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Short Story Saturday Review 018: Samantha and the Cockerel by Maggie Harris

Maggie HarrisWelcome to the Short Story Saturday slot and the eighteenth review in this series. This week’s review is of one of the short stories of a collection, ‘Canterbury Tales on a Cockcrow Morning’, by poet, short story author, memoirist and interviewee Maggie Harris.

The first sentence launches us into Samantha’s world and the dilemma of the noisy cockerel. With Samantha being a newcomer to the village we know this is going to spell trouble. We know it’s set in modern-day times by the 4×4 and new-build house, and from the off, the language is very rich with such phrases as ‘was wheedled into her turquoise gaze like a fisherman fighting a large tuna’. The tone is very friendly, as if the reader is sitting by a fire being told this tale, and the dialogue authentic, which adds another layer. There are touches throughout the piece that give clues as to Samantha’s lifestyle; the signed copy of Nigella’s latest book, the Hunter wellingtons and Home & Gardens magazine. We can’t help but take to the characters, good and bad, and feel every increasingly sorry for Gareth, although when he doesn’t defend Samantha as she expects him to do, our sympathy does switch slightly.

Samantha’s not going to win fans of Primark shoppers but that’s the great thing about fiction; we can have our characters being as horrible (snooty in Samantha’s case) as we’d like them to be.

I loved the twist when she goes into the local shop then when her plans are even more scuppered when we find out that her neighbour is involved in something Samantha has her sights on. But then events change again and we have the climax to the story which will definitely raise a smile.

This story is just one of fifteen so if they are as enjoyable as this one, you won’t be disappointed.

Thank you, Maggie, for inviting me read to your story.

maggie-coverCanterbury Tales on a Cockcrow Morning is a collection of short stories; 15 tales of modern-day Canterbury. From a homeless girl to a Chinese take-away owner who likes Country and Western, from a run-away schoolgirl who wants to be in a music video to a tale of two friends who meet up through the years: the stories link new migrants to Canterbury through their own voices, the voice of the storyteller and the city itself. Published by Cultured Llama in August 2012, the book will be launched and performed during the Canterbury Festival in October.

Maggie Harris has published five collections of poetry, and a memoir Kiskadee Girl. Her first collection, Limbolands won The Guyana Prize for Literature 2000. Her short story collection, Canterbury Tales on a Cockcrow Morning was published in August 2012, and launched during the Canterbury Festival. Her website is www.maggieharris.co.uk, she’s on Facebook (http://www.facebook.com/maggie.harris.984786) and LinkedIn (http://www.linkedin.com/pub/maggie-harris/27/540/217).

Canterbury Tales on a Cockcrow Morning is now out and had a successful launch in the Kent towns of Canterbury and Thanet, with more than 100 people coming along to the events. Maggie says, “I have struck oil with my current publishers, Cultured Llama, who are the most hard-working, hands-on, friendly, fair and helpful publishers.” That’s great news. Congratulations, Maggie.

The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with erotic writer and author marketing adviser Lucy Felthouse – the five hundred and eighty-third of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

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You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything. You can contact me and find me on the internetview my Books (including my debut novel!) and I also have a blog creation / maintenance service especially for, but not limited to, writers. If you like this blog, you can help me keep it running by donating and choose an optional free eBook.

For writers / readers willing to give feedback and / or writers wanting feedback, take a look at this blog’s Feedback page.

As I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t unfortunately review books but I have a list of those who do, and a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words (and post stories of up to 3,000 words). Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me posting it online in my new Red Pen Critique Sunday night posts, then do email me. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 

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Red pen session 009 – critique of The Desolate Garden, a novel extract by Danny Kemp

The ninth red pen podcast was released on 28th December 2011 and was part of a series of episodes dedicated to reading a short story or self-contained novel extract (with synopsis) and then talking about it afterwards. I am now running these on this blog.  For writers / readers willing to give free feedback and / or writers wanting feedback, take a look at this blog’s Feedback page.

I run a fortnightly critique group as well as critiquing other authors writing which I really enjoy so I thought I’d create podcast episodes doing this, and will now be running future ones on the blog, initially with the already-recorded episodes at 5pm daily (this is the last one) then every Sunday evening (UK times) from Sunday 16th December.

Please remember that it’s only one person’s (my) opinion and you, and the author concerned, are welcome to disagree with my interpretation – I will never be mean for the sake of it, but hope you find that I’m firm but fair. I type my comments for the recording as I read through the story as a reader would think as they read the story, although they would most likely be reading, not analysing, unless they’re writers too!

Regardless of what genre you write I hope that this helps you think about the way fiction is constructed and that you have enjoyed reading another author’s work, the copyright of which remains with them, then my suggestions for any improvement.

Today’s is a novel extract which was kindly emailed to me by Danny Kemp of London, England. The novel is called ‘The Desolate Garden’.

If you have any feedback on this or aspects of my website or blog, I’m always delighted to hear from you – my email address is morgen@morgenbailey.com.

And if you’re feeling brave enough to send me a short story or novel extract (with a brief synopsis please) – 3,000-words maximum – for these red pen blog sessions then feel free.

So without further ado, the synopsis and extract, then my feedback…

Synopsis

Only months before the murder of Lord Elliot Paterson, and his youngest son Edward, an address in Leningrad, is discovered hidden in the ledgers of the families private bank in Westminster, dating back to the1930′s. There is a spy in the family, but on whose side?

His eldest son, Harry, is recruited into the British Secret Service to uncover the traitor. The desolate garden is a twisting tale of deciet and intrigue with Harry, and an attractive girl from the Foreign Office, desperately trying to unravel the mystery, before anyone else mets the same fate.

I love the name Elliot (and often use it) so there’s brownie points before we’ve even got to the story. This synopsis tells us that it’s of the murder mystery genre with, I’m guessing, given the ‘attractive girl from the Foreign Office’, some romance. OK, now the novel extract.

Extract

I’ve never been one to reminisce, to rediscover memories locked away in parts of the mind only psychologists know about; but in those last few days that I had with my mother, I found myself swept away in her nostalgia. I had not thought of my father as being a handsome man – but there, in the photographs of their wedding, stood a person I could not recognise as him. As to her beauty, the wedding memorabilia only testified more strongly in confirmation of what I already knew. As to the man beside her…it was a stranger that I stared at. He looked taller than I remembered, with jet-black hair combed back from his forehead, sharp clean features in a strong commanding face, more mature than the 26 years of age that he was then. There was a dashing, debonair look about him, a nonchalant character whom I could believe had swept my mother off her feet, as she had told me. He was not the person I had always remembered him as.

“He was impetuous then, Harry, romantic and audacious – a lot like you are today, I suspect. He was dangerous around women. Are you the same?” I didn’t answer that question of hers, but understood entirely what she meant.

To me, he had always been an eccentric old man with no hidden charms or fascination. I searched those photographs and more, to find some of us together, but could find none. No snaps of us two kicking a ball or hitting one, riding ponies and whirling mallets in unfinished chukkas, leaning over the side of the boat and landing fish. In fact, none of us being father and son. Perhaps there were no secret memories, none there to find, even had I have looked closer. No shared happiness, no fun, no laughter, no hugs, no affection. Perhaps he had entered my life as he had left it; a disillusioned, self-obsessed man.

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Posted by on December 10, 2012 in critique, ebooks, ideas, novels, review, tips, writing

 

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Red pen session 007 – critique of On The Edge, a short story by Aaron

I originally recorded red pen critique as part of a series of podcast episodes dedicated to reading a short story or self-contained novel extract (with synopsis) and then talking about it afterwards. I am now running these on this blog. For writers / readers willing to give feedback and / or writers wanting feedback, take a look at this blog’s Feedback page.

I run a fortnightly critique group as well as critiquing other authors writing which I really enjoy so I thought I’d create podcast episodes doing this, and will now be running future ones on the blog, initially with the already-recorded episodes at 5pm daily then every Sunday evening (UK times).

Please remember that it’s only one person’s (my) opinion and you, and the author concerned, are welcome to disagree with my interpretation – I will never be mean for the sake of it, but hope you find that I’m firm but fair. I type my comments for the recording as I read through the story as a reader would think as they read the story, although they would most likely be reading, not analysing, unless they’re writers too!

