Welcome to the one hundred and twenty-eighth in this daily series that is ‘5pm Fiction’.
Late April 2011 I discovered http://StoryADay.org and the project that is to write 31 stories in 31 days. Anyone who knows me or follows this blog, knows how passionate I am about short stories so my clichéd eyes lit up at this new marvel. And just a few days later there I was, breathing life into new characters. This went on to become (with some editing of course) my 31-story collection eBook Story A Day May 2011.
I was nearing completion of the 2012 project when I decided that I didn’t want to stop at the end of May so 5PM Fiction was born. I put a load of prompts on the 5PM Fiction page and today’s was to write a story including the following keywords: pocket, borrow, meaning, steal, lack, so here is my 159-worder.
Something borrowed
It was the ‘something borrowed’ that meant so much to Laura. She’d had a pocket especially sewn into the wedding dress to keep it safe. Her grandfather’s pocket watch. Nothing special you might think and it wasn’t at the time he’d given it to her, just sentimentality but when her mother died it took on a whole new meaning.
It had been sitting on her mother’s kitchen table when Laura had collected the dress and taken it to her for safe-keeping. Only now it was her mother she wanted to keep safe; buy her a new heart, steal one, borrow one.
Remaining on her bedside table or in her jeans pocket for the three week’s between her mother’s death and the day she became Laura Elliott.
As the music started, Laura turned to her father and they both stepped forward. She wasn’t sure whether it was his lack of emotion that was holding hers back but she was grateful.
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