried every Swedish literary agent I could find on the web anyway. None of them wanted anything to do with my novel. “You should contact a local agent,” I was told. As it turns out, literary agents are thin on the ground here on this island and they, understandably, weren’t interested in representing a Swedish woman who had spent two decades in Asia prior to moving to Crete and writing a novel in English.

Luckily, the beauty of living in Crete kept me sane and distracted me from the ever-growing pile of rejection letters. Crete has a way of softening harsh realities with its gentler pace of life and persuasive routines – I’m expected at my local café for a cup of sweet Nescafé coffee without milk at ten o’clock every morning whether I’m having a bad day or not.

I had almost given up hope of ever getting my novel published when 48fourteen, a small ePublishing company, sent me an e-mail in which they expressed a wish to read my full manuscript. A week later, they sent a contract! I signed the contract faster than you can say “whiplash”.

Of course, I would have loved to be signed by a major publishing house. As I was writing my novel, I had extravagant daydreams of book tours, giving interviews, and maybe talking about “Change of Pace” on Oprah and chatting with Ellen. Oh yes, I had some wonderfully grand delusions.

I’m old-fashioned at heart, and it would have been amazing to see my book in print, not just downloadable online.  There’s something magical about going into a bookshop and being surrounded by stories on sturdy shelves. I love to walk up and down the aisles, running my fingers along the book spines as I go. To me, the experience of reading a good book is improved by turning its pages one at the time, hearing the pages whisper against each other, and inhaling the musky scent of ink of paper. My biggest dream is to one day pop into a bookshop and find a book with my name on it. I’d pick it up to feel the weight of it in my hands, sniff it, and finally open it and read the dedication. It would say, “To Mum and Dad with all my love.”

Until that day comes (fingers crossed), I’m satisfied knowing I did my best to write a good story, which people will be able to read and hopefully enjoy.

That’s (hopefully) why we write although Oprah and Ellen would be a bonus. :)  Thank you, Sofia.

Sofia has a blog at http://essentially-sofia.blogspot.gr and Change of Pace is available on: Amazon.com, Barnes and Noble.com and 48fourteen.com.

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with poet, novelist and publisher Sam Smith – the four hundred and forty-first of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 24, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, interview, novels, writing

 

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5PM Fiction 054: This is my mother we’re talking about

Welcome to the fifty-fourth in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story to include the following words: python, red, pool, bottle, fine, so here is my 202-worder.

This is my mother we’re talking about

Standing in front of the supermarket’s shelves, Stacey knew she wanted something different.

“Why don’t we just go for chocolates and a bottle of plonk like we usually do?” Trevor said, looking at the exit.

“Fine for any old birthday but this is her seventieth.”

“She won’t be expecting anything flash. What you’ve arranged is already plenty.”

“A Red Letter Day Pool Party is hardly special.”

“But it’s who goes, not what happens, surely.”

“This is my mother we’re talking about, Trevor.”

“What about a charity thing? Buy an African village some goats.”

“She’s too patriotic.”

“Sponsor a donkey over here then.”

“She likes animals but donkeys make her sneeze.”

“Erm… OK. What about skydiving?”

“Afraid of heights.”

“That rules out a hot air balloon trip, then. So something on the ground. Brands Hatch or Silverstone.”

“Dad doing any more than seventy on the M1 makes her nervous.”

“How about… no, maybe not.”

“What?”

“Something I read about in the paper the other day but…”

“Go on…”

“She likes animals…”

“The hairless kind, yes.”

“How about a python circus?”

“Eh?”

“A python circus.”

“As in Monty Python.”

“No, as in zoo.”

“With…”

“Snakes, yeah.”

“I don’t know about that…”

“Oh, I do.”

