Guest post: Researching historical fiction by Velda Brotherton

Tonight’s guest blog post, on the topic of researching historical fiction is brought to you by non-fiction and western historical romance author, interviewee and spotlightee Velda Brotherton.

Led by Dull Knife (Morning Star) and Little Wolf, a pitifully small band of Northern Cheyenne crept silent as shadows into the night in the autumn of 1878. Behind them Fort Reno and Indian Territory, ahead a rugged 1500 miles to the land of the yellowstone and home. Soldiers pursued them every mile of the way, picking off men, women and children as they could. This was their final outbreak that would last into the brutal winter of 1879 at Fort Robinson in Nebraska and one last bloody battle to go home.

After my husband’s initial Internet research, we discussed the idea at length and decided on this setting for my seventh western historical romance novel. He learned that George Armstrong Custer had lain with many Cheyenne women. Rumor had it that he fathered several children, though the only one on record is Yellow Swallow. Cheyenne women spoke of others, and so my first decision was to have my hero be the son of Custer and one of these Cheyenne women. To make sure his age was correct, Custer would have had to father the boy when he was still going to the Military Academy. So we studied his movements and found he returned to that area during breaks from the rigors of the academy.

We then drove as nearly as we could the route taken so long ago. As a writer of western historical romance, my research involves books, the Internet and a visit to the area where my book will take place, when at all possible.

Our first stop on the trip north out of what is now Oklahoma, was Camp Supply, which now houses prisoners who care for the fort buildings and resident horses. We were allowed to visit with one of these men as he worked with a sturdy dun gelding that was happy to get a nose rub. We then toured the fort buildings which include some very old buildings and cabins. It amazing how quickly walking the ground where once my fictional characters would have trod sets the mood for the writing to begin. Scenes begin to flow that may or may not make it into the book.

We would travel, as did the Cheyenne, west of Fort Dodge and Dodge City, pass between Fort Hays and Fort Wallace. From the outset there were constant battles with the army. Dull Knife and Little Wolf parted on White Tail Creek. Later Dull Knife and his band were captured on Chadron Creek in October of 1878 and imprisoned at Fort Robinson. There they were kept in dreadful circumstances in a long building with no floors. All they had for heat was what wood they could scrounge and burn. Food was hauled in to them in great vats.

On the evening of January 22, 1879 they broke free and thus began the final battle in which many Cheyenne were killed and those who weren’t were dragged back to the Fort. The dead were piled outside in the freezing temperatures. Meanwhile, Little Wolf and his band headed north, but this wasn’t known for sure until much later.

By this time, in the history of the west, very few Indians were free. Almost all were kept on reservations. Plans were to send this pitiful band back to Oklahoma, but those plans would never be carried out.

Creating my hero was often difficult. Brought up white, he was torn between two worlds. Which one would he ultimately choose? I think that the death of his father in 1876 at Rosebud or what we call the battle of the Little Big Horn, would have affected his decision. I decided to begin the book when he becomes involved in the Cheyenne’s struggle to break free.

Every romance needs a heroine, and I struggled for a while with that. I needed a strong woman with a taste for vengeance, and nowhere to go. So I came up with Aiden Connor, an Irish lass from St. Louis, abandoned in a small town in Nebraska when her fiancé takes off and doesn’t return.

Historical research can be all encompassing. There’s a danger that we’ll become so involved that writing the book is put aside. I usually begin to write as soon as I have my characters, time period and setting in mind. Outlining isn’t for me. I’d rather write myself into a corner and have to figure a way out. Once a book is outlined, it loses all attraction for me. My creativity has disappeared.

So first I began the book with Aiden, then wrote the scenes when Stone Heart becomes injured in the battle. Once I had this all set up and had worked up to their first meeting, after Aiden is run out of town by a few self-righteous women and takes shelter in the same deserted shack where Stone Heart will hide, I realized that the book would work better if I switched the first scenes around. And so Stone Heart’s scene became the beginning of the book.

One of the best books I found for information on the Northern Cheyenne flight was Cheyenne Autumn by Mari Sandoz. By reading her account I was able to insert myself in the time period, learn how the people spoke and interacted with each other. There’s an old saying that using many sources is research, using only one is plagarism, and so I then dug into all the information I could find on Dull Knife and Little Wolf. Though they played a very minor part in my book, I needed to know these people. Learn what had happened to them and how they reacted.

Usually research takes me several months, but not all at once. My first draft may be finished long before I complete all the research. As the story flows it becomes obvious what else I need to know, so there may be gaps along the way that can be filled as the second draft comes alive. Some writers can finish a book in six months, for me it usually takes a year to complete around 100,000 words.