Regardless of what genre you write I hope that this helps you think about the way fiction is constructed and that you have enjoyed reading another author’s work, the copyright of which remains with them, then my suggestions for any improvement.

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The story in this post was kindly emailed to me by Aaron and this story is called ‘On the edge’.

If you have any feedback on this or aspects of my website or blog, I’m always delighted to hear from you – my email address is morgen@morgenbailey.com.

And if you’re feeling brave enough to send me a short story or novel extract (with a brief synopsis please) – 3,000-words maximum – for these red pen blog sessions then feel free.

So without further ado, the story, then my feedback…

On The Edge

It’s no use you trying to see me.  No use you squinting towards where you know I am.  You won’t see me, even though you know that I’m there.  I’m downwind of you – which means even if you had the sense of smell of a Doberman, you still wouldn’t sniff me out – but upsun of you.  If you even look in my direction, you’ll have your pupils shrunk so small that you won’t seeanything properly for five minutes afterwards.  And then to kill time while you get your sight back, you’ll try to swipe sweat from your forehead every few seconds.  Except that you can’t even touch your forehead, can you?  It’s encased in that big helmet.  That helmet’s the best – the lightest and the strongest – that money can buy.  But it won’t get in my way.  It’s alright for stopping stones, beer cans, and the other stuff thrown at you, but no helmet in the world can stop what I’m firing.

But all the same, after wearing it for all this time, it must be feeling heavy.  Oh, I see that you agree, because you’ve just taken it off, and mopped your brow.  One of your trademark gestures, that.  Every half hour or so, off comes the helmet, out comes the hanky.  You’ve got the time, after all.  You’ve just reached the end of your line, that twenty yards that you’ve defended for the last day and a half.  Dab, dab, dab on your forehead, and the serious ‘keep it tight’ look towards your mate at the other end of your post.  He’s not really your mate, though, is he?  Just a colleague, or at best a comrade.  And anyway, he isn’t the same man as was there yesterday, or even this morning.  There’s always been someone there at the other end of the line, but six other men have been and gone, and you’re still there.

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Posted by on December 8, 2012 in critique, ideas, review, short stories, tips, writing

 

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5p.m. Flash 061212 – Free mystery eBook by RP Dahlke 6-8 December

Every now and then I post a 5a.m. flash, often listing a free eBook. Today however I found out about an eBook that is free today, tomorrow and Saturday and I didn’t want to wait until tomorrow morning to tell you about it so here’s a 5p.m. flash. :)

RP Dahlke’s A Dangerous Harbor (Mystery, Romance & a Bald Parrot) is available free from Amazon for the Kindle from Thurs Dec 6th- Sat. Dec 8th, 2012:

US: http://www.amazon.com/A-DANGEROUS-HARBOR-ebook/dp/B0062D4GM2

UK: http://www.amazon.co.uk/A-DANGEROUS-HARBOR-ebook/dp/B0062D4GM2

(for UK see comments section below)

Synopsis…

Dangerous_72dpi_RGB-finalBleary-eyed and sleep deprived after a long overnighter into Mexico, solo sailor and SFPD police detective, Katrina Hunter, thinks the mermaid twenty yards behind her thirty-two foot Westsail is nothing more than a sailor’s hallucination But everything she knows about floaters convinces her to turn her boat around for another look : Now, alone and isolated in the Mexican port’s police station for six hours she’s convinced that reporting the body of a floater to authorities was a mistake. Even the arrival of a handsome, if somewhat dour, Mexican/Italian investigator does nothing to dispel her growing anxiety that she’s about to be charged with the murder.

Chief Inspector, Raul Vignaroli, is as surprised by the attractive solo-sailor as he is to find that she’s a respected member of the San Francisco police force, and after some well-placed phone calls he’s sure that he’s found the perfect partner to help him solve a murder, if not the cure for his broken heart.

Released, she’s free to go. But leaving the police station hits a snag when two policemen march in, dragging a listless prisoner between them. But before Katy can dodge them for the exit, the prisoner raises his head and a startling pair of aquamarine eyes meet hers. He straightens his back, wincing at the angle of his cuffed wrists. “What the… Whisper?”

Suddenly, the sound of the ceiling fan is terribly loud. Blood pounds in her ears, her mouth goes dry, her palms are damp and her feet are nailed to the floor. In a knee jerk reaction, she hisses, “Don’t call me that!”

Thank you, RP!

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As I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t unfortunately review books but I have a list of those who do, and a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me posting it online in my new Red Pen Critique Sunday night posts, then do email me. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on December 6, 2012 in ebooks, novels, writing

 

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5a.m. Flash 041212 – Free mystery eBook by Jim Cliff 4-6 December

Jim Cliff’s book The Shoulders of Giants (A Jake Abraham Mystery) will be free on Kindle from 4th-6th December.

A missing girl.  A ruthless killer. A rookie P.I.
Jake Abraham is a child of the 80s, brought up by Jim Rockford, Thomas Magnum and three beautiful girls who worked for a man named Charlie.

He’s loving his new job as a Private Investigator and already has his first client – a disgraced former police captain whose daughter has disappeared.

When the girl shows up dead, Jake is drawn into a dangerous world of organised crime, police corruption, infidelity and serial murder.

With a terrified city in the grip of a killer who’s always one step ahead of the police, how can a raw young P.I. hope to make a difference?

The Shoulders of Giants is a fun, fast paced thriller in the mold of Raymond Chandler and Robert B. Parker.

Available from…

Jim Cliff lives in Hertfordshire, England, with his beautiful wife, two brilliant children and an aardvark.  Ok, so there isn’t actually an aardvark.

Thank you, Jim!

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As I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t unfortunately review books but I have a list of those who do, and a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me posting it online in my new Red Pen Critique Sunday night posts then do email me. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on December 4, 2012 in ebooks, events, novels, writing

 

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Author Spotlight no.140 – Jack Brody

Complementing my daily blog interviews, today’s Author Spotlight, the one hundred and fortieth, is of Jack Brody.

Jack Brody is a writer, ex-military, and an avid traveler. After his Army stint and then deciding to pass on law school, he went to film school, wrote screenplays, and held a number of jobs which ran from everything to working for a newspaper for one day, to film production, to then going into real estate (with at least five others along the way).  He’s fascinated by history, politics, and architecture, all of which play a part in his novels (yes, he already has two more in the works).

When not writing, he can often be found hiking with his two faithful dogs, occasionally breaking out the old BMW bike for a ride though the mountains, or playing volleyball or bar trivia with his friends.  He divides his time between his home in the Southern Appalachians and wherever his passport will take him. After reading Jon Krakauer’s bestselling ‘Under the Banner of Heaven’, he was inspired to undertake a full year of research in preparation for the novel. Taking what he’d learned, along with a bit of imagination, the result was the conspiracy thriller, The Moroni Deception.

And now from the author himself:

I’d written screenplays for a number of years, and had made several half-hearted attempts at a novel before, but not only was it so different, but it was so much harder I found than writing a screenplay, so I had tended to give up pretty easily.

I did, well, I won’t say “tons”, but literally pounds of research, from all the books I went through, notes that I took, and reams that I printed off from my internet research. While I had some idea in the beginning of what my story would be–which at the time, started out having to do with a rogue FBI agent who was investigating the murder of his Mormon girlfriend who had broken away from one of the LDS’s radical fundamentalist offshoots.  As you can see after reading it, it’s changed quite a bit from that.

I then probably took close to a year of doing nothing but researching and taking notes, mostly of what seemed like fascinating items to further explore and perhaps later work into the story.  As far as “The White Horse Prophecy” goes, I wish I could take credit, but Joseph Smith supposedly first came up with that in the 1840s.  There’s actually a pretty good Wikipedia entry on the prophecy that gives a basic explanation.  Mr. Romney has mostly dodged the question when asked about it, but I think back when he was running the first time, he said something along the lines that he considered the Prophecy to be a matter of “speculation and discussion by church members” and “not official church doctrine”.

