I rarely read ‘proper’ books (paperbacks / hardbacks) and I’d wanted to read this collection for a while so bought it as a paperback so I could sit and read at least one short story a day. (I’m also writing short stories for competitions and submissions too and have sent three off in the last week!).
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The OxCrimes Collection
For 2014, Oxfam and Profile Books have turned to crime in order to raise a further £200,000 for Oxfam’s work. OxCrimes is introduced by Ian Rankin and has been curated by Peter Florence, director of Hay Festival, where it will be launched in May. The stellar cast of contributors will include Mark Billingham, Alexander McCall Smith, Anthony Horowitz, Val McDermid, Peter James, Adrian McKinty, Denise Mina, Louise Welsh and a host of other compelling suspects. Profile Books have raised more than a quarter of a million pounds for Oxfam by publishing OxTales (2009) and OxTravels (9781846684968) (2011).
This collection is available via http://www.amazon.co.uk/OxCrimes-Introduced-Ian-Rankin-Ox-Tales-ebook/dp/B00IJKJTXW and http://www.amazon.com/OxCrimes-Introduced-Ian-Rankin-Ox-Tales-ebook/dp/B00IJKJTXW.
Review of Christopher Fowler‘s The Caterpillar Flag
This is a short short story (15 standard book pages) so a short review…
I’ve mentioned in a previous story about liking to learn of other countries and cultures, and here we have Spain, which I’ve been to a couple of times but not to the area mentioned (Cadilla).
In the first few pages, there was a lot from the narrator’s point of view where he talks about Lily and her family settling into life in Spain.
There is an innocence to Lily, but it is all so narrator–heavy that it feels like the synopsis of a plot rather than the story itself.
We soon meet a quirky character called Celestia, who is brilliant. Lily, as our main character, should have been more lively but she – through the eyes of the narrator – just seems to be an observer rather than a particular ‘do’er.
One of my favourite lines is, ‘The last of the nuns had died of disappointment in 1973’, and I would have loved this as the story’s first sentence.
And now for writers…
- I have also said in previous stories about the use of characters with the same first initial, and here we have Lily and Lola; both four-lettered L names, albeit Lola a more minor character.
- I have also mentioned before about being careful with genders and here we have three females in one paragraph: Lily, the Queen, and Celestia, and the ‘she’ in the subsequent paragraph – although I know is Lily – could have referred to Celestia as she was the last mentioned female in the previous paragraph.
- A little later on, a character is shouting and waving at someone behind Lily. Then the next sentence is, ‘She had a parcel wrapped in brown paper…’, and because we have just had Lily’s name, it could be read that Lily had the parcel, rather than it belonging to the woman shouting (Maria).
- Another editing error that we have had before is to not have a clean section break where time passes, and in this instance we go from one day to the following morning just changing paragraph, rather than leaving a blank line then starting a new non-indented section.
- And finally, for those of you who have been tracking the amount of ‘well’s used at the beginning of dialogue (as in hesitation) in the stories, we fortunately only have one this time. <Hoorah!>
There was lots of authorial voice where the narrator says things like, ‘how her father wouldn’t have the same temptations, whatever that meant’, which I liked, but for me there was far too much from the narrator rather than the characters themselves.
Although this is the crime anthology, there was very little crime in it (a brief mention partway through then a hurried mysterious hint at the end), but it didn’t really matter as it was a charming story.
Rating: 4 out of 5.
I shall be back tomorrow with my review of Louise Welsh’s Reflections in Unna, the eighteenth story in this collection.
Based in Northamptonshire, England, Morgen Bailey (“Morgen with an E”) is a freelance editor, online tutor, prolific blogger, 2015 Head Judge for the annual H.E. Bates Short Story Competition, Head Judge for the NLG Flash Fiction Competition, RONE 2015 Judge.
As well as a teacher of creative writing (and writing-related I.T.) for her local county council and online, Morgen will be one of five tutors at the 2017 Crime & Publishment alongside two top crime authors (details t.b.a.).
Morgen’s first love is writing and she is a freelance author of numerous ‘dark and light’ short stories, novels, articles, and very occasional dabbler of poetry. Like her, her blog, https://morgenbailey.wordpress.com, is consumed by all things literary. She is also active on Twitter, Facebook along with many others (listed on her blog’s Contact page) and has created five online writing groups. She also runs a free monthly 100-word writing competition where you can win her online creative writing courses!
Her debut novel is the chick lit eBook The Serial Dater’s Shopping List ($0.99 / £0.77) and she has nine others (mostly crime) in the works. She also has eight collections of short stories available (also $0.99 / £0.77 each) – detailed on https://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/books-mine/short-stories.
She also helps other authors with an inexpensive freelance editing and critiquing service (free 1,000-word sample), and welcomes, and actively helps to promote, guest authors on her blog – see opportunities.
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