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Results of Morgen’s 100-word competition: June 2017

Hello everyone. The sharp-eyed amongst you will know that these results are super early. They should be announced a week next Friday, 14th July, but (a) I’ve been more organised this month and (b) I have a ridiculously busy few weeks coming up (mostly client editing) so this helps me tick another job off the list… and I’m sure no one listed minds knowing ahead of time. Back to the news…

This month I received 27 entries from 19 authors. I’m pleased to say that only one story was disqualified this month and that was for being 101 words. Fortunately the author had submitted two other stories which were spot on, as the cliché goes.

The winning stories are ones that I reacted most favourably to. They were clever, surprising, eek-making (in a good way), or gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.

You may have chosen a different order or indeed not placed one or more of them so if you entered and didn’t find your story / stories here, don’t lose heart. You probably only just missed out (there were originally eight highly commended then I whittled down to the maximum three) so do enter new stories this month*, next month, whenever you like (but not in advance!). It’s an ongoing competition and free, so you could win at any time. There were new and familiar names this month so anyone could win… it’s all dependent upon whether your story grabs me, for whatever reason (whether it be clever, funny, unusual, quirky, or sweet).

A new recent feature… there are some ‘Honourable Mentions’. They don’t win anything but they were so close to being Highly Commended that I wanted them to know how close they came. It’s still something for them to put on their CVs.

*The theme for July is ‘strangers on a train’ and you can submit your entries at any time up to midnight (UK time) on Monday 31st July.

While I’m talking of competitions, I’m the new Competitions Calendar columnist for Writer’s Forum magazine (from the September 2017 edition) so if you’ve had any experience of entering or judging competitions, do let me know via this online form or you can email me.

So without further ado, below are the successful entries this month.

First place (winning free access to three of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £60 / $60) or a free edit and critique of up to 2,000 words (worth £14 / $18):

Lesley Mace with ‘Grimm’

Gretel kneads, as yeast unlocks the bread. Dough fattens in tins.

Hansel swings above her in a cage. She can’t bear to look at what it’s made from.

Its lock whispers, ‘Flee! Go home, little girl.’

Gingerbread men shout of sugary death. Bread screams – cooking. Hansel fattens.

Blind witch, tricked by Gretel, believes the boy’s not meaty. But she’s impatient. Today’s the day she’s chosen for sweet feeding.

Gretel opens the oven door – crone bends, testing the heat. Gretel pushes her in and bolts it fast.

Hansel bursts the cage of bones. Followed by blistering shrieks, they escape, hand-in-hand, into the forest.

Second place (winning free access to two of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £40 / $40) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,500 words (worth £11 / $14):

M W Brown with ‘On Familiar Terms’

The British soldier froze at the sight of the dark eye of Berthold’s rifle. The man, around the same age as his son, babbled incomprehensibly, dropped his pistol and reached towards his pocket.

‘Halt!’

‘Bitte…’ The soldier’s tear-filled eyes pleaded with him and Berthold nodded.

A picture of a smiling woman holding a baby was thrust towards him. Berthold wondered if his own son had begged for his life in Reims. It was a generation of fatherless children and childless parents. Overwhelmed with sudden fatigue, Berthold turned his back and dropped his rifle.

‘Danke,’ he heard as he walked away.

Third place (winning free access to one of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9):

Laura Besley with ‘Resting Place’

Lena floats around the house she shared with William for forty-seven years. Faded wallpaper, threads hanging from cushions; so many things she never noticed.

She drifts downstairs, lured by the myriad of voices. ‘Wonderful woman,’ her friend Betty says. ‘I’ll miss her,’ Sally-from-next-door says.

Forty-eight years ago Lena fled Germany, a country which had let her down. In England she worked, she married, she never quite settled, the black guilt firmly nestled between her ribs.

Today, listening to the unguarded words of others, she feels the blackness drift away. Maybe now she can settle in her resting place of choice.

Highly commended (winning my Entering Writing Competitions course worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9) – in alphabetical order:

Alyson Faye with ‘Visiting with Dad’
Jennie Gardner with ‘When the Penny Drops’
Lestie Mulholland with ‘For the Birds’

Congratulations, everyone. The entries for this month are already drifting in. Remember, you can send up to three per month so rather than miss out on a chance by sending one story, do submit more.