A few things to beware of when doing research: consider the source of the material; make sure you find several reliable sources for your facts; check, and double check before you use something crucial. You need to know how, what, where, when, how and why. Fiction consists of stories that come from our imaginations, but if we place a well-known historical character in a place where he could not have been, then we’re immediately in trouble with the reader. Make sure your real people could have been where you put them, remain true to their personalities, and unless you are writing a biography, keep them in the background and create your fictional characters from your own mind. That will leave you free to write the story you truly want to write.

Thank you Velda, this was great! And I don’t outline either – most of my interviewees don’t… something to do with our characters taking over. 🙂

Velda has written seriously since 1983, though she always made up stories for herself and loved to read from the moment her mother taught her before she started school. In 1994 her first two books were published. One nonfiction, another a Western Historical Romance. As fate would have it, her career was growing well and with four books under her belt she felt secure. Bad idea. The bottom fell out, the line closed and she went to another house. Unhappy there, she turned to writing historical nonfiction.

But her love for fiction continued and she wrote several novels while getting some books published in regional non fiction. Today she works solely with small presses and E book publishers, including adding her back list books to Kindle herself.

Velda lives and works in Arkansas. She and her husband have a home in the country and they travel frequently, mostly for research but also for pleasure.

She is a member of Women Writing the West, Authors Guild, Ozark Writers League, Oklahoma Writers Federation, Inc., and is the co-chair of the Northwest Arkansas Writer’s Workshop, a critique group that was founded in 1987. She holds workshops, speaks occasionally at conferences which she attends a few times a year, and is fond of giving presentations at the many small libraries in her area of the state.

Her favorite pastime when she isn’t writing is visiting with her daughter, swimming, reading and watching a good movie. You can find out more about Velda and her writing at her website: http://www.veldabrotherton.com.

Excerpt from Stone Heart’s Woman

A shuffling of feet, movement of some kind, startled him fully awake. He had no idea how long he had slept, but someone was coming. He tilted his head and listened. Not an animal, nor a big man. Someone small, weary. Even with his wounds, he would have no trouble overpowering this one and slitting its throat. The musket lay in the dark corner, for he had not yet loaded it. He hoped this was a white man approaching, for he desperately desired to count coup, repay the slaughter of the day before. Ignoring the lancing of pain, he crept toward the door, waited out of sight until his prey entered. The only light filtered into the gloom through that opening, and he could be upon the enemy without ever being seen.

The fur-shrouded figure that stepped into sight radiated fire about its head, rays of sun brilliant in long strands of tangled red hair. Already in motion, his arm clamped about its throat, cut off a high scream.

A woman. A white woman.

The robe slipped from her shoulders when she clawed the air and kicked furiously with both feet, her full weight swinging on his forearm. One pointed boot toe struck his shin, another cracked his knee painfully. Gritting his teeth against passing out, he leaned against the wall and hung on, pressed the blade of his knife hard against her midsection. Hissed in her ear, “Stop fighting or I’ll gut you.”

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17 thoughts on “Guest post: Researching historical fiction by Velda Brotherton

  1. Patricia Gligor says:

    Velda and Morgen,
    Great post!
    A week or two ago, I watched a PBS special on George Armstrong Custer’s life. I understand why Velda chose that period in history to write about; it’s fascinating.
    Although I love history and I enjoy doing some research, I’m glad it’s Velda doing all the research she does – and not me. I think I’ll stick to contemporary mysteries, with some historical background, and leave the historical fiction writing to her!

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    • Velda Brotherton says:

      Thank you Patricia for your comment. I had to chuckle cause I felt the same way when I first began to write and concentrated on other types of fiction. Then I fell into the historical writing by entering a contest at a conference. When I won first place and decided to try to get the book published, I was hooked. But I’ll gladly continue to do historical research as long as people like you appreciate it and read my books.

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  2. Pat Browning says:

    Velda, this is a fascinating post. I more or less know what happened to the Northern Cheyenne but Custer’s dalliance with Cheyenne women is interesting news! How wonderful it must have been for you and your husband to follow the trail –walking in their footsteps, so to speak. Thanks so much for sharing this!
    Pat Browning
    Author of ABSINTHE OF MALICE

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  3. Velda Brotherton says:

    Appreciate the thoughtful comments. I really like this period in our history. While the Civil War is filled with rich history, I prefer writing about our country as it reconstructs and looks to the future. Plenty there as well, much of it quite shameful, however, it is our history dadgum it and I don’t like to change it just to make some look better. Thanks again, Morgen for having me here on your blog.