If I could condense all the time I spent, doing both the research and the writing, it would probably be about two-and-a-half years.  However, and unfortunately for me, that’s not the way things work, especially when we’re not only living out our lives, but trying to put bread on the table with our day job. So the true time it took stretched out to almost five-and-a-half years. I started it more than a year prior to the election of 2008, which is how I remember.

When I read about how a guy like Dan Brown gets up every morning at 4:30 or some ridiculous hour, does an hour of exercise, and then sits down to write for four to five straight hours, or 10 to 15 full pages, I’m both impressed and amazed.  My writing time has always generally been limited by how much energy–both physical and creative–that I had left at the end of a working day.  I often found myself not beginning my writing until 11 at night, and then writing until 1 or sometimes 2 AM.  And that, again, was not every night.  I also had a very real case of “writer’s block” for about a year where no matter what I did or how hard I tried, I couldn’t get anything substantial down on the page.  I even went to a hypnotist, which didn’t do a lot, and I almost gave up.  Also during this time period, I had to deal with a heart attack at a relatively early age, which came completely out of the blue, and then after that, the year-and-a-half long battle a best friend of mine had to endure in his losing fight with cancer.

For The Moroni Deception, I started out with a completely different story.  I don’t even quite remember where along the way my protagonist turned into an investigative journalist, other than that I thought I wanted to create a character who solved his problems more with his brains than with what he was packing, which seemed to be so often the case with a lot of adventure / thriller protagonists I was reading at the time. With The Moroni Deception, which I think is fairly intricately plotted, a lot of the little details that I think made it that much better, came out along the way.  I, of course, had a general plot outline in my head, and then down on paper.  And then when something else would pop into my head, I would see first if it worked, second, if it actually made the story better, and then if it would work into the overall conspiracy. The lead conspirators / villains I didn’t settle on until probably two thirds of the way through that I was working on the book. But when I finally did settle on this person or persons who shall remain nameless, that’s when I then went back and made little subtle changes starting from the beginning.

Wow, what a life and how interesting to hear about the way you write. Thank you, Jack.

You can find more about Jack and his writing via…

Jack’s website: http://www.themoronideception.com where you can read the first chapters.

Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0093CDLSE

B&N: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-moroni-deception-jack-l-brody/1112755708

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The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with murder mystery novelist Peter Bradbury – the five hundred and sixty-sixth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on November 28, 2012 in ebooks, interview, novels, writing

 

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#NaNoWriMo 2012 – Crime Novel ‘Once Perfect’ – Days 17 to 19 & Festival of Romance

Every day around 5pm (UK time) during November, instead of the 5pm fiction slot (because it’s on hiatus for November / December – there are only so many hours in the day, even mine), I shall be updating you on my progress of my NaNoWriMo novel.

Where have the past three days gone? I spent the weekend at the Festival of Romance, Bedford (just under an hour from Northampton). Despite me not really being a romance writer (I say “not really” as my NaNoWriMo 2009 debut novel is a girl-meets-boy-boy-boy-boy… – I could go on, she meets over 40 of them! – chick-lit) I had a wonderful time and really enjoyed meeting up with some ‘old’ friends and meeting new ones.

I wasn’t expecting to get any writing done and I managed a big fat zero on Saturday then 142 words yesterday (don’t ask me how!) but have made up for it (almost) today with 2,815 words today. I’m still over 13,000 behind (13,618 to be exact) but still not panicking. I’m home all this week so hopefully if I have few distractions I should keep the momentum going.

The lovely NaNoWriMo stats tell me that at this rate I’ll finish on December 22nd (it said Christmas Day earlier today) so if I can squeeze 33 days into the next 11, I’ll be fine.

How are you doing? I know some of my Facebook and Twitter compatriots are not only storming ahead but they’ve passed the finish line (woo hoo!) but as long as I get over it I’ll be happy. Plus I’m loving what I’m writing (tighter perhaps than it should be but that’s no bad thing) so that’s what’s important.

More on the Festival of Romance (report on the Sunday morning pitch session and photos from the Saturday night rock art party) to follow shortly.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on November 19, 2012 in ebooks, events, NaNoWriMo, novels, self-publishing, writing

 

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Guest post: Book Talks (& giveaway) by Terri Morgan

Sunday nights are double-dose guest blog posts and the first of tonight’s duo, ‘writing is ageless’ by J Griffith Mitchell, has already gone live. Tonight’s second guest blog post, on the topic of live events, is brought to you by multi-genre author and interviewee Terri Morgan. See below for details of the giveaway.

Book talks

I think one of the reasons I became a writer was because I’m much more comfortable writing about things than talking about them. I can hold my own in conversations with friends, colleagues, even small groups of unfamiliar people, but the thought of speaking before a group of strangers had never appealed to me. Writing, for me, is an ideal way to communicate with multiple people because it allows me time to organize my thoughts, express them, and then polish my message before sharing it with others. It’s a strategy that has served me well during my career as a freelance journalist, and I saw no reason to change it even after I published my first novel.

Never say never. I quickly discovered that if I wanted to get the word out about my book, Playing the Genetic Lottery, I had to do a lot more than just tell my friends and brag about my accomplishment on Facebook. Still, when a friend of a friend suggested I talk about my novel at her local service club, I was apprehensive. Despite my concerns, I agreed to be the guest speaker at one of the club’s weekly lunch meetings, especially after she told me I could bring books with me to sell.

I had two weeks to prepare for my public speaking debut, and enlisted the help of friends to craft a speech. Then I rehearsed my talk and practiced reading the prologue of my book aloud. Finally the big day arrived, and I nervously made my way to the podium and faced 45 members of the local Rotary Club. A funny thing happened mid-way through my talk. The butterflies faded, and I started to enjoy myself. By the time my talk was over, I couldn’t wait to do another one.

I sent e-mails to a dozen or more local service clubs, offering my services as a speaker and followed up with phone calls. I found that many service clubs are looking for speakers, and that people are very interested in meeting a local author, especially one who is eager to talk about their book. When I make the arrangements to talk, I ask the facilitator about their club and its members. That helps me to tailor my talks to each different audience. Some groups are more interested in hearing about how I came to write my novel, which is a fictional memoir-style tale of a strong and resilient woman who grew up with two schizophrenic parents. Some groups are more interested in finding out about self publishing; others want me to talk about mental illness. I keep my talks short. I speak for about five minutes, read from the prologue of my novel, then talk for another five minutes or so. Then I open up the presentation for questions. Most of the time, the question and answer period goes on much longer than my talk and reading. At the end I thank the group for hosting my talk, and mention that I’d be happy to sign copies for anyone who wants to purchase one.

After my first talk, I’ve settled on a strategy that helps make my talks more successful. I try to arrive at each meeting at least 15 minutes before the official start to introduce myself to the facilitator and to get set up. I had a 2-foot by 3-foot poster made of the book cover,  and display it on an easel as a visual aid. I bring at least a dozen books, and arrange them on a table, along with my promotional postcards and fliers listing resources people can use to find out more about mental illness. I keep another box of books in the trunk of my car, just in case there are a lot of people who want to buy a copy. I bring a cash box loaded with one dollar bills and quarters so I can make change for people, (my book, with tax, sells for $16.25) and I bring several pens for signing books. I also bring a small notebook, to jot down phone numbers, websites, names and tips and suggestions from the audience. Most importantly, I bring a friend, both for moral support, and to handle book sales after my talk so I can concentrate on signing books and talking to readers.

So far, my sales have not been overwhelming, but I have sold copies at each appearance, and consider each talk as another way to reach future readers. A lot of books are marketed by word-of-mouth, and I know each book buyer will tell other readers about my book, and that many others in the audience will tell people about my presentation. Best of all, I’ve discovered it’s very enjoyable to meet new people, talk about my book, and answer (or try to anyway) any questions that people have.

Thank you, Terri!

Terri Morgan is the author of nine books. Playing the Genetic Lottery is her first novel. It is available as an e-book for $4.99 and a paperback for $14.99 through her website: http://terrimorgan.net, amazon.com, Smashwords, and through selected bookstores in California and the UK.

Terri has also kindly offered a free Smashwords download of Playing the Genetic Lottery to everyone who leaves a comment (below) regarding her blog post, in the forthcoming week (up to / including Saturday 24th November). Within your comment please confirm you are happy for me to forward your email address to Terri… thank you!