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Photography courtesy of morguefile.com. You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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5AM FLASH 240712: 10 Questions Your Readers Shouldn’t Have to Ask

Every now and then at 5am (probably posted by my clone) I will be bringing you a newsflash, update on what I’m doing, invited guest piece, or whatever takes my fancy, and today I’d like to mention a great article I spotted online (via a Twitter tweet actually)…

10 Questions Your Readers Shouldn’t Have to Ask by K.M. Weiland.

This article starts… ‘The most important thing an author can present in the beginning of any scene is a question that will hook readers into needing to know the answer. The second most important thing is making certain that question isn’t the wrong question.’ The ten questions are… (see the article for K.M.’s explanations)

  1. What is the character’s name?
  2. How old is this person?
  3. What does this person look like?
  4. Who is this person?
  5. Where is this scene taking place?
  6. What year / season / day is it?
  7. Who is this character interacting with
  8. What is the narrator’s relation to the other character(s)?
  9. What is the character trying to accomplish in this scene?
  10. Why should I care about any of this?

These are brilliant questions that, as writers, we should be asking ourselves when writing / editing the story. We will of course know more than goes into the piece but as long as we can answer the questions from the final version then we will, hopefully, feel that the reader won’t stumble on any aspect of it and reach the end feeling entertained / educated… or both. :)

See http://wordplay-kmweiland.blogspot.fr/2012/07/10-questions-your-readers-shouldnt-have.html for the full article.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 24, 2012 in articles, blog, tips, writing

 

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Post-weekend Poetry 031: Lies by Alison Strange-Green

Welcome to Post-weekend Poetry and the thirty-first poem in this series. This week’s piece is by Alison Strange-Green.

Lies

Quite unsure of her smile
Uncertainty plain to see
Vivid memories untrue
Of what had never been?
Desperate to attract with lies
Mischievous stories told
Twisted words of innocence
her smile remained unsure
Cross examined, yet arrogant
she misled the eager throng
Leashing untold chaos
to never right the wrong?
Tearing at the fabric
Vague truths inside her lies
Accepting penance with rigour
No longer could she smile
Her past was such a lonely place
Full of foolish fantasy
Circumcised by corrupt lies
all innocence had vanished

Brewing with neglect and need
her story unearthed a tale
of dangerous lies, spun sinfully
destroying friendships through the tears

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I asked Alison what prompted this piece…

The poem “lies” was inspired by actual events. The poet was caught up in a web of deceit and lies. Finding her self in a position where by legally she was unable to expose the truth. Reeling from her anger and disgust at the out come of the situation she penned the poem “Lies”. It reveals the ugliness of human nature and lengths a person will go to achieve their ultimate goal of misguided revenge. Completely disregarding thoughts and feelings of others. Showing no remorse for the consequences of their actions. Destroying families and communities forever. A deeply personal and thought provoking piece of poetry as life seen through the eyes of the poet Alison Strange-Green.

Thank you Alison.

Alison Strange–Green was born during the 1970s in the sleepy coal mining community of Caerphilly, South Wales. Her early childhood memories mostly consist of life in the nearby village of Ystrad Mynach, where she attended the local girl’s school, until her family uprooted and moved to nearby Blackwood. Being an only child and finding it hard to adjust, she led a solitary existence initially, spending hours absorbed in her own imagination and thoughts. During this time she first explored her unique creative nature. Slowly gaining confidence she made friends with ease, although still a very introspective and shy creature.

An above average student at school, she provided more enthusiasm than talent in most subjects. It was only during her later years that the emphasis of education was realised, resulting in many academic achievements during her 20s. Unfortunately, a complex neurological condition was then diagnosed and work seemed unlikely. This however only excelled Alison’s thirst for knowledge. Longing for the acceptance of her peers she moved out of the family home in the late 80’s, only to return a few years later more confident and self-adjusted. Her more creative nature was in full flow, as was the poetry and short stories she had begun to write.

During the winter of 1993 she made a life-changing decision. Without warning she moved to Wigan, Lancashire at the tender age of 23, where she continued her combined Honours Degree in Sociology, Psychology and Forensic Psychology at UCLAN. She also established and managed a mental health unit for several years, which was both inspiring and rewarding.