As mentioned above, I’m the new Competitions Calendar columnist for Writer’s Forum magazine (from the September 2017 issue) so if you’ve had any experience of entering or judging competitions, do let me know via this online form or you can email me.

If you’ve enjoyed these stories and / or just want to leave a comment, please do so below and / or you can email me at morgen@morgenbailey.com., although I won’t (can’t) discuss forthcoming entries unless it’s a general query.

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Results of Morgen’s 100-word competition: May 2017

09 Jun

Hello everyone. This month I received 31 entries from 16 authors. There was a mixture of amusing and entertaining but the ones I chose were, for me, the ones that summed up the prompt of ‘comic’.

Four were disqualified for only being 99 words (no obvious reason why) and sadly three were the only entries by those (new to this competition) authors. One should actually have been 98 as two words weren’t hyphened that should have been.

Every month, I say to check your word count (both via whichever document software you use and manually) and DO send in more than one entry because if you’re disqualified for your one and only story (or two and only) then you’ve missed out for the whole month.

One lost a point for having a ‘gong’ instead of a ‘going’*. That may sound tough but most, if not all, competitions will do this. It’s only fair to the other entrants. So please read, re-read, and read your stories again. *It’s a shame because that story particularly tickled me as it featured a character (even the same name) that featured in one of my novels.

The winning stories are ones that I reacted most favourably to. They were clever, surprising, eek-making (in a good way), or gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.

*The theme for June is ‘German’ and you can submit your entries at any time up to midnight (UK time) on Friday 30^th June.

So without further ado, below are the successful entries this month:

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Guest post: Flash Memoir: Writing Prompts to Get You Flashing by Jane Hertenstein

07 Jun

Today’s guest blog post, on the topic of the delightful short short, is brought to you by Jane Hertenstein.

Flash Memoir: Writing Prompts to Get You Flashing

My writing was languishing. After a number of brilliant early successes, I suddenly found myself remaindered. Hot dogs seemed to have a longer shelf life than the novel I had just slaved over for five years. I couldn’t face another long slog. Let alone the money—the deal I got was negligible. Smaller than the poo I scooped up on the sidewalk after the dog.

Back to the beginning.

I’d sit in front of the keyboard and daydream, or play Solitaire, my latest obsession. I needed some positive reinforcement and fast. But what did I know outside of my own existence. With that, I hit upon the idea of memoir, or at least using autobiographical details to enhance my fiction. I was also at the same time experimenting with flash.

I quickly typed up a flash inspired simply by a friend who likes to keep her cell phone handy, as in tucked inside her bra. My brain flashed back to my grandmother. Thus, I wrote “Granny’s Pockets.” After lunch I came back and edited it down to 100 words and submitted it to Friday Flash Fiction, (http://www.fridayflashfiction.com/100-word-stories/grannys-pockets-by-jane-hertenstein) where it was accepted and posted by the end of the afternoon.

Well, that was instant gratification!

At my blog Memoirous (http://memoirouswrite.blogspot.com), which I use as a platform to publicize my I started a column called Hot Flash, hoping to spark memories with my readers/writers. After compiling the best of these, I am launching an eBook, Flash Memoir: Writing Prompts to Get You Flashing (available shamelessly EVERYWHERE!).

Sometimes all it takes is a nudge to get the engine of memory to turn over. Once started memories, whether invited or not, continue to roll over us. What one needs to do is create a habit of acting upon these flashes by quickly jotting them down before they disappear. Using a process I call Write Right Now, I encourage readers to do just this: build a portfolio of small flash memories that will eventually be expanded upon or become the foundation for a scene. Memories are the building blocks to most everything we write.

For some of us sitting down to transcribe or pen a memoir can be an overwhelming task. I recommend approaching it in bite-size pieces or rather applying flash. By freeze framing a moment, a memory, like a camera snapshot, and dwelling there you are creating the foundation for longer memoir, a jumping off place to expand upon later. (see my other eBook, Freeze Frame: How to Write Flash Memoir)

The nice thing about flash is that it can be unresolved. There often isn’t enough space/word count to fully explore the memory. And, like so many of our memories, there is an undercurrent of lose threads, fuzzy blurred beginnings and endings with little or no significance. They simply are.