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with mystery author Linda Mickey – the five hundred and fifty-sixth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

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5a.m. Flash 141112 – Free cosy mystery eBook by Mike Bove 14 & 15 November

I’m pleased to announce another free eBook, this time Mike Bove’s cozy mystery, Willowtree, which is free today and tomorrow. The links are:

Mike’s book is normally only £1.30 so even if you miss this free offer, it won’t break your bank. :)

A little about Willowtree, a Bruce DelReno Mystery:

Bruce DelReno plays a lot of golf. Well, he’s retired because the Postal Service drove him to it. His wife, a nurse, still works. A lot. So, Bruce frequents the Mesquite Hills Golf Club in the fictitious town of Willowtree, Arizona.

One day he finds bones near the course. This discovery begins his pursuit of the killers of three individuals whose bodies were found nearby, but 30 years apart. This mild mannered ex-postman is emboldened by the police’s slow progress, and encouragement from his wife, and best friend, an Apache Indian. Bruce’s investigating centers on a group of locals who grew up together in Willowtree.

There is murder, humor, golf, food, and local color in this tale, as well as twists and some interesting characters. Beautiful desert willows grow wild in the area around Willowtree, contributing to the stability of the land and the sustenance of wildlife. So does a certain weed that can be used in sinister ways.

And about Mike…

Mike Bove is a Vermont native who taught in public schools and coached high school track and soccer. He was involved as an actor and director in high school, college, and community theater. He adapted a folk tale, The Nosebag, for the stage, produced and directed it. Mike left teaching and worked for the Postal Service after moving to Cape Cod. There he became an avid golfer and fisherman. He and his wife, Jane moved to Sedona in 1994 where he retired in 2010. He is currently working on Stinger Maguire, the second Bruce DelReno Mystery.

Thank you, Mike. :)

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Post-weekend Poetry 047: Insincere by Sophie E Tallis

Welcome to Post-weekend Poetry and the forty-seventh poem in this series. This week’s piece is by novelist, short story author, poet and illustrator Sophie E Tallis. You can read my interview with Sophie here.

Insincere

People thought I was being ‘Stevie Smith’, very angst and prone to drama.

If you’re old you’re ‘clinically depressed’…understandable really…all those wrinkles staring back, more years behind than in front, a slow decay of time and body.

If you’re ‘middle-aged’ you’re simply in a rut. “Snap out of it!” they say, you’re not the self-obsessed youth you used to be, no time for such indulgences.

If you’re young you just can’t win. The loudest voice in the room but nobody’s listening.

Insincerity drips off the young who have a predisposition for blue… My youth has flown away now, my student days a haze – melancholic writings to paraphrase.

But then as now, my blue is simply a part of me, not showy, not angst…quite healthy now actually.

No longer just wearing black, colour creeps and leaves its residue, a hue to match my mood.

So no, I’m not waving or drowning, not making a statement, not needing help, quite happy, contented, as much as I can be, not full of old rage and hated resentments. Moving on, moved on… nasty neighbours but nice place, like the view…not insincere, not pretentious…simply blue.

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I asked Sophie what prompted this piece and she said…

The inspiration behind ‘Insincere’ was really based on the misconceptions and generalisations people have about other people. We are always so keen to pigeon-hole.

Even though I am a naturally happy, bubbly character, as with all of us, that is not the only facet to my personality. Many of us have a duality about us, more so perhaps for semi-public figures. As a teacher, not only do you lose some of your anonymity but part of your job is to make the children in your care feel comfortable and happy while they are learning. Therefore, even when I’m feeling awful or down, I’ll often have a fixed smile on my face for the children’s sake. It’s not a conscious act, but just something I do quite naturally. However, it does perpetuate the misconception that I’m always a ‘happy shiny’ person. Those that know me well, know that I’m somewhat of an onion, with many layers and not all of them light!

Just like me. :) Thank you, Sophie.

Sophie E Tallis is an epic fantasy author and illustrator, poet and short story writer. Originally from a sleepy village north of Bristol, she currently lives in the Cotswolds with her family and her two enormous white wolves!

She works as a full-time teacher and has been inspiring young children for the past 14 years. However, her first passion has always been for writing stories and poetry, which she has done since she was a child.

A painter and artist, she divides her time between writing, teaching and her artwork. She adores travelling when she gets the chance, and has a profound love of landscapes, particularly those of New Zealand and Dartmoor, which she finds very inspiring.

She enjoys stargazing, playing chess, watching films (particularly fantasy & sci-fi), ‘world-building’ and buying yet more bookcases for her growing library! She describes herself as a lover of wild places and the written word and is a bit of a self-confessed nerd! When asked what her interests are, she usually smiles and replies, “EVERYTHING!”.

Sophie’s debut novel ‘White Mountain – book 1 of The Darkling Chronicles’ is now available from Amazon.co.uk and Amazon.com.

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The blog interviews will return as normal tomorrow with science fiction & fantasy author Sarah Ettritch – the five hundred and fiftieth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, biographers, agents, publishers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :) on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays.

 
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Posted by on November 12, 2012 in ebooks, interview, novels, poetry, writing

 

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My debut novel is out!

I’m finally doing something with the novels. :)  I’ve written four and a bit, currently writing my sixth for NaNoWriMo 2012. The ‘bit’ by the way is a conversion of a 102-page script I wrote for the now-defunct Script Frenzy back in April 2010.

The first one, which is my one and only chick lit novel, and the third novel I wrote, has now gone live. The Serial Dater’s Shopping List’s tagline and synopsis go like this:

  • 31 men in 31 days – what could possibly go wrong?
  • Isobel MacFarlane is a recently-turned-40 journalist who usually writes a technology column for a newspaper based in Northampton, England, but her somewhat-intimidating boss, William, has set her the task of meeting 31 men, via a local internet dating site, all within a month. Having an active, though fruitless, social life with her friend and ‘Health & Beauty’ colleague Donna, she knows what she wants in a man, so creates a shopping list of dos and don’ts, and starts ticking them off as she meets Mr Could Be Right Except For, Mr Not Bad, Mr Oh My Goodness and Mr Oh So Very Wrong. Follow the ups (there are a few) and downs (there are many) of the dating process and intertwined with her experiences, get to know her colleague and family, including her niece Lola who, apart from being an amazing storyteller, can eat ambidextrously whilst wearing a Princess glove puppet on her right hand, and Baby, William’s non-too-healthy African Grey parrot.

It’s now available on Amazon.co.uk (c.£2), and Amazon.com and Smashwords (c.$3) and will be on iTunes, B&N etc. shortly.

My other novels are:

  • ‘After Jessica’ a general fiction novella about a woman’s death – and her complicated life (this will come out later this month)
  • ‘Hitman Sam’ a lad-lit novella about a trainee hitman (hopefully due out by Christmas)
  • ‘The Personal Trainer’ a lad-lit novella about a very personal trainer (which will be out next year)
  • ‘Once Perfect’, the current (dark crime) novel-in-progress (which will be out next year)
 
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Posted by on November 5, 2012 in ebooks, novels, writing

 

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5a.m. Flash 021112 – Free Thriller eBook by Gary Showalter 2 & 3 November

Gary Showalter’s novel ‘The Big Bend’ will be listed as free for download on the 2nd and 3rd of November:

The day begins like any other: Terry Rankin, sole proprietor of Rankin Personal Security Services in Orlando, Florida, accepts a private meeting with a potential client.

Sheila Adamson is looking for a bodyguard to protect her from her abusive husband, but Rankin refuses to take the job until she begins divorce proceedings.

Moments later, Mrs. Adamson is dead and Rankin is buried beneath the rubble of his house, knocked flat by a car bomb planted in the dead woman’s Jaguar.

When he’s questioned by the local police, Rankin learns that Adamson’s attorney has also turned up dead, his Cadillac riddled with bullets.

Suspecting there is more to these murders than a domestic dispute, he teams up with Orlando cop Cathy Diamond for a thrilling—and treacherous—adventure that will lead them deep into the heart of the Everglades and hot on the trail of a dangerous criminal.

In Rankin’s sardonic bodyguard-turned-investigator, Gary Showalter has created a new hero for fans of hardboiled mysteries.