As quickly as she arrived she left Lancashire. Even after 15 years she yearned to return to her native Wales. Wales often being the inspiration for many verses. Soon after returning home she married and is now happily surrounded by her family, husband Michael, Alexander 6 years and Isabella 10 months in Newport, South Wales. Alison’s creative streak shines throughout “Nocturnal Sunrise” displaying her own thoughts and imagination laid bare. Her website is www.strange-green.com.

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If you’d like to submit your poem (40 lines max) for consideration for Post-weekend Poetry take a look here.

The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with novelist and short story author Marc Nash – the four hundred and fortieth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays.

 
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Posted by on July 23, 2012 in ebooks, poetry

 

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5PM Fiction 053: The one she’d bought the dress for

Welcome to the fifty-third in the series: 5pm Fiction.

Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.

I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story starting ‘As the hand clasped around her waist…’. Here is my 582-worder.

The one she’d bought the dress for

As the hand clasped around her waist, Jess wriggled in vain to escape.

The music slowed, the lights dimmed, and Jess smiled politely at Norman Felsham, the school nerd, who 20 years on, looked little different; glasses as thick as double-glazing, cress from the hours-old triangular sandwiches poking out from between his tobacco-stained teeth. He was the last person Jess wanted to slow dance with but his sad expression made it hard for her to leave.

“No name badge,” Norman said.

“No, it wouldn’t stick.”

“Doesn’t matter, I’d remember you anywhere, Jessica Allen. Nice dress by the way,” he said, smiling broadly.

Jess kept her gaze on his eyes to avoid his mouth. “Thanks. It’s new. A one-off.”

“Suits you,” Norman said, pulling her even closer.

The three or four minutes of ‘Three Times a Lady’ was made all the less bearable by Norman singing loudly, and out of tune. Everyone else had stopped dancing and now stared at Jess.

Before she could say she had to go, the music changed, the lights went up. Norman pushed her away before pulling her back in again, curling her into his chest.

Thrusting out his right hand, he then lead Jess into a tango and strutted across the room.

As Jess sped past her old classmates, she spotted the one she’d wanted to see, the only one she’d missed, the one she’d bought the dress for…  Tom Harper, all six feet four of him, still with the sportsman physique and all-year tan.

He smiled at her and nodded.

As she mouthed a “help!”, he shook his head, the smile turning into a laugh, but then stood in their way, forcing Norman to stop.

“May I cut in?” Tom asked him.

Norman frowned. “Well…”

“It’s only fair,” Jess piped up.

“Very well,” Norman conceded.

As Tom took Norman’s place and Jess’ hands in his, she noticed his wedding ring. “You’re married!” she said before she could help herself.

Tom looked at the wide platinum band then over to the corner of the room. “Yeah, Sam’s in the toilet. Nice dress, by the way.”

“Thank you, it’s new,” Jess said with as little enthusiasm as she’d shown Norman.

As she and Tom danced, Jess looked towards the toilets waiting for his wife to appear.

Just as the song was ending, a stunning brunette appeared and Jess’s heart sank further. She was as beautiful as Jess had expected but she’d seen her before, in the dress shop, the assistant who’d shown her the dress, said how much it suited her. Jess hadn’t been sure until Norman had complimented her and then when Tom had said the same, she’d known it was the right choice. Until Sam had appeared… wearing exactly the same dress, only a couple of sizes smaller.

Jess and Tom stopped dancing and as Sam crossed the room, Jess noticed behind her a tall dark-haired man also walking towards them. Jess stood up a little straighter, put her shoulders back and smiled. ‘Keep coming,’ she thought, “don’t stop, don’t veer off, be single.” He didn’t look like anyone she’d gone to school with, a year above perhaps.

Then ‘Sam’ waved at someone Jess didn’t recognise and walked to the side of the room.

Jess turned to Tom who was still looking ahead and smiling. She turned back and only saw the man, then it all fell into place.

“Hi, darling,” Tom said as he reached them, “I’d like you to meet… sorry, your name was?”

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 23, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, short stories, writing

 

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