So set yourself the task to sit down and set down these memories. Perhaps, begin with a prompts from my book, Flash Memoir: Writing Prompts to Get You Flashing.

Taste is a huge trigger—recall Proust in In Search of Lost Time or also known as Remembrance of Things Past where he writes about involuntary memory instigated by a simple cookie. Dunking a tea biscuit can easily lead one on a journey into the past. Some call this nostalgia or déjà vu.

Write Right Now: Think about some unforgettable taste that still lingers in your mouth. I once wrote about my mother’s fruitcake, archival and unforgettable, also useful as a door stopper. Write right now.

Thank you, Jane. That was fascinating.

Jane Hertenstein’s current obsession is flash. She is the author of over 40 published stories, a combination of fiction, creative non-fiction, and blurred genre both micro and macro. Her latest book Freeze Frame: How to Write Flash Memoir is available through Amazon. Jane is a 2-time recipient of a grant from the Illinois Arts Council. She can be found blogging about Flash Memoir at http://memoirouswrite.blogspot.com.

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and from this blog, my guests who have written on this topic are… Alberta Ross, Helen M Hunt, Morgen Bailey, Roger Hurn, Sarah Grace Logan, and Warren Bull.

If you would like to write a writing-related guest post for my blog then feel free to email me with an outline of what you would like to write about. Guidelines on guest-blogs. There are other options listed on opportunities-on-this-blog.

Flash Fiction Friday 191: 6-word stories batch 44

26 May

Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday and the one hundred and ninety-first piece in this series. This week’s is the forty-fourth bunch of 6-word stories by a variety of authors, together with their 6-word biographies!

6-word stories

by Asra Choudhury – thinker, feeler, aspiring writer

Whiskey, jazz, sleepless night; playing solo.
Fire, water, wind, earth – distant reality.
I played your rules to lose.
Profanity thus became the absolute endgame.
Epitaph: finally she found her home.
Crimson, could be blood or love.
Take my doppelganger – she collects souls.
You and I complete the yin-yang.
I kiss my prince, the frog.

by Carol Pryke – trying hard to write.

He went. He won. So good.
He loved and lost, then cried.
Storms, wind. Vast damage. Eventually calm.
Sunbathing, burning, swimming, cooling off, drowning.
Wedding dress. Driving too fast. Shroud.
Church. Vows. Speeding. Morgue. Shroud.
Slipping. Sliding. Submerging. Sinking. Sunk.
Father’s gun. Murdered spouse. Hangman’s noose.
Stealing sweets. Robbing banks. Prison cell.
Edit. Delete. Send. Rejection. Write.

by Chong Teck SIM – Singapore, Bookworm, Volunteer

Huge lighting flashes. Shaking in bed.
Walking cane. Uneven ground. Tense muscles.
Flu season. New strain. Packed hospitals.
First-time model. Jittery bugs. Runway mishap.
Precocious student. Multi lingual education. Sought after translator.
Male model. Aquamarine eyes. Screaming fans.
Charity event. Bad economy. Few donors.
A creeping shadow advances. Loud screams…
Failed automobile business. Drinking until morning.
Classical Chinese. Beginner’s level. Already confusing.

by Mark K – a writer? Trying hard.

Humpty Dumpty’s a really good egg.
Rolex TV, you gotta watch it.
Snap crack ’n’ pop. Osteopath fails.
Wanna break bones? Let’s get cracking.
Boomerangs’ return, and so will I.
He tumbled harder than Jericho’s walls.
Eyes sting? Don’t snort chilli… Fool.”
“Speak louder please, I have tinnitus.”
A priest will always cross you.
Is there anybody there? Yeah. A ghost.

by Peggy Schimmelman – writer, poet, dribbler, drabbler

He forgot his dirty laundry, witch.
Surprise sixtieth birthday party? Celebrate this.
Your wife died of boredom, sir.
Back it up next time, crybaby.
Sorry, honey. Stolen husbands aren’t returnable.