Available free today and tomorrow from Amazon.com and Amazon.co.uk.

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Gary Showalter was born in Honolulu, Hawaii. He lived in Aruba, Florida and the Panama Canal Zone before joining the U.S. Army during the 1960s.  Mr. Showalter has picked cotton in East Texas, baled hay in Ardmore Oklahoma, sold light bulbs in Los Angeles, California, and built cattle pens in Fallon, Nevada (during a blizzard, of course).  After settling in Atlanta, Georgia, Mr. Showalter worked as a professional gardener before turning his hand to furniture making.

In 1981, he moved to Israel, married, and raised four children while working as a furniture maker, silversmith, goldsmith, and ornamental wood turner. He served in the Israel Defense Forces Reserves for sixteen years, and when not on active duty he worked in government and private security.  He has also served in senior management positions in two software development companies in Israel.

Mr. Showalter has published articles dealing with international terror and the Israel-Arab conflict in the Jerusalem Post, Israel national News and several political science web sites.

Mr. Showalter returned to the United States in the fall of 2003. He published his first novel, “The Big Bend”, in the fall of 2008, his second novel, “Hog Valley”, in 2009, his third novel, “Twisted Key”, in 2010 and his fourth novel, “Lonesome Cove”, in 2011.

Mr. Showalter resides in Dunnellon, Florida, where he is working on a non-fiction book on rose care due to be published in late November, 2012. He is a finalist for inclusion in a finalist for inclusion in the 3rd edition of “50 Great Writers You Should Be Reading”, which is published by www.TheAuthorsShow.com.

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Ditch the Publisher free eBook

Firstly, apologies to any publishers reading this (I know some do visit my blog, and appear on it!), the title wasn’t my mine but I do think the eBook is great, but then I could be biased… I’m one of the 40 contributing authors (I’m no.7) – see the list below.

To access your free copy click here (also available at Smashwords and Amazon). To read more about it visit Hayley’s website.

Contents 

  • Introduction
  • One: Success as a Self-Publisher by Beth Orsoff
  • Two: The Secret Myth of Traditional Publishing by Dean Wesley Smith
  • Three: You’ve got Nothing to Lose by David Jay Ramsden
  • Four: Freedom by Steve Carter and Antoinette Ryder
  • Five: The Future was Never Brighter for the Indie Author by Timothy Lee
  • Six: Robbed! by R.J. Hamilton
  • Seven: The Ebook Revolution by Morgen Bailey
  • Eight: My thoughts on Self-Publishing by Aliyah Burke
  • Nine: Writing the Book by Brendan Gerad O’Brien
  • Ten: Creating Characters by C.S. Marks
  • Eleven: Authenticity in Fiction by G.M. Frazier
  • Twelve: Redrafting and the Magic Cupboard by Hayley Sherman
  • Thirteen: In Praise of Editors by C.S. Marks
  • Fourteen: The Writing Bug by JD Nixon
  • Fifteen: Nine Golden Rules (Part One) by Mel Keegan
  • Sixteen: Beginning with Nothing by Kirsty Fox
  • Seventeen: It Takes a Village to Bring a Novel to Life by Gerard O’Keeffe
  • Eighteen: Getting Ready to Publish by Maggie Barclay
  • Nineteen: The DIY Approach by Michael Wilson
  • Twenty: Five Places to Self-Publish Your Ebook by L.J. Sellers
  • Twenty-One: A Few Ideas to get You Started by Joseph Lallo
  • Twenty-Two: The Formatting Nightmare by Captain Peter Cain
  • Twenty-Three: Investing in Your Own Ebook by L.J. Sellers
  • Twenty-Four: What Does it Take to Become a Full-Time Indie Author? by Lindsay Buroker
  • Twenty-Five: Becoming a Bestseller by Terri Reid
  • Twenty-Six: Just Do It! by Lexi Revellian
  • Twenty-Seven: Publishing Full-Colour Books with Lulu by Alex Ritsema
  • Twenty-Eight: An Unknown Author’s Publishing Experience by Arnold R. Beckhardt
  • Twenty-Nine: In Hot Pursuit of Happiness by Ciggie Cramond
  • Thirty: My Rocky Road to Publication by Sybil Nelson
  • Thirty-One: From Imagination to Publication by Pete Darman
  • Thirty-Two: Success and the Death Threat by T.M. Nielson
  • Thirty-Three: Four Questions About Ebook Publishing by Iza Moreau
  • Thirty-Four: You Never Know… by C.S. Marks
  • Thirty-Five: Self-Publishing by Curtis Ackie
  • Thirty-Six: Why Can’t I? by Diana Mylek
  • Thirty-Seven: You Reap What You Sow by German Alcala
  • Thirty-Eight: I Left My Publisher, Gave Up on Bookstores and Started Making Money by L.J. Sellers
  • Thirty-Nine: Self-publishing: A Personal Journey by Fionna Barr
  • Forty: Nine Golden Rules (Part Two) by Mel Keegan
  • Forty-One: The Dark Side of Free by Russell Blake
  • Forty-Two: Indie Translators: Money is Waiting by Scott Nicholson
  • Forty-Three: Getting Print Copies into Libraries by Ilyan Kei Lavanway
  • Forty-Four: After you publish: How to Market Your Books by Michael J. Sullivan
  • Useful Resources

And all for the price of a cup of air. :)

 

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Guest post: Revising a 30-year-old novel by Kathryn Meyer Griffith

Tonight’s guest blog post is brought to you by Kathryn Meyer Griffith.

Revising a 30-year-old novel… and the journey in between

Evil Stalks the Night-Revised Author’s Edition was my first published novel. 1984. As it comes out again from Damnation Books for the first time in thirty years, it’ll bring my forty-year writing career full circle and all fourteen of my old books will be out again for the first time in decades. A grueling, tedious three-year job rewriting these new versions but I’m thrilled. My babies are reborn; in the world again.

I’ll start at the beginning because, though Evil Stalks the Night was my first published novel, it wasn’t my first written one. That book was The Heart of the Rose. I began writing it after my only child, James, was born in late 1971. I was staying home with him, no longer going to college, not yet working full time, and bored out of my skin. I read a horrible historical romance one day and thought I can do better than that!  So I began writing. I’d tentatively called that book King’s Witch because it was about a 15th century healer falsely believed to be a witch but who was loved by a king. I didn’t know what the heck I was doing. I just wrote, emotions high believing I could create a whole book. So naïve. Reading that old version now (1985 Leisure paperback) I have to laugh. Ironically, like that 1971 historical novel I’d thought was so bad, it was awful. It took 12 years to get it published. I got sidetracked with a divorce, raising a son, getting a real job and finding and marrying the true love of my life. Life, as it always does, got in the way. The manuscript, in a drawer, was forgotten.

Years later I decided to rewrite it; try again. I bundled up the revised pile of printed pages, tucked it into an empty copy paper box and took it to the Post Office. Plastered it with stamps. Sent it everywhere The Writer’s Market said I could. And waited. Months. In those days it’d take a year or more, shipping it here and there to publishers, in between revising to please any editor’s suggestions on how it could be better. Snail mail took forever; was expensive. But eventually it sold.

Now to Evil Stalks the Night.

In the meantime I’d written another book. Kind of a fictionalized look back at my 1950’s and 60’s childhood in a large, poor but loving family. I sent it out as well. One day an editor suggested that since my writing had a spooky ambiance to it anyway, why didn’t I turn the story into a horror novel… like Stephen King was doing? Ordinary people. Supernatural circumstances. It’d sell easily, she said.

Hmmm. Well, it was worth a try, so I added something scary in the woods from the main character’s past that she had to return and face in her adult life, using some of my childhood and young adult life – my heartbreaking divorce, raising my young son alone, my new love – as hers. A romantic horror when I’d finished. I retitled it Evil Stalks the Night and sent it out. That editor was right, it sold quickly to a mass market paperback publisher called Towers Publishing.

But right in the middle of editing, Towers went bankrupt and was bought out by another publisher! What terrible luck, I remember brooding. The book was lost somewhere in the stacks of unedited slush in a company undergoing massive changes as the new publisher took over. I had a contract, didn’t know what to do and didn’t know how to break it. I couldn’t afford a lawyer. My life with a new husband, my son and minimum-wage billing job was one step above poverty. Those days I was clueless on how to deal with the publishing industry.

