I’m delighted to bring you this guest blog post, today by the multi-talented YA / adult fantasy author / illustrator, poet, and non-fiction writer Vonnie Winslow Crist (http://vonniewinslowcrist.com).
Good fantasy writing demands the same standards of grammar, story or verse structure, characterization, dialog, and proper word usage as any other form of writing. Fantastical stories have characters, settings, and plots. Fantasy poems still have a tone (the writer’s feelings), mood (how the reader feels), and theme (the larger idea the writer wants you to remember). And fantasy literature uses the same writing devices: alliteration, metaphor, simile, personification, sensory language (imagery), onomatopoeia, etc. as mainstream literature.
But fantasy writing needs more:
1- Magic. In fantasy writing, there needs to be something magical, miraculous, or mysterious. It can be an item or person with special powers. It can be a mystical place or an incantation that transforms the mundane into the extraordinary. It can be a potion, a carpet that soars through the air, an angel, or a wishing well that grants wishes. Whatever it is, there needs to be the feeling of drifting beyond our day-to-day world.
2- World-building. A fantasy writer needs to build a believable world for their audience to inhabit for the duration of the reading experience. When constructing this world, the writer must decide on language, clothing, food, weapons, plants, animals, landscape, characters, modes of transportation and communication, employment, housing, religion, family structure, etc. If the world is quite complicated, drawing a map can be helpful, too. The clearer the writer’s vision, the easier it will be for readers to “suspend their disbelief” and enter the universe of the story (or play or poem). But remember, be selective which details you include in your piece of writing. The reader doesn’t need all of this information – only the writer needs to know everything!
3- Rules. Fantasy worlds must have specific rules, and the writer must adhere to those rules. For example: in mainstream work, gravity and breathable oxygen are part of the accepted world, so we don’t usually have characters floating off the earth or using special breathing apparatus to convert a toxic atmosphere. A fantasy story could have different rules, but it must have rules just the same. Everything does not go! A note here about magic: Magic or use of magical items should have rules – what works and what doesn’t. And consequences – there should be a price for using or encountering magic.
4- Imagination. Fantasy literature requires a lively imagination and excellent storytelling abilities if readers are to accept the strange worlds created by the writer. Think how quickly Frank Baum drops us into Oz, C.S. Lewis walks us though a wardrobe, J.R.R. Tolkien has us cheering for Bilbo Baggins, and Poe drapes us with the gloom of Usher. One of the tasks of the fantasy writer is to not only imagine what comes next, but what comes after that, and after that. To paraphrase an oft-repeated introduction from the Star Trek series, we are challenged to “write where no one has dared write before.” Or at the very least, come up with a new way of looking at the oft-viewed.
5- Characters the reader can identify with. This is trickier for a writer when the protagonist of a story is a werewolf, fairy, or unicorn. But as long as readers can recognize a part of themselves in fantasy characters, they will come along for the story. No matter how alien the characters, by including familiar emotions a writer can weave a successful tale about vampires, halflings, or dragon-slayers living in a fantastical world. Your characters need to have complicated relationships with others, be neither all good nor all evil, and have flaws, weaknesses, dreams, and goals. In short, fantasy characters should be just like you and me.
Things that go bump in the night, talking animals, and fairy godmothers of childhood tales and nursery rhymes, prepare us to not only read and accept magical worlds, but to create them. If you focus on writing well, adding a pinch of magic, building a believable world, having consistent rules on that world, stretching your imagination, and creating characters your readers can identify with – you’ll be a successful fantasy writer.
Here are a few sites I’ve found useful. For markets: http://ralan.com and http://duotrope.com and for anthologies http://www.aswiebe.com/writing/markets.html. For lots of information about writing fantasy: http://www.writing-world.com/sf/index.shtml.
I loved that, thank you Vonnie!
Vonnie Winslow Crist, BS Art & Education, MS Professional Writing from Towson University, is a columnist for Harford’s Heart Magazine, an illustrator for The Vegetarian Journal, the editor of The Gunpowder Review, and a contributor to Faerie Magazine. A firm believer that the world around us is filled with miracles and magic, she has had a life-long interest in reading, writing, folklore, myths, legends, fairy tales, and art. Her fantasy, science-fiction, and dark fantasy have been published in Canada, Australia, Finland, Italy, Spain, the United Kingdom, and the USA. In her latest book, The Greener Forest, she draws from the world around her where still sees angels in the trees, trolls under bridges, pillywiggins in her garden, and goblins of all sorts in the shadows. Please do go visit her website: http://vonniewinslowcrist.com.
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