by Rehanna writes to silence internal chatter

Attempted a five-word story! Failed. Grr.
I came, I saw, I fled.
She sells seashells… he crushes them.
Their eyes met. Then slid apart.
Once, a Londoner spoke while commuting!
One, two, three, four – I forgot.
You think this is a story?
‘Once upon a time’, she began.
‘Drop the gun! Ow, my toe.’
A six-word restriction can inspire trepidation.

by Steve Lodge – writer specialising in gibberish

His sinister visitor wasn’t even odd.
She is learning a new language.
This is exactly what it seems.
Draw me closer, nibble my ear.
Ice skating makes my teeth itch.
Let me caress your gorgeous shoulders.
Let me look into your eyes.
I would rather not eat courgettes.
Bad planning never made life easy.
Several hours later, he made toast.

and then three from yours truly… Morgen Bailey, Morgen With an E

Country House Rescue. Epitome of Britain.
Underrated medium. Lost weight. Became small.
Shooting. TV documentary? No, murder.

Thank you, everyone.

If you’d like to submit your 6-worders (up to ten per blog post, although you can send as many as you like and I’ll either pick the best ones or if I like most / all of them, schedule ahead) and / or 500-word max. stories for consideration for Flash Fiction Friday take a look here.

Results of Morgen’s 100-word competition: April 2017

14 May

Hello everyone. This month I received 39 entries from 20 authors, some funny, some sad, and as you’ll see, I’ve picked a variety.

One was disqualified for being 99 words (with no obvious reason why, i.e. no added punctuation that didn’t count as a word) which was a shame, especially as it was submitted on 1st April! Fortunately the author had submitted two other stories. However one of those had an extra ‘to’ in it so deleting that took the story down to 99 words. A story by another multi-entrant was effectively 99 as it had an extra ‘the’ in it. Again a great story but again, two others to choose from.

Another (from a newbie) had a rogue ‘said’ so removing it took the story down to 99 words. Sadly, it was the only story from that author, although I did receive two revised versions of the same story which, as per the rules, I didn’t accept. Another 99-worder was so because it had a row of asterisks which don’t count as a word (as per the rules) and although from a regular entrant, it was their only one this month so their opportunity ended there.

Finally another story was disqualified for having no (apparent) relevance to the theme of ‘fool’.

PLEASE read and re-read your stories before submitting them. This also shows the importance of sending in three stories.

Another was disqualified for being two words over… because the words were connected with ellipses (…) so when separated, pushed the word count over (see the rules on this matter) which was a real shame because it was a really clever story (Beatles themed – I’m a big fan!). Fortunately, again, the author had sent two other stories, both on the word count. Yay.

The winning stories are ones that I reacted most favourably to. They were clever, surprising, eek-making (in a good way), or gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. You may have chosen a different order or indeed not placed one or more of them so if you entered and didn’t find your story / stories here, don’t lose heart. You probably only just missed out (there were originally eight highly commended then I whittled down to the maximum three) so do enter new stories this month*, next month, whenever you like. It’s an ongoing competition and free, so you could win at any time. There were new and familiar names this month so anyone could win… it’s all dependent upon whether your story grabs me, for whatever reason (whether it be clever, funny, unusual, quirky, or sweet).

For the first time ever, and I may well do this again, there are some ‘Honorable Mentions’. They don’t win anything but they were so close to being Highly Commended that I wanted them to know how close they came. It’s still something for them to put on their CVs.

*The theme for May is ‘comic’, which doesn’t just have to be about humour – there is more than one meaning of a word – and you can submit your entries (do send three!) at any time up to midnight (UK time) on Wednesday 31st May.

So without further ado, below are the successful entries this month.

First place (winning free access to three of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £60 / $60) or a free edit and critique of up to 2,000 words (worth £14 / $18):

Ash Nazir with ‘Master of Disguise’

The Job Centre adviser stared at the claimant. “Why the long face?”
“Little mishap,” Bottom said. “With a feisty fairy. Turned my head into a donkey’s. Will it affect my benefits?”
“As long as you’re available for work. What can you offer an employer?”
He smiled, showing his goofy teeth. “Laughter and fun. I was a Fool for Queen Titania and King Oberon.”
“Why did you leave?”
“Short contract. Only for midsummer.”
The adviser perused the form. “How will you fit into an office environment?”
“Like this.” Bottom stuck a moustache on his snout and put on some glasses. “Ta-da!”