That was 1983, but luckily that take-over publisher was Leisure-or Dorchester. They became huge. Talk about karma. Fate stepped in and my editor, before she left, asked one of Leisure’s editors to give it a read. She believed in it.

1984. Out of the blue when I’d completely given up on Evil Stalks the Night, Leisure Books offered to buy it! Then my new editor asked if I had any other books she could look at. I sent her The Heart of the Rose and, liking it, she bought it in 1985; asking me to sex it up, make it an historical bodice-ripper (like those Rosemary Rogers and Kathleen Woodiwiss’s provocative novels).  It wasn’t much money. $1,000 advance each and 4% royalties. The publishers back then had a huge distribution and thousands of the paperbacks were printed, sent to bookstores and warehoused. So 4% over the next couple of years added up.

My career began. I slowly, like pulling teeth, sold ten more novels and various short stories over the next 25 years–as I was working full time, raising a family and living my hard-scramble life. Some did well, my Leisure and Zebra paperbacks, and some didn’t. Most of them eventually went out of print.

When Kim Richards Gilchrist of Damnation Books contracted my 13th and 14th novels 27 years later, A Time of Demons and The Woman in Crimson, she asked if I’d like to rerelease (new covers and rewritten–and in ebooks for the first time) my 7 out-of-print paperbacks, including Evil Stalks the Night. I said yes!

Of course, I rewrote it as well as my earlier novels, because my writing when I was twenty-something had been immature, unpolished; no computers or Internet had made the original writing so much harder. Writers saw the manuscript once to final proof it. There were many mistakes in those early books. Typos. Grammar. Lost plot and detail threads. In the rewrite I kept the time frame (1960-1984).  The book’s essence would have lost if I’d hadn’t.

As I finished the finally editing I reminisced about the life changes I’ve had since I’d first began writing it so many years ago. Though published in 1984, I’d started writing it years before. 1978 or 1979. I’m as old as my grandmother was back then. While I was first writing it, I’d been a young married woman holding down my first real job, with a child, and trying to do it all. Now… my grandmother and parents have passed away. Family and friends I’ve left behind, too. I miss them all, especially my mom and dad. It’s strange how revising my old books reminded me of certain times of my life. Some of the memories I hid from and some made me laugh or cry. This book is the most autobiographical of all my novels. It contains details of my childhood, my divorce, and what my life was like when I met my second husband, Russell, my true love. We’ve been happily married for 34 years. The years have clicked by too quickly. I want to reach out and stop time. I want more. I want to write more stories.

So Evil Stalks the Night-Revised Author’s Edition is out for the first time in decades and I hope it’s a better book than it was in 1984. It should be… I’ve had over thirty more years of life and experiences to help make it so.

:) Thank you, Kathryn!

Since childhood Kathryn has always been an artist and worked as a graphic designer in the corporate world and for newspapers for twenty-three years before she quit to write full time. She began writing novels at 21, over forty years ago now, and has had fourteen (nine romantic horror, one historical romance, one romantic suspense, one romantic time travel and two murder mysteries) previous novels and eight short stories published from Zebra Books, Leisure Books, Avalon Books, The Wild Rose Press, Damnation Books and Eternal Press.

She has been married to Russell for thirty-three years; they have a son, James, and two grandchildren, Joshua and Caitlyn, and lives in a small quaint town in Illinois called Columbia, which is right across the JB Bridge from St. Louis, Mo. They have two quirky cats, ghost cat Sasha and live cat Cleo, and the four of them live happily in an old house in the heart of town. Though she’s been an artist, and a folk singer in her youth with her brother Jim, writing has always been her greatest passion, her butterfly stage, and she says she’ll probably write stories until the day she dies. I know that feeling.

You can find more about Kathryn and her writing via…

and you can e-mail her at rdgriff@htc.net (she loves to hear from her readers).

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with non-fiction author Anne O’Connell – the five hundred and fourth of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me. I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on September 27, 2012 in ebooks, novels, tips, writing

 

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Guest post: Where Do Stories Come From? by Neil L. Yuzuk

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of originations is brought to you by crime novelist Neil Yuzuk.

Where Do Stories Come From?

Doc Ostrow: But the Krell forgot one thing.

Commander John J. Adams: Yes, what?

Doc Ostrow: Monsters, John. Monsters from the Id.

“Monsters from the Id” That famous line comes from the 1956 science-fiction movie, “Forbidden Planet”. Where do our stories come from? Do they come from our Ids, our experiences, our imaginations? Are they a result of some sort of wish fulfillment? I don’t know the specific answer, but I suspect that it’s varying degrees of those things I listed and possibly more that are not listed.

Sometimes stories and writing careers come about in the oddest way. Lois Lewandowski (author of the Gillian Jones mysteries) and I were exchanging emails about the use of forensics in our novels. I told her how Chapter 10 in my latest book, “Beachside PD: The Gypsy Hunter” came about and she urged me to share the story. In actuality, it is a murder mystery that is discovered and solved by the main character in that one chapter.

I called it “The Wrong Man Scenario” and it runs 6,230 words. A woman is found naked and dead in her bed by her husband. Her face is battered and bloody, and she’s been strangled with a scarf. Asleep next to her is a large almost naked man, who has blood spatter on his T-shirt and his knuckles are bruised and raw. A scented candle is burning, there are wine bottles and glasses near the bed and a Barry White CD is playing. The crime scene suggests a sexual encounter that went very wrong.

An open and shut case. But what if he didn’t do it?

Let’s start at the beginning and go back almost four years. I had just retired from my job as a Substance Abuse Prevention Counselor for a New York City high school. One year later, my relationship of 15 years ended—badly—and I was at very loose ends. My son David, a full-time police officer and part-time actor said, “Hey Pops, why don’t you write a movie script for me?” I’d never written more than a couple of short stories and several stage plays about at-risk teenagers for my students to perform for their peers.

So I wrote a script called “The Devil’s Troll” which was a terrific story, but written not so terrifically. However, I found that I had a knack for creating memorable characters and in writing this first time effort I developed research skills, skills that have stayed with me. Robert McKee, in his STORY seminar said, “Write the truth” and I did. Whatever I wrote afterwards, was carefully researched, believable and timelines were observed.

I worked on several more scripts and when David had an idea for a movie, we collaborated on, “The Reluctant Knight.” That became the basis for my first novel, “Beachside PD: The Reluctant Knight” and a crime series was born. David’s cop buddies were generous in sharing their stories and helping me to be real in my fictive telling of those stories.

On one trip down to Florida, I was introduced to a police officer whose name I cannot share. His pseudonym in the book was Robert Zaragossa and he is the real life Gypsy Hunter. There was a major problem in sharing his stories, they were not believable. It was the old story of, truth is stranger than fiction and the difference between fiction and reality, is that fiction needs to be believable.

Reality: There is a Gypsy on death row in Florida. In the book, “Beachside PD: The Gypsy Hunter” it takes Robert eight days to capture him. In real life, he did it in three and a half days using a telephone.

Reality: A four-year-old Gypsy girl is kidnapped by her Gypsy father in a custody battle with the Gypsy mother. One year later—the girl is still missing. Robert is asked to get involved and after two days of telephone calls the now five year old was turned over to the authorities.

I needed a non-Gypsy case to emphasize Robert’s dogged determination—he is a self-described pit bull. There was one such case, but it involves an undercover work and can’t be written at this time

So there I was in Aventura, Florida, at the Bagel Cove (a culinary refuge for New York Jews) having breakfast along with Police Lieutenant Bryan Pegues . . . and over bagels we began to plot murder.

Bryan shared several cases and we started with a carjacking that led to a second case that occurred where and when the carjackers were caught. Then we discussed various real “locked room” murder cases. But the one we selected was never solved. We created a murder scenario, without a specific solution and I left there, with a full tummy and four possible, rather shaky, and unbelievable solutions. It looked like our putative murderer, Martin Luther King “Bull” Belinsky, had played his last football game for the Miami Dolphins and was headed to death row.

