Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday and the fiftieth piece in this series. This week’s is a 996-worder (to be read / imagined in an Geordie accent) by octogenarian memoirist, non-fiction and fiction author, and interviewee WH ‘Johnnie’ Johnson.
The flames on Mrs Elstob’s chest always got the blame for what happened. At least as far as Dad was concerned. But he never had a good word to say for her or for her Norman who hadn’t worked since 1928. Whenever Norman complained his leg was giving him gyp, Dad used to say to Mam, “Well, it never lets’m down at openin’ time. He’s at the pub every night at six, leg or no leg.”
But Mam was different. She always saw the good side of people, always wanted to help.
“I’ve never slept a wink all night, hinny,” Mrs Elstob used to tell her. “It’s the flames on me chest.”
And Mam would say, “Oh dear, can I get you somethin’ for it?”
“I can scarcely breathe, missus. There’s no betterness for the flames,” Mrs Elstob would tell her. “Unless you’ve gorra bowl of soup or summick you could let us have.” And then she’d go back into the house, put her head under a towel and snoke up the fumes of Friar’s Balsam.
Not that I knew much about how much the Elstobs scrounged off Mam. I don’t know how she could afford to give anything away. What I do know is that she never let on to Dad. But for me there were more important things in life.
Especially that Wednesday morning in the last week of August when, hard up as they were, Mam and Dad gave me a bike for me birthday. They’d been saving up for it. It wasn’t new but it was beautiful. I rode it every possible minute. On the Friday morning I was still wobbling about. Then, as if by magic, I mastered it. On the Saturday I was riding with no hands. Course, our Maureen was out in the back lane, spying on me.
“I’ll tell if you don’t use both hands,” she kept saying.
At about half-past ten on the Sunday morning, she was there again.
“You’ll have an accident on that bicycle,” she said in her best Convent School voice. “Anyway, you have to be back here in twenty minutes.”
“Dad says. He wants you back. Anyway, it should be obvious why.”
It wasn’t obvious to me.
About ten to eleven when I was leaning me bike on the back lane wall, the Elstobs came out of their back door.
“The batteries’ve gone on the wireless,” Norman said. “We’re gannin’ over to listen to yours.”
Then he saw the bike. He hadn’t seen it before but now he was giving it the once-over, inspecting every part like an expert.
Finally he stood up.
“By, lad,” he said, “wonderful, eh?”
Then Mrs Elstob inspected it.
“Ee, it’s lovely, pet,” she said.
Just then, Mam came out into the lane.
“We’re just lookin’ at the bike here,” Norman said. “By, worra lucky bairn.”
Mam blushed with pleasure and then Mrs Elstob cut in.
“Can he gan a message for us?”
“It’ll only take’m a minute on the bike,” Norman said. “Just up to Hardin’s.”
“Aye, Mam,” I said. “It’ll not take a minute.”
“Worra good bairn,” Mrs Elstob said, pushing a coin into me hand. “Just a bottle of Friar’s Boslum, pet.”
She turned to Mam. “Me chest’s somethin’ awful, hinny.”
“And five Woodbines. And a bottle of Newcastle Brown.” Norman was rubbing his hip. Obviously it was giving him gyp.
“Make sharp, then,” Mam said.
Up at the corner shop I was the only customer. But old Harding only went one speed. He rummaged round in a tangle of skipping ropes, bundles of firewood, kippers and bottles of Tizer.
“Who’s it for?”
I told him.
At last he found it.
“And five Woods, please.”
I told him.
He sniffed again but he gave me the tabs.
“I divn’t sell beer to bairns,” he said. But I got it all the same.
Shortly after eleven o’clock I was home.
It was quiet in the kitchen. Dad sat scowling at the wireless. Our Maureen was staring at the wall. Mam said nothing, just handed the things to the Elstobs.
“Very kind,” Mrs Elstob said.
“Much appreciated,” Norman said.
Then suddenly Dad stood up.
“Hold on,” he said. “Just hold on now.”
You could tell he was angry.
“Now, then,” Mam began to say.
“You an’ all, missus,” he said. “Just be quiet.”
I’d never before heard him speak so sharply to her.
“Now,” he shouted, pointing at the Elstobs. “Get out of this house. I’m sick of your hangin’ about here. I don’t want you in here again. ”
And the Elstobs just turned and went out with not one word.
Dad followed them to the top of the stairs.
“Bugger off,” he shouted after them. “And divn’t come back.”
You could’ve heard him in Jarrow.
“The boy should have been here,” he yelled after them, louder than ever. “Thanks to you two, he wasn’t.”
He came in and went to the window, looking down into the backyard. I’d never seen him so angry.
“He should have been here,” he said again.
And I should have been there. Yes, I should. I should have been there with Mam and Dad and Maureen. To hear Chamberlain. At eleven o’clock. Hear him say the words “… and consequently, this country is now at war with Germany…”
Dad wanted me there. He hadn’t said anything beforehand to his eleven-year-old son. But he wanted him there. On that great, terrible occasion. To hear it. To feel history happening.
And that boy would have been there if it hadn’t been for the flames on Mrs Elstob’s chest and Norman’s beer and baccy.
“And that bike,” Mam used to say later. “That was you. If he hadn’t had that bike…”
Ever after Mam still defended the Elstobs though they never came to the house again. Dad, of course, never wavered and never forgave them.
Nobody ever thought of blaming Adolf Hitler.
I asked Johnnie what prompted this piece and he said…
I had sensible, loving parents – not the sensible, loving ones in the story, by the way – who made what I consider to be a major error on the day war broke out. I was eleven years old and out on my bike that Sunday morning and they didn’t call me in to hear the broadcast. I cannot understand it and have always had some sense of resentment that I missed that important historical moment. I can’t work out why this happened: did they think I was too young to understand? Was my father who served in France from 1916 to 1918 somehow unwilling in a curious sense to draw me into this war? Anyway, when I got in they told me that we were at war and then, just at that dramatic moment, the air-raid sirens started wailing. I think that everyone must have thought that the Germans were pretty quick off the mark.
And by the way, I was an only child. Our Maureen is purely imaginary.
I loved it, thank you!🙂
Johnnie Johnson has been retired since 1988 since which time he has written 25 books including two novels. Most were traditionally published, others, such as the recently published e-travelogue, A VIRGIN IN THE PHILIPPINES, have been self-published. His website is www.johnniejohnson.co.uk.
Johnnie, because he has the original accent, has kindly agreed to record his story for this podcast which will be released on Sunday 2nd December.
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