Second place (winning free access to two of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £40 / $40) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,500 words (worth £11 / $14):

Paul Isaac with ‘Not Okay’

Caught adrift in a supermarket aisle, grief, pure and simple, washed through me like a wave. I hastily concocted cover and dropped some canned food onto my foot.
‘These damned hands!’ I said, forcing a smile through freshly salted cheeks. ‘Help me pick these up will you?’
‘No.’ My son’s eyes were smouldering. ‘You’re not hurt. You’re crying. Again. You’re not fooling anyone,’ he sighed. ‘Just admit it.’
‘I’m-‘
Ten years young and freshly motherless, it should be me keeping him afloat. An approaching sea of faces whispered their symphony of sympathy.
‘I’m…’
Worse. They circled with concern.
‘I’m fine.’

Joint third place (winning free access to one of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9):

Carol Pryke with ‘Dinner Four Too’

Zak perused his handiwork. He was pleased Chef had let him loose on menu preparation.
Starters: Crawn Poptail. Carrot Sloop. Pish Flatter.
Main course: Chigh and pips. Gammon and pony apple. Post rork.
Sweat course: Strawberry pool. Cares and mustard. Clueberries and bream. Janana and Belly.
“Oh, what a choice,” he mused. “Hey, Boss, done the menu.”
“Sure ya spelt it right today, Zak? ‘Old beef and salad’ yesterday was not very appetising. Nor was ‘Scrumbled Oggs’.”
Grabbing the screwed-up paper, Chef waved his ladle about. “Fool. Haven’t you learned anything? It should be gammon and pineapple, NOT pony apple.”

Laura Besley with ‘Farewell’

‘Angela?’ I lean over the partition.
She blinks once before looking up from her computer. ‘Hi, Derek.’
‘I’m leaving.’
‘Oh, right. See you on Monday.’
‘No, I’ve got a new job. I won’t be back.’
She blinks three times. ‘But?’
‘But?’
‘But you can’t.’
‘I can’t? What do you mean?’ My heart clacks as quickly as the keys on the computers around me.
‘Nothing. Ignore me. Good luck.’
‘Thank you. I… uh… no, nothing. Take care.’
She nods. ‘You too.’
I walk away, turning back only once, to see her blinking rapidly whilst looking out at the early evening sky.

Highly commended (winning my Entering Writing Competitions course worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9) – in alphabetical order:

Helen Jones with ‘Strawberry Fool’
M W Brown with ‘Phoneutria’
Sarah Treadwell with ‘Nobody’s Fool’

And new! Honorable mentions (not winning anything but only narrowly missing out and still looking good on their CV) – in alphabetical order:

Danielle Henderson with ‘A Brief Encounter’
Elizabeth Kearney with‘Joy Fool’
Jennie Gardner with ‘Knicker-bicker-glory’
Pamela Humphrey with ‘Just A Fool’
Sibbo with ‘The Takedown’

Congratulations, everyone. The entries for this month are already drifting in. Remember, you can send up to three per month so rather than miss out on a chance by sending one story, do submit more.

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Results of Morgen’s 100-word competition: March 2017

14 Apr

Hello everyone. This month I received 42 entries from 26 authors. An interesting mixture this time and several newbies to the competition. Welcome!

Two were disqualified for being too long: 102 and 101 word, although with the latter there was a ‘the’ missing so should have been 102) which was a shame as it was my favourite of three submitted from that author, a regular to this competition. The 102 was from the only entry from a newbie. PLEASE everyone, check your word count and do submit three stories to give yourself a better chance of getting through to the judging.

Three others were two words two short, and one, even with a hyphenated word, would have still been too short. Another was 97 words, although the 98 had a series of hyphens which doesn’t count as a word so was actually 97. Fortunately, again, both these authors had also submitted two other stories but it was a great one so a real shame. The other was had a two-word title so I’m guessing the author included the title. It was a first-time entrant.

Even more of a shame was one, the only submission by one of the new entrants, that had to be disqualified for being a word over the 100 words because the author had hyphenated two words that shouldn’t have been. Again, it was a brilliant story that didn’t make the competition as the author hadn’t because it was his only entry. Every month, I encourage you all to submit three stories and this just goes to show how you could miss out.