I chewed on possible solutions, but none of them worked. Finally, I put one and one and one and one together and got four—a solution that combined good detective work, solid forensics, a witness to evidence (not the crime) and finally, luck. The case was solved and the killer was nailed. The answer evolved through the writing of the chapter.

But who was the killer, you ask? And well, you may. You can find the answer to that question in “The Gypsy Hunter,” Chapter 10.

Thank you, Neil.

Neil L. Yuzuk (pictured right) was born in Brooklyn, New York. Now retired after twenty-two years, as a SPARK Substance Abuse Prevention Counselor, he wrote Beachside PD: The Reluctant Knight, after collaborating with his police officer son on a screenplay of the same name. The book was a finalist in the Global eBook Awards in the category of suspense / thriller.

The second book in the series is Beachside PD: The Gypsy Hunter and third book is entitled Beachside PD: Undercover. He has also written a screenplay: Fade To Light. Another book, Zaragossa: Fruit of the Vine is in the works.

Neil and his co-author son David are the authors of the Beachside PD series and their website is http://www.BeachsidePDBooks.com. You can also watch their video at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20e_i39GaQA and their print / eBooks are available at Amazon.com, Amazon.co.uk and Smashwords.

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with YA author and guest blogger Anna White – the four hundred and seventy-first of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are fortnightly episodes, usually released on Sundays, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
 

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10 free iTunes downloads of Jane Wenham-Jones’ Prime Time to be won!

Humorous (hilarious!) novelist Jane Wenham-Jones has very kindly offered me 10 free iTunes download eBook copies of her latest novel Prime Time to be given away.

The first 10 people to leave a comment underneath this blog post will receive unique download codes (which are only valid until August 29th) via email.

For more details on her book can be found on her blog but here’s a teaser…

Laura Meredith never imagined herself appearing on TV– she’s too old, too flabby, too downright hormonal, and much too busy holding things together for her son, Stanley, after husband, Daniel, left her for a younger, thinner replacement.

But best friend Charlotte is a determined woman and when Laura is persuaded on to a daytime show to talk about her PMT, everything changes.

Suddenly there’s a camera crew tracking her every move and Laura finds herself an unlikely star. Wined, dined, and pampered, she begins to see the charms of a younger partner herself. But as things hot up between her and gorgeous TV director, Cal, they’re going downhill elsewhere.

While Laura’s caught up in a heady whirlwind of beauty treatments, makeovers and glamorous film locations, Charlotte’s husband, Roger, is concealing a guilty secret, Stanley’s got problems at school, work’s piling up, and when Laura turns detective to protect Charlotte’s marriage, things go horribly wrong.

The champagne’s flowing as Laura’s prime time TV debut looks set to be a hit. But in every month, there’s a Day Ten…

You can read more about Jane: Jane talks about book signingsThe inspiration behind Prime Time part 1The inspiration behind Prime Time part 2my interview with Jane and Jane in the spotlight.

 
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Posted by on August 20, 2012 in competitions, ebooks, interview, novels, writing

 

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Guest post: My road to (very moderate) success by Sofia Essen

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of becoming a published author, is brought to you by chick lit novelist Sofia Essen.

My road to (very moderate) success

Taming wild horses is much less difficult than attempting to become a “published author”. Of course, I only speak from my own experience in both. Horses are easy to communicate with once you learn their language. I understand them. The feral beast that is publishing remains an indecipherable enigma to me in many ways.

I started writing when I moved to a small village in Crete three years ago. I spent my first year on the island writing my novel at a leisurely pace and thoroughly enjoying myself. Then I devoted the following 18 months to querying literary agents. They were 18 rather painful months in which I received a rejection letter almost every week. After the first dozen or so letters, one would think one would become immune to the sting of rejection. But each negative response was a blow to my ego, more agonizing than the kick of any horse’s hoof. Yes, again I speak from experience in both.

The majority of the rebuffs came in standard form rejection letters, impersonal and coolly professional. A handful of agents offered advice along with their refusal to represent me. “Try a Swedish agent,” one suggested. While I’m still a Swedish citizen, I left the country more than twenty years ago. My book is written in English, and I speak better Thai than Swedish. But I queried every Swedish literary agent I could find on the web anyway. None of them wanted anything to do with my novel. “You should contact a local agent,” I was told. As it turns out, literary agents are thin on the ground here on this island and they, understandably, weren’t interested in representing a Swedish woman who had spent two decades in Asia prior to moving to Crete and writing a novel in English.

Luckily, the beauty of living in Crete kept me sane and distracted me from the ever-growing pile of rejection letters. Crete has a way of softening harsh realities with its gentler pace of life and persuasive routines – I’m expected at my local café for a cup of sweet Nescafé coffee without milk at ten o’clock every morning whether I’m having a bad day or not.

I had almost given up hope of ever getting my novel published when 48fourteen, a small ePublishing company, sent me an e-mail in which they expressed a wish to read my full manuscript. A week later, they sent a contract! I signed the contract faster than you can say “whiplash”.

Of course, I would have loved to be signed by a major publishing house. As I was writing my novel, I had extravagant daydreams of book tours, giving interviews, and maybe talking about “Change of Pace” on Oprah and chatting with Ellen. Oh yes, I had some wonderfully grand delusions.

I’m old-fashioned at heart, and it would have been amazing to see my book in print, not just downloadable online.  There’s something magical about going into a bookshop and being surrounded by stories on sturdy shelves. I love to walk up and down the aisles, running my fingers along the book spines as I go. To me, the experience of reading a good book is improved by turning its pages one at the time, hearing the pages whisper against each other, and inhaling the musky scent of ink of paper. My biggest dream is to one day pop into a bookshop and find a book with my name on it. I’d pick it up to feel the weight of it in my hands, sniff it, and finally open it and read the dedication. It would say, “To Mum and Dad with all my love.”

Until that day comes (fingers crossed), I’m satisfied knowing I did my best to write a good story, which people will be able to read and hopefully enjoy.

That’s (hopefully) why we write although Oprah and Ellen would be a bonus. :)  Thank you, Sofia.

Sofia has a blog at http://essentially-sofia.blogspot.gr and Change of Pace is available on: Amazon.com, Barnes and Noble.com and 48fourteen.com.

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If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with poet, novelist and publisher Sam Smith – the four hundred and forty-first of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (the interviewees love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 24, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, interview, novels, writing

 

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Guest post: Bring the Magic by Anna White

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of writing (and the motivation behind) her paranormal novel, is brought to you by YA author Anna White.

Bring the Magic

I am a longtime reader of YA fiction, and one of my favorite genres is paranormal. I love the idea embedded in those stories that there is something magical, something mysterious and intangible, burning just below the surface. Books like Harry Potter and Twilight capture this feeling well. Just on the other side of the subway station, or in the next class over, there is something amazing.

As an author I hope to bring that magic too, both in my characters and in real life. Sometimes though, real life is hard. Growing up my vision of adulthood was to graduate, move to Africa, and work for an NGO. My parents thought I was crazy, I bought a map of the continent and hung it over my bed. Fast forward about twenty years, and I am married. I live in a brick house in a medium sized town. I have two children and a dog, and I have worked the same job for the past seven years. I am far, far away from Africa.

It was a post on a wonderful blog called Momastery that helped me reconcile my past goals with my present reality. In a post called “On Writing Your Life”, Glennon Melton described a family in crisis. In an effort to bring the family together and change the trajectory they were on, they made one common goal.  They decided, as a family, to build an orphanage. And they did it! They raised $25,000 to build an orphanage all by themselves. Incidentally, not only did they have a significant impact on others, but the process of reaching this goal transformed their family.

At the time that I read this, I was almost finished with my novel. I had subbed it out, and been rejected with the feedback that it was a little short for the genre, but I couldn’t let it go. I love the story and the characters, and I also started writing it when my second daughter was only five weeks old. It took me about two hours per page, so the fact that I have a finished novel means that my whole family made a lot of sacrifices. After a lot of prayer, thought, and nail biting, I made the decision to self-publish the book and donate all the proceeds to a cause closely tied to my childhood dream.

