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Originally posted on Morgen's Online Novel Writing Group:
Welcome to Morgen’s Online Novel Writing Group and the first novel extract submitted for this blog (yesterday’s was a replay of a Red Pen Critique). :) This 837-word extract is by epic fantasy novelist Yvonne Hertzberger. Please do comment in the section below telling us what you liked about this story and, what if anything, the author could do to improve upon it. Thank you – it’s very much appreciated!
The Dreamt Child: Book Three of Earth’s Pendulum
Synopsis: Liannis is the goddess Earth’s seer and servant. In this excerpt she has been living alone with a horse and kestrel, with whom she can ‘mind-speak’ for the entire winter – recovering from the trials of the past two years (Book Two). Merrist, her peg-legged servant, with Earth’s help, has located her and now must inform her she must to return to society and to her duties.
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