Another story was disqualified for being 99 words but contained a hyphenated word so could have been miscounted. Fortunately the author sent in another story which was the 100 words.

The winning stories are ones that I reacted most favourably to. They were clever, surprising, eek-making (in a good way), or gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. The entries were especially strong this month with many scoring 8/10, narrowly missing out.

You may have chosen a different order or indeed not placed one or more of them so if you entered and didn’t find your story / stories here, don’t lose heart. You probably only just missed out (there were originally eight highly commended then I whittled down to the maximum three) so do enter new stories this month*, next month, whenever you like. It’s an ongoing competition and free, so you could win at any time. There were new and familiar names this month so anyone could win… it’s all dependent upon whether your story grabs me, for whatever reason (whether it be clever, funny, unusual, quirky, or sweet).

*The theme for April is ‘fool’ and you can submit your entries at any time up to midnight (UK time) on Sunday 30^th April.

So without further ado, below are the successful entries this month.

First place (winning free access to three of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £60 / $60) or a free edit and critique of up to 2,000 words (worth £14 / $18):

Tony Rogers with ‘A Furry Friend for Many’

The girl flitted daintily through the rose garden to Norman’s pet enclosure.

“Hello, missy, back today then?” asked Norman. “You here to sketch my little rabbit again?”

Her pencil skittered across the drawing pad reproducing an uncanny likeness of the bunny.

“Yes, Mr Norman. He’s so pretty. What’s his name?”

“He’s got no name yet. What do you think, young lady?”

“I think he looks like… a Peter! He’ll be famous one day, just you mark my words.” With that she merrily danced away.

“Alright then,” called Norman, “whatever you say, Peter’s fine. But famous? Ha, Miss Potter… we’ll see.”

Second place (winning free access to two of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £40 / $40) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,500 words (worth £11 / $14):

N. Strickland Hawkins with ‘Escape’

Her salvation was in Norman’s bunny. Norman had loved it until it was in tatters – he had been able to love when he was a child. She knew she had to leave after he broke her jaw. The next time, he might kill her. How much was a bus ticket?

Every day, going through his pants pockets, a quarter there, a dollar there, praying he wouldn’t notice. Now she fingered the side seam of its body, put her thumbs inside, ripped it almost in half, sending a shower of coins onto the table. Was it enough? She began to count.

Third place (winning free access to one of my online creative writing courses (currently worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9):

Sue Borgersen with ‘Catching Swiftie’

Norman is a black greyhound. He lives with Polly, his woman. She watches videos of his previous life; racing in Florida.

“There gooooes Swiftie!” screams The Starter.

Norman flies, his muscles rippling. He chases Swiftie, the lure.

Norman never catches Swiftie, never wins. So he’s retired at two years old. A failure.

Polly is at Walmart. She spots the squeaky fluffy bunny in the pet toys.

“Here’s your very own Swiftie,” she tells Norman.

Norman rips and tears the stuffed brown bunny like a hound incensed, finishing with a big swallow of the squeak.

Written all over his face: success.

Highly commended (winning my Entering Writing Competitions course worth £20 / $20) or a free edit and critique of up to 1,000 words (worth £7 / $9) – in alphabetical order:

Michelle Perry with ‘Memories in the Attic’
Sarah Treadwell with ‘Norman’s Bunny No More’
Carol Pryke with ‘A Bunny Called Norman’

Congratulations, everyone. The entries for this month are already drifting in. Remember, you can send up to three per month so rather than miss out on a chance by sending one story, do submit more.

If you’ve enjoyed these stories and / or just want to leave a comment, please do so below and / or you can email me at morgen@morgenbailey.com, although I won’t (can’t) discuss forthcoming entries unless it’s a general query.

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Flash Fiction Friday 190: 6-word stories batch 43

31 Mar

Welcome to Flash Fiction Friday and the one hundred and ninetieth piece in this series. This week’s is the forty-third bunch of 6-word stories by a variety of authors, together with their 6-word biographies!

6-word stories
by Alyssa Drake, helping readers lose themselves