H.E. Bates Short Story Competition

** The 2013 Competition’s Winners are announced here **

The long-running H.E. Bates Short Story Competition has opened and this year’s judge is Jane Wenham-Jones.

Herbert Ernest Bates, CBE (1905–74), better known as H. E. Bates, was an English writer and author. His best-known works include Love for LydiaThe Darling Buds of May, (starring David Jason and Catherine Zeta-Jones, Pam Ferris amongst others) and My Uncle Silas. Bates was born on May 16, 1905 in RushdenNorthamptonshire, and educated at Kettering Grammar School. After leaving school, he worked as a reporter and a warehouse clerk.

Before the competition details, here’s a little about Jane:

JaneJane Wenham-Jones is a well-known author and journalist who regularly appears on radio and TV. She is a columnist for Woman’s Weekly Fiction Special and her local paper the Isle of Thanet Gazette as well as being the agony aunt for Writing Magazine. She has published four novels: Raising The Roof, Perfect Alibis, One Glass Is Never Enough and, most recently, Prime Time as well as two non-fiction books: Wannabe a Writer? and Wannabe a Writer We’ve Heard Of? She lives with her family in Broadstairs, Kent, where two of her novels are set. Her latest book, 100 Ways to Fight the Flab, was published in 2014. For more info see and Jane also blogs at and has recently made a TV pilot for aspiring authors which can be watched on You can read Jane’s tips for entering competitions here.

Run by the Northampton Writers Group (of which I am Chair and therefore a first-round judge :)), the details of the H.E. Bates competition are on (with the rules / entry details at and below:

  • Write us a short story on any theme or genre of your choice.
  • Entries must be no longer than 2,000 words in length.
  • Email / postal entries accepted.
  • The competition is open to all writers, from anywhere in the world.
  • 1st Prize £150; 2nd Prize £100; 3rd Prize £50
  • Special prize for the best story written by a Northamptonshire writer £50 (not awarded if the story has won 1st, 2nd or 3rd Prize).
  • In addition, a prize of £50 will be awarded for the best story by a writer who is under 18 years old on the closing date for entries.
  • The entry fee is £4 for each story submitted or 3 stories for £10 (£1 for each story submitted by an Under 18 writer). Entrants are invited to submit as many stories as they wish.
  • The initial judging panel will comprise members of the Northampton Writers’ Group.
  • The Head Judge is Jane Wenham-Jones (details above). Previous judges have included Della Galton, Stephen Booth, Katie Fforde, Sue Moorcroft, and Judith Allnatt.
  • Closing date for entries is midnight (UK time) on 15th November 2014.
  • Prizes will be awarded at a prize-giving ceremony on Friday 23rd January 2015 at The Moulton Theatre, Northampton.

* * *

I have to say (well, I don’t have to but I’m being kind) that one of the stories I read last year didn’t have a beginning or end (only a middle) so lost points for that (I start at 10 and work downwards). Nick, our competition organiser, let it go through to the panel which I wouldn’t have done as to me it wasn’t a short story so he’s clearly kinder than me. :) We’ve also had some in the past that have been over the word limit and these days (with word counters on most word processing packages) there’s no excuse for being disqualified for that reason.

So there you have it. Nick (who gets your stories first, removes the names then distributes them), myself and the other group members look forward to reading your stories. I always say I’m firm but fair (you can hear how I critique in one of my red pen podcasts) and whilst I can’t be bribed (unless it’s with banoffee pie), if you have any questions feel free to email me.

The Northampton Writers’ Group (critique group) meets every other Thursday night in central Northampton, England – do email me if you’re local and are interested in joining. More details on Writing Groups.


33 responses to “H.E. Bates Short Story Competition

  1. Ruth Holroyd

    November 17, 2011 at 4:20 pm

    I might just enter this since I wrote a short story recently for another competition and forgot to send it off in time for the deadline! Wish me luck.

    • morgenbailey

      November 17, 2011 at 6:56 pm

      Absolutely! But don’t tell me anything about it as I’m one of the judges. :) I don’t get to know author names so I’ll never know if I know any of them.

  2. loujack60ouise Jack

    October 30, 2012 at 7:05 pm

    I want to enter this competition. Can you please tell me where to submit an e-mail entry to and how to make payment.

  3. morgenbailey

    October 30, 2012 at 7:25 pm

    Hi Lou. I did have the links about half-way down the page but they weren’t clear (only saying ‘here’) so I’ve put them in full. The one you want is Good luck. If you do enter I’ll be reading your story (I’m Chair and one of the initial judges so I’ve asked to read them all) but Nick takes the names off so I won’t know it’s you. :)

  4. loujack60ouise Jack

    October 30, 2012 at 9:16 pm

    Thanks Morgen, I did find it, doh! Story written, brilliantly obviously and being posted tomorrow!

    Many thanks. Lou

  5. morgenbailey

    October 30, 2012 at 11:54 pm

    Thank you, Lou. I look forward to reading it (incognito of course).

  6. Tam

    January 5, 2013 at 7:40 pm

    Hi Morgen

    I was just wondering when the shortlisted and winning entries are going to be announced?

    Many thanks


  7. morgenbailey

    January 5, 2013 at 8:05 pm

    Hi Tam. I’ll check for you. As soon as Nick (our Competition Secretary) puts them on the group’s site I’ll put them on here. The winning entries won’t be until after the 11th as they’re not announced until the prize-giving but hopefully the other information will be available soon.

