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Morgen’s story review no.150 – OxCrimes 6: Walter Mosley’s The Sin of Dreams

08 Mar

Today’s book review of a single short story (the sixth in the 27-story charity crime anthology OxCrimes collection) is brought to you by yours truly, Morgen Bailey.

I rarely read ‘proper’ books (paperbacks / hardbacks) and I’d wanted to read this collection for a while so bought it as a paperback so I could sit and read at least one short story a day. (I’m also writing short stories for competitions and submissions too and have sent three off in the last week!).

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The OxCrimes Collection

OxCrimesFor 2014, Oxfam and Profile Books have turned to crime in order to raise a further £200,000 for Oxfam’s work. OxCrimes is introduced by Ian Rankin and has been curated by Peter Florence, director of Hay Festival, where it will be launched in May. The stellar cast of contributors will include Mark Billingham, Alexander McCall Smith, Anthony Horowitz, Val McDermid, Peter James, Adrian McKinty, Denise Mina, Louise Welsh and a host of other compelling suspects. Profile Books have raised more than a quarter of a million pounds for Oxfam by publishing OxTales (2009) and OxTravels (9781846684968) (2011).

This collection is available via http://www.amazon.co.uk/OxCrimes-Introduced-Ian-Rankin-Ox-Tales-ebook/dp/B00IJKJTXW and http://www.amazon.com/OxCrimes-Introduced-Ian-Rankin-Ox-Tales-ebook/dp/B00IJKJTXW.

Review of Walter Mosley‘s The Sin of Dreams

This is a short short story (18 standard book pages) so a short review…

Much of the story is in dialogue so a big plus from me, although I didn’t particularly engage with either character in the first section. It didn’t take us to long to learn the topic of the story which was very interesting idea.

For me, the story got going when we skip ahead in time where, thankfully, we stay in one character’s point of view (see below).

We often don’t have surnames in short stories and here there were some interesting ones and some middle names which are very imaginative.

And now for writers…

– in the first section, we are in both characters’ heads too often and too close, blurring the line of who was the main character.

– I always recommend having character names with different beginning letters. One of the main characters in this story is Carly and midway she shares a scene with a (John) Cho which is okay as it is different enough on the page.

– some information I felt was given little bit too late e.g. who the characters are when they’ve been on the scene a while. It’s okay to make the reader wonder but not to the point of distraction.

Conclusion

An interesting and amusing – if not rather weird – tale with equally amusingly named characters including Adonis Balsam and Fred Friendly. There is a fair amount of humour and I especially liked the passage:

“Do you believe in the soul?”

“I’m from Detroit, Mr Lacosta, that is the home of soul.”

It was well-written other than the point of view slips but more suited, I feel, to fans of sci-fi fantasy than crime.

Rating: 4 out of 5.

I shall be back tomorrow with my review of Fred Vargas’ Five Francs Each, the seventh story in this collection.

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Based in Northamptonshire, England, Morgen Bailey (“Morgen with an E”) is a freelance editor, online tutor, prolific blogger, 2015 Head Judge for the annual H.E. Bates Short Story Competition, Head Judge for the NLG Flash Fiction CompetitionRONE 2015 Judge.

As well as a teacher of creative writing (and writing-related I.T.) for her local county council and online, Morgen will be one of five tutors at the 2017 Crime & Publishment alongside crime authors Lin Anderson and Martina Cole!

Morgen’s first love is writing and she is a freelance author of numerous ‘dark and light’ short stories, novels, articles, and very occasional dabbler of poetry. Like her, her blog, https://morgenbailey.wordpress.com, is consumed by all things literary. She is also active on TwitterFacebook along with many others (listed on her blog’s Contact page) and has created five online writing groups. She also runs a free monthly 100-word writing competition where you can win her online creative writing courses!

Her debut novel is the chick lit eBook The Serial Dater’s Shopping List ($0.99 / £0.77) and she has nine others (mostly crime) in the works. She also has eight collections of short stories available (also $0.99 / £0.77 each) – detailed on https://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/books-mine/short-stories.

She also helps other authors with an inexpensive freelance editing and critiquing service (free 1,000-word sample), and welcomes, and actively helps to promote, guest authors on her blog – see opportunities.

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