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  4. morgenbailey says:

    Message from James M Copeland:
    Hello:
    I just read Velda Brotherton’s Blog concerning Custer. Sound’s great. I met Velda at that conference she mentioned this last summer. She is a great writer, and a wonderful person. In fact if I am truthful, I would have to say she is the reason I have my first buck published. Through her advice and encouragement I was able to publish Bottom Bones, a mystery about a detective who while working a case, and poking his nose into a situation gets his boat shot out from under him. He was rescued by the Coast Guard and thought he needed another boat. He searched for a few days and finally found one he liked the sound of very close to home. Actually, just across the water in the Hudson River Bay. After determining that he loved the boat, had the money to pay for it, he and his man Friday pulled it back across the Hudson River Bridge to take it home to New Jersey. Ralph, the man Friday rode in the boat while Frank Hawthorn drove the truck pulling the boat. When they got to his yard and began to inspect the purchase Ralph stated, “Boss, there is something that rattled every time we hit a bump.” “Lets look for it.” They did and were unable to find it. When they carried the boat back across the bridge to launch it Ralph again rode in the boat and made the same comment, “There is a rattle I can’t seem to find, Boss!” “It’s alright Ralph, we’ll find it some day. Forget it for now.”
    Someday came faster than expected when the first outing took place some hot cheese dip was spilled on the floor. It was Ralph’s job to get it cleaned up. In the process he discovered a storage compartment in the floor of the boat, inside they found the remains of a pregnant woman. The bones had been in the bottom of the boat for ten years. It was Frank’s job to find out who she was, and who killed her. Thus: Bottom Bones!

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  5. Gwyn Ramsey says:

    Love the above blog on Velda and her Cheyenne story. It’s a great read. Velda and I are friends through Women Writing the West. Never knew that Custer had Indian children. I did visit Fort Lincoln in North Dakota on one of my trips north, his last station before the Battle of the Little Big Horn. Quite interesting.

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  6. Velda Brotherton says:

    Hi Gwyn and James and Sharon, Good to have comments from you. Researching this book was so very intriguing. My hubby would constantly send me sites online to take a look at. We found the story of his Cheyenne son, Yellow Swallow in Cheyenne Autumn by Mari Sandoz, but the children are written about in other writings about the Cheyenne, who spoke of others, but they’ve never been confirmed. I so enjoy blogging about the history I love but sometimes wonder if others are just as interested. Blogs like this one show they are.

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  7. Nancy Oswald says:

    I loved the book Cheyenne Autumn and used it for my research for Hard Face Moon, even though it was set during the Sand Creek Massacre which was 1864. The book was a beautiful narrative, and I’d recommend it to anyone.

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  8. Velda Brotherton says:

    Nancy, thanks for the comment. I still pull the book off the shelf regularly and check something. Her research was superb in that and her other books. I wish I had all of them. Thanks for visiting the blog post.

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  9. Colleen Tucker says:

    In younger years I helped cast some TV and movie projects. One actor told me they were to make movie in Arizona about Comanche Moon and wanted a part. Then he heard it was cancelled. Later I found Comanche Moon for $5.00 at Walmart, one of our favorites. We love westerns. We’ve camped some in Arizona but want to go back when we have time. We toured old western town near Tucson where lots of movies were made. No movies made there now that I know of but interesting tour. We toured Custer’s Last Stand a few years ago and camped where one of John Wayne ‘s movies was made. I have collection of arrowheads found on our farm when I was tiny. A Kachina Doll, Black Buffalo, who was blind, was received as a gift. Priceless. His son is on his shoulders to help guide him on their hunt. In junior high our school was named The Indians. As President of PTA I was asked to buy a couple of Kachinas for display in entryway. We bought two real priceless autographed ones for the school. Research was interesting. I found a few arrowheads, a thrill to hold one in your hand made many years ago by a real Indian. I wrote story for Missouri Writers about it. A former neighbor has fabulous collection of unbelievable items found in caves in Arkansas. I found a fat skinner in creek bed when camping. A distant relative pointed out three Indian graves to me on his farm with a promise to never share the information. We had a cabin on a lake where island was out a distance. We floated on air mattress and looked down in water for chips, and a few arrowheads years ago. Favorite story by deceased author Lloyd Durre, entitled “Created of One Blood” self-published. It would make fantastic movie, involves the Trail of Tears era. He gave me 2 copies. I tried to get it made into a movie and raised some money but he passed away and heirs lost interest.It is fabulous story. Would be fantastic movie. I’ll share one with you, Velda, but please return. It is my treasure. He was actor at Shepherd of the Hills, artist and history teacher. Fantastic adventure story. My novel, Legend of the Golden Huaca, would make a great movie, too, so am working on that.It’s set in remote caves of Arkansas involving Conquistadors and hidden Spanish treasure never found. I love your stories. read to enjoy them and then reread to admire your writing skills. Keep writing.

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