  8. Tam

    January 5, 2013 at 8:12 pm

    Thanks Morgen, fingers crossed then ;) Either way looking forward to seeing the winning entries.

    Many thanks


  9. Jenny Worstall

    May 26, 2013 at 12:18 pm

    Hi Morgen! Would you like some banoffee pie?

  10. Jane Risdon

    October 6, 2013 at 1:47 pm

    Good luck everyone. I may enter anther time.

  11. Rosa Johnson

    January 21, 2014 at 10:54 am

    You have been talking about Northampton’s critique group. I live on the South Coast so no chance of meeting up with you there but please can you give us -WordWrights in Titchfield- a few tips on how to organise our sessions. We have about 8 members critiquing chapters of novels we are writing.
    best wishes and many thanks, Morgen,

  12. Rosa Johnson

    January 21, 2014 at 12:24 pm

    Thank you Morgen. I think we are observing all your suggestins but i didn’t explain ours is rather a different set up. The crits always meet in someone’s home. Currently we are trying to have chapters/or parts of chapters up to 2000 words. We circulate them by e-mail Everyone has then had a chance to read all the pieces.
    We write notes to ourselves or proper critiques to the author and get a discussion going on every piece submitted. We need a time keeper for this or some people monopolise and others don’t get a look in. We think/hope our mastery of the system will improve with practise.
    Any suggetions you would like to make would be well received.

    thanks a lot,

    • morgenbailey

      January 21, 2014 at 1:11 pm

      Thanks, Rosa. I know of another group who works this way and I’ve added this to a new bullet point:

      How to split up the time? The fairest way is to divide the time you have by the number of members attending. That said, a poem would usually take less time to feedback on than a novel extract (and I’d recommend limiting those to 2,000 words a piece) so if you make a list of members’ contributions in advance, you can start with the shorter pieces and see what time you have left for longer pieces. I don’t recommend always leaving the novelists until last though because they will, rightly, feel less important. You may want to start with reading out information e.g. competitions etc.and if you have time, have a ten-minute nature / refreshment break midway.

      Some writing groups email their writing in advance so that members can prepare their feedback and either email back then discuss generally or specifically on the evening. This is a great idea for saving time during the meeting especially where there are a large number of members, and helps those members who are unable to attend all the meetings. The meetings can then be split time-wise equally as the extracts don’t need to be read out but each member can have a fairer time for feedback. Any time remaining can then be spent writing on the spot (see Ideas for examples) or discussions for how the writers can develop their novels ongoing (so having synopses handy would be useful).

  13. fiona

    April 29, 2014 at 6:59 am

    I love writing so much but am so worried about other people reading my work. I have let several years of competitions pass me by. How may I overcome this angst? Do you offer feedback?

    • Rosa Johnson

      April 29, 2014 at 1:22 pm

      Dear Fiona, I too have had this feeling when reading out work in our writing group. It is expected of everyone who becomes a member. It is all part of the mutual support writing groups offer.

      I write more humorous stories and poetry than serious, and over a period of time I began to enjoy the responses of my colleagues. This encouraged me to enter competitions because if judges enjoyed my work they would comment, and in some cases I found my name on the long list. Short lists bring even more pleasure. On the other hand if I didn’t hear anything further I was able to forget my work had been read (and probably not enjoyed) by people I didn’t know.. It didn’t matter too much.

      Some competitions have an aura which even if one doesn’t score penetrates and a feeling of friendliness permeates. Northampton is one of these and I have entered the competition for several years. I think I was once shortlisted in the past.This year when I achieved a third place in the HEBates competition the friendliness of the group manifested itself in a mound of letters of congratulations from people I had never met but who had enjoyed my story arrived in my inbox.

      This is a wonderful feeling and if you take your courage in both hands Fiona, it will happen to you. You love writing and that love will get you there. I am not what anyone would call a successful writer but I am still trying and I hope when you are 77 you will still be trying too.

      Good wishes and good luck with your efforts. Your writing friends want to read your work and so do judges up and down the land. Writers are lovely people so communicate with them through your writing and you will succeed. Sincerely and with love, Rosa.

      • morgenbailey

        April 29, 2014 at 1:29 pm

        Absolutely, Rosa. Although it’s a tough industry in which to make money, it’s probably why everyone else is so supportive. I liken us to learner drivers; once we’ve passed, we appreciate how much dedication it takes but it feels great when you have that sense of achievement.

  14. Elaine McKay

    August 13, 2014 at 5:41 pm

    Hi, this is a great blog! Thank you for the information re the competition. May I ask, if a story has been on a blog, would the panel consider it published, or can it still be entered into the competition?

    • morgenbailey

      August 13, 2014 at 5:51 pm

      Thank you, Elaine. Unfortunately anything posted online is deemed published, regardless of the outlet, because it’s in the public domain. Of course few competitions will check but there’s always the risk that they will, and even if it’s deleted (e.g. only on the website for a year, in the case of some competitions), it’ll likely still appear in Google-type searches even if the page it links to is no longer valid.

      • Elaine McKay

        August 13, 2014 at 6:18 pm

        Thank you for such a prompt response. I just thought I’d check.

  15. Deborah

    October 29, 2014 at 4:37 am

    Hi Morgen, hope you’re well :o)
    I was just wondering if you could help… It says on the competition site that if you send in an entry via email, you’ll be sent an invoice so that you can pay. I sent a story in about a week ago and haven’t received one yet… do they send them out later on, or something?

    • Deborah

      October 31, 2014 at 6:21 am

      Just received one :o)


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