9 responses to “Red pen no.011 – critique of novel extract by Lianne Simon

  1. Edith

    December 23, 2012 at 6:51 pm

    A great critique. One of the things I love about this section of your blog is how much I learn that I can apply to my own writing. Thank you! xxx

  2. morgenbailey

    December 23, 2012 at 10:11 pm

    Thank you, Edith. 🙂 It’s always easier to read another’s work with clarity – shame we can do it so well for ourselves…

  3. Yvonne Hertzberger

    December 24, 2012 at 12:15 am

    A great critique of a wonderful excerpt. The story drew me in instantly and I felt a close affinoity for Jamie and Kayla. This story will enchant and educate.

  4. morgenbailey

    December 24, 2012 at 7:30 am

    Thank you very much, Yvonne, glad you enjoyed it.

    I’ve emailed both your comments on to Lianne.


  5. Tony

    December 24, 2012 at 10:51 am

    A lovely excerpt, beautifully dissected.

  6. Lianne Simon

    December 24, 2012 at 12:11 pm

    Thank you for the excellent critique, Morgen, 🙂

    • morgenbailey

      December 24, 2012 at 1:20 pm

      You’re so welcome, Lianne. Thank you for being brave enough to submit it.

  7. morgenbailey

    January 9, 2013 at 12:20 pm

    Reblogged this on Morgen's Online Novel Writing Group and commented:

    Lianne’s kindly given me permission to replay my critique of her novel extract. Do let us know what you think.


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