The Water Project is a highly rated nonprofit that build long-lasting, sustainable wells in Africa. They involve the community in the development of the projects, and train members of the community to maintain the wells once the project is completed. I chose The Water Project over other, similar nonprofits for a few reasons. First, they have a 100% donation option where all funds go directly to a project (meaning no funds go to administrative costs). They will also send updates and pictures of the project as it progresses from development to completion, a process that can take up to two years. This was important to me, because I want my family and my readers to see the impact that is being made, and of course to know that the money is being appropriately used.

I believe the desire to do something real and meaningful and lasting, something bigger than ourselves, is what YA fiction taps into. As a teenager, I felt like making a big impact was definitely possible, but the more I learn about the complexities of the world, the harder it seems. It’s true that the world is filled with huge problems, and it’s also true that I can’t solve them. But I can use what I’ve got, and right now that’s not money or time, it’s my novel. My new dream is to fund an entire well, which costs around $5,000. My novel has just come out and so far I’ve made about $30, so I have a long way to go. Baby steps! To be successful this truly will be a combination of the efforts of myself, my family, and the community of readers, and I look forward to seeing what happens.

Thank you, Anna, and I hope you reach your target quickly. It’s a very generous thing you’re doing.

Anna is an author and counselor. She lives in Louisiana, USA with her husband and two daughters, and can usually be found reading or writing something with a cup of tea nearby… her current work is ‘Divide the Darkness’, the next book in the Chronicles of the Nephilim series.

She blogs at www.annawhitewrites.blogspot.com, and is on Facebook and Twitter. She has author pages on Amazon and Goodreads and you can also email her at annawhitewrites@gmail.com.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. If it’s writing-related then it’s highly likely I’d email back and say “yes please”.

The blog interviews return as normal tomorrow morning with YA, science-fiction and horror author Kenna McKinnon – the four hundred and twenty-seventh of my blog interviews with novelists, poets, short story authors, bloggers, autobiographers and more. A list of interviewees (blogged and scheduled) can be found here. If you like what you read, please do go and investigate further. And I enjoy hearing from readers of my blog; do either leave a comment on the relevant interview (my guests love to hear from you too!) and / or email me.

You can sign up to receive these blog posts daily or weekly so you don’t miss anything… and follow me on Twitter where each new posting is automatically announced. You can also read / download my eBooks and free eShorts at SmashwordsSony Reader StoreBarnes & NobleiTunes BookstoreKobo and Amazon, with more to follow. I have a new forum, friend me on Facebook, like me on Facebook, connect with me on LinkedIn, find me on Tumblr, complete my website’s Contact me page or plain and simple, email me.  I also now have a new blog creation service especially for, but not limited to, writers.

Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for flash fiction (<1000 words) for Flash Fiction Fridays and poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 10, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, novels, writing

 

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5AM FLASH – Jane Wenham-Jones talks about book signings

Every now and then at 5am (probably posted by my clone) I will be bringing you a newsflash, update on what I’m doing, invited guest piece, or whatever takes my fancy, and today’s is the latter on the topic of book signings – brought to you by author, journalist, tutor, presenter Jane Wenham-Jones.

Book signings

By the time you read this, I will probably be sitting in the middle of Waterstone’s at Westwood Cross (if you live in Thanet, please come and say hello!) being studiously ignored. Yes, it will be the first official book-signing (also known as Ritual Humiliation) for Prime Time and I have been reliving some of my finest signing moments…

Around Mother’s Day, Christmas or St Valentine’s are always good times to attempt to flog books – especially if the shoppers are male. Men as we know, are notoriously bad at present-buying and easy to persuade that this year’s must-have is a novel signed by the author.  One Christmas Eve I sold twenty books in as many minutes to desperate husbands with a haunted-look in their eye who knew the hours were running out and all they’d managed so far was the same Body Shop basket they’d got her last year. If there’s no special date on the horizon, then there’s nothing for it but to make eye-contact and strike up conversation in your jolliest tones so that the hapless shopper cannot escape. Handing out bookmarks can work well along with a cheery description of the book hoping it is the sort that appeals. It doesn’t always.

“This is a good book,” I once said boldly to a stern-looking woman hovering by the best-sellers.

She regarded me suspiciously. “What’s it about?”

“Infidelity,” I explained brightly, expanding as she stared at me blankly, “lots of fun, sexy, racy, all about what women get up to when the old man’s not there…”

“I don’t like that sort of thing,” she said firmly.

“Well, never mind,” says I, hurriedly changing tack, “cos really it’s more of a romance – a love story in fact.”

She was still unimpressed. ”Don’t like them either.”

“What do you like?” I asked, as she tried to edge away and I prepared to highlight the sub-plot involving much adventure and intrigue in best thriller tradition and wondering if I could get away without describing it as a detective story.

“Blood and Guts,” she said.

If people do home straight in on you, you can safely assume they think you’re staff and are about to ask where the loo is, but just occasionally they really have come to see you. This can be awkward too. At one memorable signing session in Margate, a smiling chap arrived who looked vaguely familiar.  “How are you?” he asked warmly, going on to enquire after my sister, husband and son, and to remind me of the helpful advice I’d given him last time we’d met. I didn’t have a clue who he was, which I was getting away with nicely until he picked up a book and handed it to me for signature. “Can you put my name in it?” he asked.

For a long moment I sat, pen hovering, my mind blank. “Just remind me which way you spell it,” I said at last, pleased by this stroke of genius. He looked at me strangely.  “You know,” I trilled desperately, “there are so many variations these days, I always check…”

He frowned. “B – O – B,” he said.

My top book-signing tip – taken from Wannabe a Writer?

Get three friends to turn up at the shop and stand in line in front of your table.

The British will always join a queue…

Morgen: It’s true. :) It’s just a shame that I won’t be in yours. :( That was great, thank you, Jane! I hope your signing goes well…

Jane Wenham-Jones is the author of four novels and two non-fiction books – Wannabe a Writer? – a humorous look at becoming a scribe – featuring contributions from a wide array of big name authors and journalists including Jilly Cooper, Frederick Forsyth and Michael Buerk with a foreword by Katie Fforde; and Wannabe a Writer We’ve Heard Of? – a guide to the art of book and self-promotion which includes tips from a variety of celebrities.   

As a freelance journalist, Jane has written for The Guardian, The Daily Express, The Sunday Express, The Times, The Sunday Times, The Sun and numerous women’s magazines. Regular spots include columns for her local paper – The Isle of Thanet Gazette, Woman’s Weekly Fiction Special and Writing Magazine, where she is the agony aunt.

Jane is an experienced tutor who is regularly booked by writing conferences and literary festivals to run workshops, give talks and chair panels. In recent years she has interviewed dozens of best-selling authors and celebrities including Julian Clary, Richard Madeley, Victoria Hislop, Bel Mooney, Helen Lederer, Amanda Ross, Kate Mosse, Kay Burley, Jenny Éclair and Tim Bentinck. She is a member of Equity, has presented for the BBC on both TV and radio and has hosted the award ceremony for the RoNas (Romantic Novel of the Year Awards) for the last two years. Jane is not the sort of writer to remain in her garret, shunning publicity, and has also done her fair share of daytime TV, particularly when promoting her controversial second novel Perfect Alibis (subtitled ‘How to have an affair and get away with it…’). It was those – sometimes hair-raising – on screen experiences that inspired Prime Time, her new novel. For more information see www.janewenham-jones.com and http://janewenhamjones.wordpress.com (the latter built by yours truly, Morgen Bailey, and lovingly crafted by us both. :) ).

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Unfortunately, as I post an interview a day (amongst other things) I can’t review books but I have a feature called ‘Short Story Saturdays’ where I review stories of up to 2,500 words. Alternatively if you have a short story or self-contained novel extract / short chapter (ideally up to 1000 words) that you’d like critiqued and don’t mind me reading it / talking about and critiquing it (I send you the transcription afterwards so you can use the comments or ignore them) :)  on my ‘Bailey’s Writing Tips’ podcast, then do email me. They are weekly episodes, usually released Monday mornings UK time, interweaving the recordings between the red pen sessions with the hints & tips episodes. I am now also looking for poetry for Post-weekend Poetry.

 
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Posted by on July 7, 2012 in ebooks, ideas, non-fiction, novels, tips, writing

 

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